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Reviewer: Ady Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/17 08:07 am Title: Magrets de canard

Fascinada, la relación de ambos poco a poco se va afianzado y es cuestión de tiempo para que Bill vaya dejando su timidez con Tom y hablé más sobre sus sentimientos.
Amo tu historiab29;

Author's Response: Yes well, we'll see what happens in the future ;) But I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! :D

Reviewer: JessBlue Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/14/17 07:58 am Title: Magrets de canard

New reader! I discovered this story and I read it all at once! Aww I love shy Bill, and Tom is soo cute and caring! Hope everything in their relationship keeps going like this :D
Thank you for posting!

Author's Response: Yaaaaay! It's fun to get new readers! :D And it's always fun to read a huge amount of chapters in a row! :D Yay, I'm happy you like shy Bill! :D Weeeeeelll, you'll see how things go ;) Thank you for leaving a review!! :D

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/17 08:33 pm Title: Magrets de canard

this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it!!:DD

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/17 07:27 pm Title: Magrets de canard

This was amazing :) They are so cute. Bill being shy is super adorable, and Tom is so sweet to him. God, I just blushed reading it.

And as always, I've read this like 2 times already! :D

Anyway. I was so happy to see this update! And I'm sorry for being late with your e-mail, I'm working on it and you should have a reply by tomorrow :D

Author's Response: Yay! I'm so happy you liked this! :D Haha, yeah shy people are adorable! :D Yaaaaay! I think it's so sweet that you always read these chapters a couple of times :P Oh it's quite alright! :D Nooooo hurry! :D

Reviewer: MonsoonTwc Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/17 06:25 pm Title: Magrets de canard

They are really adorable 😍

Author's Response: Yay, I'm glad you think so! :DD

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/17 05:18 pm Title: Magrets de canard

Yeah, but they are so (and no, it's not a critic, just thinking about the characters) like ... yeaaah, I dont care what he likes, thinks about future, what his life was like till we met ...

They dont know another and they dont seem as they would like to know another.
As a boyfriend I should want to know why the family of my boyfriend hates him. And I should want to know what my boyfriend likes and what he likes on me ... But kay, they just got together. And at least a few things they got to know when they just were friends. Maybe they'll change a bit and try to get to know another.

At least they are already like an old married couple after one day. (One reads while the other goes to sleep) Haha :D

As I said, good chapter and I want to know what comes next :D

Author's Response: Oh yes, I understand that you're simply analyzing the characters and it's totally cool! :D But yeah, I can't really say anything to that, except be patient ;) Perhaps they will get to know each other better ;) Well Tom is a night owl and Bill is an early bird, so naturally Tom is still up when Bill goes to bed XDD But hey isn't it like the best kind of romance where you're so comfortable with the other one from the beginning that it just works :D But yeah, you will find out what happens next between our young couple ;) That's all I'm saying :D Thank you for your awesome reviews though! I love to read all of your opinions and analysis' even though I can't always answer them without spoiling the entire plot :P

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/13/17 03:45 pm Title: Magrets de canard

They are sooo different ... this just can't go good.
This chapter just shows how different they are. Bill barely spoke 2 or 3 sentences in this chapter and they didnt spoke about their feelings. sure you dont have to but at least a litte 'when I first saw you ...' ' I like that you ...' ' Just when you did ... I fall for you' ... says everybody, right?
And really, do they even know another? Tom says it's the first relationship that is not based on sex but if he is honest it's not much more at the moment. He doesn't know much about bill. What animas does bill like? friends? hobbys? what does he want to do in the futur? what does he dreams of? how was his childhood? why is his family so shitty and why dont they like him? had he done some shit? how was his time in school and and and and - and the same the other way around. even worse. Bill knows absolut nothing about tom, just jobrelated things.

