Date: 04/02/20 10:24 pm Title: Wishes
I like reading this story. One way to keep myself entertained during this crisis. I love how Bill and Tom's relationship grew, so as their sex life. Really made me want to try it. Lols. Anyways, can't wait for the next update. Stay safe.
Author's Response:
I am glad to keep you entertained during this crisis. I am using my own writing to keep from going out of my mind. I know people are sick and stuff is terruble but that makes me feel terribly guilty for just wanting to go to the park or some stuff. It is April in Southern Cali. The weather is taunting me all gorgeous and I can't go outside. On a more serious note if you want try something like this be safe. This a realistic portrayal of how it feels (at least for me) but there is so much more than what is here. I skipped important steps. Please be safe. If you want to know more about how to be safe and actually find the community in your area please feel free to PM me. Thanks for the review. Stay safe as well . Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/02/20 09:26 pm Title: Wishes
Emily is so asjkdafghls stinking cute when she wakes up her Daddies like that! That little girl stole my heart, istg. I also loooooove love love how those boys tease and torment each other. Fuck, I know I have an advantage already, being able to read ahead, but I check if there's something new almost every day. On all of your stories. They're so goddamn good, wtf. Okay, I'll stop now. I loved iiiiit, will beta read the next one quickly so you can post more and make other people happy < 3
Author's Response:
I loved writing that scene. I have been looking forward to it for a while. I am glad she has stolen your heart. She is so much fun to write. Their relationship is one I love writing. I am glad you enjoy my stories so much. Thank you for always reviewing even though you have already read. Makes me so happy. Enjoy the update.
Date: 03/31/20 08:26 pm Title: Birthday
Im all for music teacher. medically quarantined since 13 Feb...………….
Author's Response:
We will have to wait and see what happens. Quarantine is making me crazy. You've been in it for a month longer. That sucks. I hope you're not going too stir crazy.
Date: 03/30/20 05:05 pm Title: Counter-Sue
it was a blow for sure. just sitting here digesting it, :(
Author's Response:
These were some of the hardest chapters for me to write. I am glad I got through it though. They are some of my favorite to go back and look through. Thank you for the review.
Date: 03/30/20 03:43 pm Title: Advice?
Zarlina is my favorite author and it has saddened me that she feels neglected in receiving the kudos she most certainly deserves Your story is wonderfully written. please keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you think my story is wonderful. Thank you for the reads and reviews. I really appreciate it. Please enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/30/20 02:33 pm Title: Revenge or Crying?
Oh yes, honey! I wanted to do a lot worse but you are doing fine. I would have George leave messages for Bill on the answering machine! I think Bill and George have the beginnings of a wonderful Fuck Buddy relationship.
Author's Response:
This is a cute idea and might happen someday in some other fic. Unfortunately I was so far past this that I couldn't add in that storyline. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/26/20 11:22 pm Title: Birthday
I liked the chapter, hopefully Bill finds a way out of his uncertainty about his professional future and finds something that he really loves to do. On this side of the world, equally in quarantine, prohibited from leaving, only once a week and according to your identity document, it is bad, but it is the correct and safest thing, for the good of everyone.
Author's Response:
The uncertainity thing is very real when the higher ups start frowning because you're not straight and/ or married. It is so subtle and insidious. I hated dealing with it. I wanted to be there for the kids. Identity document? It is for the good of everyone hopefully the quarantine will let us recover and move forward as a world.
Date: 03/26/20 10:44 pm Title: Birthday
I swear I could never put up with that HAHA I have no patience for kids, I would've been like BYEEE.
It's so sad every time Bill thinks about his music career, I would love for him to try to sing for Tom at least once, could be so cute but also so sad for him, poor boy.
