Date: 06/21/08 05:24 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
I love this story soooo much. I mean the way you portray the characters is amazing I CAN'T wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: -blushes- Omg, thank you!^^ You made me smile, so I'll try to make you smile and update ASAP, deal? =D
Date: 06/21/08 05:18 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
I was so happy to see this updated!
please write more! :D
Author's Response: yay! I'm glad!^^ And I'm writing, I'm writing. :P
Date: 06/21/08 05:02 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
You really should continue, I miss the next chapter already!
Author's Response: I was just working on it, I swear my eyes are closing. xD Hopefully soon.:P Danke!
Date: 06/21/08 04:20 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
I was too hoping, that Gustav would be different! But I quess not ;(
This is nice.. Still. Though the time between part 2 and part 3 was just too long! It was mean of you. Don't do that again. (I almost couldn't believe my eyes when I saw you had posted a new chapter!)
Now to the real comment:
You write nicely and the pace of the plot is good.
I just wish you could get more contents to the chapters.
I mean that it seems you now have a (small-ish) scene per chapter and I think it might be more rewarding for the reader if there would be more stuff in a chap. I know that flashes the "more work" -sign in your head :D but maybe it doesn't have to mean exactly that.
I hope you understand what I mean. And I believe you'll figure something out 'cause you seem like a smart girl. ;)
Just need to mention:
From my opinion Tom is a bit too hateful... He should be at least a bit more open. How the heck do you break through that wall without it being too fictional? Well, I quess you'll show it to me at some point. Right? :D
That's all this time. Please, continue...ASAP!
With love,
Gry
Author's Response: Thank you for this long review!^^ I wasn't planning on keeping you waiting for so long, I would never! It just happened, my head went blank. So sorry, really. Yeah, I know what you mean cause I think so myself but you see, I was dying to post this chapter as soon as possible so you can probably see that it (especially the ending) is written in a rush. I'm sorry if it is too short and if the scenes end too soon, I'll make sure to write longer scenes next time.:P About Tom, I don't know that yet myself, lol. I'm writing as I go so I hope you're wrong and I'll be able to do it.;P Thank you again.
Date: 06/21/08 04:15 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
love this!! more more more!!
Author's Response: You'll get more.:) Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 06/21/08 04:11 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
Aww, finally ^^. I've been waiting for so long. I forgive you though! Just remeber to update sooner this time -giggle-. 'cause i cant wait for more. xD
Author's Response: -lets out a sigh of relief- Thank you, honey. :P I know I'm awful, lol. Sometimes ideas pop into my head in the middle of the night, but then there are days when my head is completely empty. I'm working on the next chapter and hopefully I'll have it out a lot sooner than this one. Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 06/21/08 04:01 pm Title: Aut Viam Inveniam Aut Faciam
I like this very much. :D
I think Bill is got some serious issues but I kind of get why he does. All does people don't really like him they just want him for his looks. I bet that's it's irresistible for him to get to know someone that doesn't want to kiss his ass :-p
I really looking forward to read more of this story so I hope you update soon ;-)
Author's Response: Thank you for this wonderful review.:) And I'll really try to post the next part faster this time. I'm already working on it.:P
Date: 05/24/08 11:01 am Title: Me Vexat Pede
LOL! Someone who didn't fall under his spell? I hope you continue this ^_^
Author's Response: =) Thank you for reviewing! And yes, I really am working on it, but honestly. I have no idea what happened to my inspiration. >.< -pouts- Oh well.
Date: 05/15/08 08:18 am Title: Mundus Vult Decipi
hey, you!
where's the new chapter, huh?
YOU PROMISED TT_TT
Author's Response: *puppy eyes* I know I promised it and I'm working on it, but I'm in the middle of a terrible, massive writer's block. Don't think I ever had so many problems with continuing the story before.>.< I'm terribly sorry and hope you guys don't hate me but I don't really know what to do. *cries* I hope I'll manage to write it soon, cause I hate keeping you wait. =(
Date: 05/07/08 08:38 am Title: Me Vexat Pede
This story is so nice, really original and stuff :D
I canīt wait until the next chapter is up.