They are cute together but as long bill doesnt get that he has a mouth to talk not just eat, and as long they barely know another and stay as they are, it just cant go great a long time. You know that I think that already some chapters long, but since this chapter this feeling got worse. lol

still a good chapter, I'll wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: Haha, well I won't give out aaaaany information about the future chapters! :D Well you don't actually have to know everything about another person to say you know them, you know :D Like just because you know someone's past doesn't mean you necessarily know them as a person. Tom knows Bill as a person. He knows what he is like, he knows his greatest passion is food and he knows Bill had to go through a lot at home, because he was there to see it. Bill just isn't a very vocal person, but perhaps he'll learn to talk to Tom. But yeah, there are a lot they don't know about each other yet, but there's time for everything :D And yes you're right; Bill should absolutely learn to use his mouth to talk, but perhaps he will, perhaps he will ;) Yay I'm happy you still enjoyed the chapter! :D There are still a few chapters left in this story :D at least 5 chapters and an epilogue, depending on if I have to divide some stuff into two chapters in case they don't fit into the one I've planned :D But at least 5 chapters and an epilogue :D

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/07/17 02:26 am Title: Pain au Chocolat

this sounsa like a good story!!
an this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy you think so and liked this! :D I try not to make you wait too long for the next chapter! :D

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/04/17 02:07 am Title: Pain au Chocolat

Gahhhhhhhhh I'm so excited!!!
I was terribly sad for Bill with that initial conversation or lack there if I should say.
But you know sometimes body language is the best form of communication lol!
I can't eve deal! I can't wait to see what's next for these two!!

Author's Response: Yaaaaaay! I'm happy you're happy! :D Yes I know there wasn't much of a conversation, but Bill isn't really that keen to voice his feelings so I think it's natural that Tom did the talking and Bill kinda showed him what he thought rather than saying it out loud :D But I am so happy you're enjoying my story and hopefully you will continue to enjoy it in the future as well! :D

Reviewer: Ady Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 11:35 pm Title: Pain au Chocolat

Dios! !! Joder que ha sido fantástico! Me encantó el capitulo, el lemon perfecto, caliente. Bill tímido pero tengo la esperanza como Tom que poco a poco Bill se liberará de su timidez y será toda una sorpresa al momento de hacer wl amor.
Disculpa que comenté en español, es que no sé expresarme en inglés.
Gracias por el capi!

Author's Response: Google translate to the rescue! I hope it got most of your review right! :D I'm glad you're enjoying this story! It means a lot! :D Yes perhaps Bill will let go of his shyness at some point and scream for Tom a little in the sack, we shall see ;) It's okay that you wrote in Spanish! I don't speak the language, but luckily there's google translate and it'll give me an idea what you wrote! Thank you for reviewing and I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters as well! :D

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 09:49 pm Title: Pain au Chocolat

God, this banner is so beautiful! Good job to GermanOoOGirl! Absolutely amazing!

God, everytime you update, I read the chapters at least 8 times before I review. Mostly because they are always so wonderful (or wonderfully HOT, like this one, where I had to sometimes stop to breathe and just cool down before i continued, so good job) and I need to find out WHAT I'm going to say in my reviews. So yeah. sorry for being slow.

I loved this chapter. You did good. I'm so happy how it ended, how they are a couple now. I do feel Tom's frustration XD he just wants bill to express how good it is, and maybe scream for him??? ;) I can't blame him there ;)

So maybe bill will.. loosen up soon and start screaming his pretty little head off? I hope so *moan*

Anyway this was good. I am absolutely in love with this story. I always hope for a new update and I light up like a freaking christmas tree when i see it on the recent list. keep them coming, please! < 3

Author's Response: I know! The banner is soooo great and I'm so excited about it! :D Awww, I'm so glad to hear that you re-read my chapters! It's okay that you're slow with reviewing if you actually read these a bunch of times! I'm so happy you're enjoying my stories! It means a lot! :D Yaay! I thought it might be the time to make them a couple >:) Oh, do you have any idea how hard it is to write about someone who doesn't scream and talk dirty during sex? XD I'm so used to writing super dirty smut with lots of dirty talk, but in this it's kinda hard 'cause I want Bill to be the way he is in the sack as well; shy. But perhaps at some point he'll scream a little for Tom ;) Yay! It means so much to me that people are loving this story! I'm so happy!! :D I try to not make you wait too long for the next chapter! :D Thank you for a lovely review! :D

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 08:46 pm Title: Pain au Chocolat

I gotta say it was ever so slightly embarrassing reading this only because my younger sister was in the room but Heeeelll NAH am I gonna stop reading just because of that!!! This was so amazing!! And that last sentence made me so happy!!!