Author's Response:
Dealing with tantrums is definitely a learned skill. It took me a long time before I could handle a tantrum at work and not want to rip my hair out. It is so sad when Bill thinks about his music career. I tap into the worry I had when Bill got sick irl. I thought he would fall prey to the complications and his voice would be gone. I was glad he recovered so easily. Thanks for the review and enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/26/20 10:06 pm Title: Birthday
Boy, that was a rough Monday. Poor Bill. I really love how realistic Emily is and how amazing their bond already is, even tho they haven't been a family for long. I love this story so much. Thank you so much for the shout out btw, you're a real sweetheart! < 3
Author's Response:
Yeah Mondays kind of suck. I have always hated them even if they don't fall as the Monday of my work week. I also wanted Emily to sometimes just lose it. She's going through alot right now poor girl. Thank you for the beta and review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 03/21/20 09:23 pm Title: Vice-Principal
Hopefully Bill can get away with Em's tantrum, it beats me from that school administration, I talk to the nkña about Bil ..... The coronavirus is terrible, on this side of the pond, we are already in total quarantine and it is the best thing to delay the advance of the virus and give those who are infected a chance to heal. Greetings and thanks for the story.
Author's Response:
Emily's tantrum is definitely trying for all involved. Still she is only five and five year olds have meltdowns. The school thing is going to take a bit to unravel so stay tuned.
rnCorona is terrible but the infection seems to be slowing as more and more states declare shelter in place. Leave the house only for essentials such as food and the like. Still not working an all I am going a bit stir crazy. I'll be glad when this is all over. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new update.
Date: 03/19/20 06:30 pm Title: Vice-Principal
I absolutely adore doing your beta, lemme just say that first. Brainstorming is awesome, isn't it? Okay, story time:
WHO THE FUCK EVEN IS THIS VICE PRINCIPAL HO AND CAN SHE FUCK OFF? Leave our Smoll Bill alone and mind your own goddamn business. Bye.
I love how you described Emily as a kid who can definitely throw a tantrum and be snotty, cuz it makes it soooo real! Also, buttface? Best insult ever, no lies hahah!
I can't wait for more, even tho I already know a little more, but ah well, you know what I mean! It was great! < 3
Author's Response:
The brainstorming sessions have definitely helped move the story along even if I haven't quiet figured out where to insert all of my ideas. The vice principal was always a vague plan I always knew when Bill disclosed the school was going ot be on his case. As to how that ends you'll have to wait and see. Buttface is the best insult ever and while Em is a mostly happy child she is still a child. Children still get grumpy and throw tantrums. Thanks for the review sweetie. New chapter will be up soon.
Date: 03/19/20 03:48 pm Title: Vice-Principal
I love this story so much. Bill is such an amazing teacher and he already fits in as a dad so well, he’s doing such a brilliant job with Emily. I will not be happy if that school finds a loophole to get rid of Bill! I love this fic! I can’t wait for more. I hope Tom comforts Bill later ;) Bill could do with it. Wonderful update as always my love!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoy it so much. I try to write Bill as realistically as possible. I pull from my own time as a caregiver and that helps alot. The school thing is definitely going to be interesting. You;ll have to stick around to see what happens. Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/19/20 01:44 pm Title: Good Boy
Okay SO! I finally decided to read this story and I basically did it in one go, so I hope you won't be mad at me for not leaving reviews throughout, I get lost when I'm invested in reading HAHA
First off I wanna say that what made me curious was the banner change.. I know it may sound dumb, but it caught my attention on the page! Then I was worried about the "Major Death" warning 'cause I usually don't read those, so I asked Angel but she told me it wasn't about "the twins" so I was good to go haha (I mean sure, little spoiler, but at least I didn't skip the story because of it!)
I'll start with some easy stuff: glad Katherine is gone, no one needed her, not even Tom haha I mean we totally needed her character at first to make the story more interesting but she lost all benefits of the doubt about her when the cheating was exposed haha like she was basically Andreas 2.0 but with vagina.
Andreas is straight up a piece of shit, I'm still overly worried about what he's planning to do 'cause I soooo don't trust him and I'm afraid Bill is still too affected by him. Like he's gonna do some damage for sure.
Emily I don't have much to say.. I mean she's a kid and at least she's not super annoying or anything, she's kinda smart for her age, but I just don't like children in general so I can't feel a connection to her HAHA like sorry. She cute, but meh.