Just do not rush the story, itīs awesome! :D
Author's Response: Thank you so much!^^ Well, I'm not really rushing myself, am I? *hides* I know it's taking me ages, but my mind is blank.:(
Date: 04/29/08 09:46 am Title: Me Vexat Pede
wow! tom can resist the famous bill kaulitz? i dont believe it! haha... update!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! *hides* I got stuck, I don't know how to continue. >.< I'll try to pull myself together 'cause you guys are just amazing with all these beautiful reviews.
Date: 04/23/08 02:11 pm Title: Me Vexat Pede
xD Tom mumblig somthing made me laught jijiji...
I want to read the next chap :) soon!!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. I'll try to write something soon.
Date: 04/21/08 09:18 pm Title: Me Vexat Pede
Awh... Bill is all blush-y around Tom :3.
Anyways, I can't wait to see the emerging of Tom's feelings for Bill, but I guess he'll hate him for a good couple more chapter,s, eh? Either way, this is a refreshing break from all the 'Bill is the looonnnner ouuucaaast' stories on this site (Not to say they aren't good, but ya` know what I mean)
Either way, I can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: Thank u for this lovely review.<3 Yeah, my intetnion was to write soemthing different, so I'm really happy that it seemed to have worked. (btw, sry for my terrible english at the moment =sleepy :D)
Date: 04/20/08 12:49 am Title: Mundus Vult Decipi
I LOVE IT, It's so different.
could you make sure that you'll keep writing this? It's very interesting and I love your character
Author's Response: Aw, thanks.^^ I'll most definately keep writing this, it's just that I don't have that much free time so it might happen that it'll take me ages to update. >.<
Date: 04/19/08 03:14 pm Title: Me Vexat Pede
loved it update sooooonnnn!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! And about update.. *hides* I'll try to post more soon, I haven't been home for the whole week..
Date: 04/18/08 10:48 pm Title: Me Vexat Pede
it seems interesting! Keep going!!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad! n_n
Date: 04/18/08 01:25 pm Title: Me Vexat Pede
It's a very promising beginning. I like to see tom's reaction to this. Please write more.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot.^^
Date: 04/18/08 01:58 am Title: Me Vexat Pede
i think he just got sooo dissed lol ^^
Author's Response: He did, didn't he? xD Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 04/18/08 01:34 am Title: Me Vexat Pede
First (when I saw this in the fic-list), I thought that maybe this isn't interesting enough to read immediately. That maybe I should wait for more chapters... But 'cause I hadn't anything else to do I decided to read this.
And I completely changed my opinion! This really is interesting enough to read. More than that :)
You write very well and this is so nice text to read. Somehow I didn't expect this story to be... well like this. I thought it'd be something like many other school-fics I've read. But relly, it isn't.
Very positive suprise!
I think that your Bill-character in well made. It's interesting and I look very much forward to see what happens to him. And ofcourse I want to see how Tom's attitude towards him changes :) Please don't make it too fictional! 'Cause I like this!
In the end, just wanna say that you're mean leaving this in a point like that! I'd really like to know soon "what in the God's name" will happen :D
Continue, please~
Whit love,
Gry
Author's Response: Omg, thank you so much for this beautiful review.<3 I'm glad that you changed your opinion and that I surprised you in a positive way.:) To be honest, I'm writing as I go so I have no idea how things will change yet. I never plan the events, so I guess we'll all see.:P I'll try to follow your advice.^^ I'm sorry if it was mean. *hides* As you gave me such a wonderful review, I'll dedicate my next chapter to you. Thank you so much.*hugs*
Date: 04/17/08 09:17 pm Title: Me Vexat Pede
whoa, tom's a bit bitchy, no?
really good though.
lovely chapter!
great story.
looking forward to more!
Author's Response: He is, I guess. xD I'm really glad you like it.^^