Date: 04/02/23 12:33 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
I have left a review on another story of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too!
Date: 05/04/17 11:00 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
This is SO HOT!! And bittersweet, the underlying drama really adds to the amazing smut to make this one such a good story.
Date: 05/02/17 05:53 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Do I really have words to describe this ? Yes ? No ? I don't think so. That was so HOT and awesome. I love the way you write and the thing you have for details.
I was so sad at the end because this is only a one-shot and I could have read so much more of this !
Thank you for this delightful story !
Date: 04/26/17 02:03 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
A really hot story and I'm a little sad that it was just a One-Shot. I could have read more. A big praise and a huge thank you for this really fantastic story.
Angeleyes
Date: 04/24/17 01:57 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Ohmygod this was awesome! When it ended I really wished there would've been more to this. I really liked the setting of this story and sdskfefbdl. Your descriptions were so delicious to read, I loved how you brought out Tom's thoughts. Gahh you're so good. I think your writing style was rather unique and I enjoyed reading a lot, it was a nice experience, like music to my brains? hahaha. I'm a writer myself too so I have high standards so it was very nice to find high quality writing. Ps. I absolutely love possessive Tom and his love for Bill, it was described so perfectly
Date: 04/21/17 12:17 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
HOT*AS*FUCK
Date: 04/20/17 09:15 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
That was extremely porny, but nothing I haven't read before ;) I'm actually surprised nobody walked in, ruining the moment. I honestly expected it to happen! Lol Fantastic writing though. You got my mind spinning. Now if only I could post a few dozen moon emojis.
Date: 04/18/17 05:00 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
I don't even have words to properly review this beautiful work of art. Tom loves the making out part, I love that, bc we all know he's the softie in the relationship. The backstory of Bill not letting anyone else fuck him - oooooh love love love. And obviously Tom loved that too. And can we talk about the sex? Allllll my favorite things, starting with rimming Bill YASSSSSSSSSS INDEED. Lovely action and positions - in Tom's lap, doggy, against the tiles, omg this story is so perfect. Happy THFiversary Hayley! You were my first TH fic EVER and I have LOVED YOU EVER SINCE! xoxoxoxoxo
Date: 04/18/17 04:02 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
thank u for sharing your art...bc this is art for me. Straight to my favs. !!
Date: 04/18/17 08:05 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Fjdwukd ehalq0qjfuonanp1r y#!!###!##!!!!!! Uhh...and...AAASAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!! Too much. Dead fangirl.
Date: 04/18/17 03:14 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Fantastic. Certainly lives up to the title. Hot and steamy twincest, what could be better xx
Date: 04/17/17 04:25 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Oh my gosh it was so good!
Date: 04/17/17 10:57 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Fuckkkkkk.
That was even hotter second time round. I love love LOVE this, it's so delicious and steamy and hot and so fucking good, Hayley. Your writing will always always be my absolute favourite, I can never get enough of it. Just like the twins can never get enough of each other ;) This is exactly what happened during their spa trip, I'm sure. Sauna sex, pool sex, drunk sex, bathrobe sex, ALL THE SEX.
Thanks for sharing this gem, and happy THFiversary!!!!! So glad you're still around :)
Date: 04/17/17 08:37 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Well.... that was hot ;) ;)
Date: 04/17/17 07:52 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
This is just so awesome! I can't stop reading all your stories, I really love how you write them! :)
Date: 04/17/17 06:00 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
this was a really good story!!
Date: 04/17/17 05:03 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
HOT HOT HOT and fucking perfect
Date: 04/17/17 03:34 am Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
That was so hot! Kudos to them for gathering the strength to have steamy sex in a sauna - I can barely sit still when im in one lol! I love how there's always a sprinkle of fluff and emotions in every story you write, no matter how PWP you describe it, I can still see the setting and situation behind any of it and I recognize it to be so strictly theirs :) loved it and congratulations again for your 10 years here d84;d84;d84;
Date: 04/16/17 11:39 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Happy 10th years anniversary! I'm so happy you're still around posting stories, I've loved you twins since I discovered THF 8 years ago (can't believe how long it's been!). Receiving the notification telling me you posted something new always makes me smile. Thank you for sharing your talent with us for the past 10 years!
Date: 04/16/17 08:48 pm Title: Bill liked to go on vacation a lot
Lovely and hot! Always get excited when I see a new one from you! :) :) :)