Tom and Bill are kinda hard not to love, I mean HAHA they were into each other the second they met and it was so frustrating to see them not being able to be together.. I think they should've teased the shit out of each other haha and I also was kinda sad for their first time to be so rushed (as in non described), 'cause I was like "WAIT NO, NOW WE HAVE TO WAIT WHO KNOWS HOW LONG!" haha but again, everything went well after, soo!
I still don't get how Bill forced himself to deal with Andreas' behaviour.. like H O W. I'll never understand I think haha he's just too good, probably.
The whole kinky aspect the story is taking... I love, for sure HAHA like I'm a sucker for Daddy Tom and BY FAR my favourite scene will be the milk one, like I died and went to heaven and everytime milk is mentioned I lose it just as much as Bill does HAHA
My only "critique", if you will, is that I find kinda rushed the change in the relationship, especially talking about Tom (cause at least Bill mentioned some interest into kinky stuff before!). I found it a bit ooc for him to go from being afraid of crossing lines, to fucking Bill senseless and ordering him to shut up the whole time just the day after HAHA I don't know, maybe it's just me! Also I don't want you to think I didn't like the story or won't keep reading because of it, 'cause that's not the case haha just I think it needed some more development first!
I think being a more "chilled" Daddy would fit this Tom better, like I love them when they're kinky but more playful (again.. the milk part is in my heart HAHA).
Again, I'm so glad I started reading this story, I really enjoyed it and I'll definitely keep reading!
Sorry for the long ass review, but I had to make it up for only leaving it now!
ps: yes to belt techniques, but make Bill tease the shit out of Tom sometime ;)
pps: sorry if I mispelled stuff or if some of it makes no sense.. I didn't re-read what I just wrote haha
Author's Response: Ok, so long review. I'm going to work through a bit at a time. The banner change was actually designed to bring in new readers. Angel designed it for me and I have to say I fell in love. Like as soon as I saw I was like YES!!!! It was a much needed breath of fresh air. I know the Major Death Warning turns off a lot of people. I myself tend to avoid those stories. I'm thinking of adding a disclaimer that none of the main guys die. rnrnKatherine was a choice I kind of made spur of the moment. My ex who was helping me originally had been married so I was asking him about divorce and everything. I had two problems it was more complicated then I wanted to deal with and Tom was likely to lose Emily. I came up with my solution which was her dying. Maybe a bit lazy but I'm glad it translates. Andreas is actually based on the same ex, unintentionally and unknown at the time. As for Emily I enjoy writing her but I know not everyone is into kids. rnrnI enjoyed writing them so much. It was so much fun and so sad it made my hear ache in the beginning. I wanted their first time to feel wrong. I was also sinking into a depression at the time and anything sexual was hard for me to write. I tried to write the actual scene for the better part of month. It made me so messed I skipped it and just never came back to it. I actually preferred it this way. As for how Bill dealt with Andreas's behavior for so long like I said he was based on my ex. I tolerated that behavior for four and a half years. It's amazing what destruction of self esteem can make you tolerate. rnrnThe kinky aspect kind of took me by surprise. I wanted to write a kinky story for a while but have always kind of shied away, still unsure sometimes how my writing is going to be received. Everyone seems to be a sucker for Daddy Tom and it makes me happy. The milk one was so fun to write and it seemed to melt most people. Conditioning Bill on the milk was unintentional. My gf did something similar with kale salad. She mentioned it when I was telling her how Bill didn't like milk. I was so made for days especially because we were having kale that night and I realized I couldn't even complain. rnrnNow a disclaimer; I have a hard time sometimes coming across how I want when responding to critiques. I am super happy with your review and I take all critiques seriously. Ask Angel about the conversation we had about it if you need proof. I am not slamming you for an opinion and the next paragraph is merely a response and an explanation. The change in Tom was intentional. I wanted him to lose it a bit with hormones and when he was armed with a little knowledge. I can understand how some people might find that a little jarring. I also wanted to show through that change that he was into it. He was just unsure before he had research supporting him. rnrnI might have him chill a bit but am unsure and I don't want to force a dynamic. I will take your idea to heart though and see what I can do. Playful dom is one of my favorite things to read so I will see if I can write it in a