Author's Response: Ahahaaaa XDD Well I can imagine!! XD This had quite a lot of dirty stuff there so... XD Yay! I'm so happy you enjoyed it!! :DD

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 05:56 pm Title: Pain au Chocolat

Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! :D

Reviewer: angelsdonotcry Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 02:41 pm Title: Pain au Chocolat

I am so happy for them!!! Thanks for the chapter, and the banner is awesome! 😊

Author's Response: Yay! I'm happy you're happy! :D Thank you for leaving a review! The banner is awesome, isn't it! :D Btw congratulation, your review is the 100th review in this story!!! WHOOOOO!!! You get an imaginary cookie! :D

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 01:50 pm Title: Ratatouille

you're welcome :) I had fun while making it and you like it, so everything is good, haha.

Author's Response: Yay! But still, I'm so excited that you made this to me and I don't just like it, I LOVE it! :D I can't do banners to save my life so I never have them so it's nice that someone gets inspired enough to make me one! :D

Reviewer: Burning Hole Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 01:46 pm Title: Ratatouille

Omfg that banner 😍😍😍😍

Author's Response: I know, right! I love it soooooo much! :D I'm so flattered that someone got inspired by my story enough to make me a banner! :D

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 11:50 am Title: Pain au Chocolat

Great chapter and good that they finally ... talked :'D Okay, they didnt really but at least a bit. let's see how they do as a couple :)

Author's Response: Haha yes they did talk :D Well Tom talked and Bill listened :D But it seemed to work out now didn't it! :D Yes you'll find out how they do as a couple later >:) Thank you for your review and THANK YOU FOR THE BANNEEEEERRR!!! I know I've said it like a thousand times, but it is so great and I absolutely love it! :D

Reviewer: Davina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/03/17 11:01 am Title: Pain au Chocolat

At first I thought I made a mistake when I opened the page and saw a new chapter from you ahahah.
So, I don't think they got a real conversation but at least they have their answer ! I'm pleased about how everything turn out. But I have to admit that I'm a little bit frustrated by Bill, he don't talk that much, just a few words and sometimes I want to grab him and shake him (I know, I'm not sweetest person here ahah). I hope he's gonna open up a little bit more and at least, talk to Tom (his new boyfriend YAY !!!!!!!)

Author's Response: Haha, there was noooo mistake! I actually do add chapters from time to time XDD Well they got as much of a conversation as they could with Bill being so shy :D But at least they voiced their feelings :D Haha yes I understand it might be frustrating, but grabbing and shaking Bill would probably just make him even more closed up XD So not a good idea that one :D Maybe he'll open up to Tom when he realizes that he can :D Thank you for your review and I'm super glad you're happy about the outcome :D

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/17 04:48 pm Title: Coq au Vin

Aaaah, right .... http://www.bilder-upload.eu/upload/12386c-1493758251.png
:D

Author's Response: Aaaah! Thank youuuuuu!!!!!!!! You're the beeeest! Thank you so much, you're so sweet! :) I'll try to add the banner right now! I've never had a banner before so I hope I know how to do it! I'll credit you of course! Thank you so much, this is amazing! :D <3

Reviewer: Davina Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/02/17 03:55 pm Title: Coq au Vin

I'm so late with my review !!!
I loved this chapter (and the last one was so so hot !!). I can't wait to see the conversation between Bill and Tom.
I hope Bill's gonna talk and not be too shy... I can't wait !!!!

Author's Response: It's okay! Better late than never! I'm so glad you're enjoying these chapters! :D Yaaaaay! I try to be as fast as possible! :D

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