way that does justice. rnrnI am glad you enjoyed it and will keep reading. I appreciate any reviews and the long ones make my day. I am glad you liked it enough to leave this review. I understand not reviewing every chapter when the story is up in the double digits. I lose myself too and find I clicked through all the chapters without even realizing it until I want more and there is no more. rnrnAs to slutty Bill and such I am not sure about that. I have a hard time writing slutty characters because I am not like that at all and reading it makes me cringe hard but again I'll see what I can do. Daddy!dom used to make me cringe so maybe this story will be a way to overcome alot.rnrnOnce again I squealed alot when reading your review. It made my morning to get up to this in my inbox, especially since I was planning on updating today. I really do love the review and a new reader. I hope you will continue to enjoy the story and review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 03/10/20 07:22 pm Title: Good Boy
Loved it as always :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/10/20 02:42 pm Title: Good Boy
YES. I’m so happy you updated. I love how Dominant Tom is. He’s so fucking hot it’s not even funny. I can’t wait for the next chapter, in so excited to see where they go next. Also; absolutely stunning banner, my love! Looking forward to the next update!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. It was fun to write. I had to take a break afterward *fans self* I usually enjoy my story but they rarely affect me like that. I am so glad you like the banner, tomssweetheart is a miracle worker. I will be updating in a bit. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/10/20 01:47 pm Title: Good Boy
BELT TECHNIQUES YES OMFG. I am so in loooove with this story, their dynamics are just beyond perfect! I've loved doing the beta and I'm soooo glad you used the new banner, because it looks amazing on the page! Thank you so much for letting me make it < 3 God, gimme more smutty Toll *drools*
Author's Response:
I myself have not been belted but I love the idea. I love writing out the dynamics betwen these two. They are fun to write. I've enjoyed the experience of having you as my beta. I am glad to get to know you and have you deal with my weird ideas at 2 in the morning. More smutty Toll on it's way. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/08/20 10:43 am Title: Daddy
I’m SO glad Angel told me to reread this. It’s so hot. I can’t wait for the next chapter, I love Dom Tom so much. Bill and Emily’s relationship is the cutest though!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. The kinky part wasn't in my orginial outline but I am glad it made it in alright. I love writing this story so much and I am glad people enjoy it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/07/20 05:58 am Title: Parents' Day
I used to read this ages, then I was discussing fics with Angel and she told me I HAVE to read it again. I’m so glad I did, I already remember how good it was - and she told me it gets so good! I’m excited to see where you take this. I already remember how much I hate Katherine though.
Author's Response:
I am glad you got back to this story. I was so out of it when I had to take my extended break. I am glad to see people return to the story. Katherine was definitiely an interesting character to write. A good mom perhaps but I don't think she was necessarily a good person or a good partner, not that Tom was in this case either. I hope you enjoy the new chapters.
Date: 03/06/20 07:58 am Title: Daddy
Shall I just leave another review? Yeah, I'm doing it. This story deserves so much better, I don't understand people on this forum at all. I LOVE IT AND I NEED IT < 3
Author's Response:
Yes all the reviews. I love it.
Date: 03/04/20 03:23 am Title: Daddy
You people are assholes for not reviewing *cries* Look at what you've done! She's holding the chapter hostage and you know we NEED it! Damnit!
Seriously tho, I am mad for you that people don't review this story. It is soooo fucking good and I'm going to promote it to my friends after I'm done writing this review! < 3
Okay. The story. Oh. My. God.
I love this. When I first started reading this, I hadn't expected it to grow into a full on Daddy kink and I am here for it. (If this is something you like to read for yourself as well, I would really suggest you my own story, Care For Me, hehe *giggles*) I loooove the dynamic between those boys and Bill being so flustered over the fact that he's into it so much is just so hot, oh my God. I can't wait for the next chapter! Good job, girl! < 3
Author's Response:
I am cruel especially when it came down to it. I was going to post on Friday but I got so busy over the weekend that it did not happen. I am glad for all of the chnages you helped me with. I have never written a daddy kink before it is very interesting to work on. Flustered Bill is the best kind and I wanted to make it realistic. thanks for the review.