Date: 02/10/17 04:00 pm Title: The Telling
Haha Im loving Georg
Author's Response:
I had alot of fun writing him. He is based a little off of Barney from How I Met Your Mother, early years and Holly Holiday from Glee. I spend way too much time watching weird combinations on TV. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 02/10/17 04:00 pm Title: The Telling
Yeah, it was clear from the beginning. It never seemd as Bill would be one of the persons that jumped in a bad time of their life, into the arms of an idiot and fell for him.
You made it pretty clear that they where best friends, that fall for another, before, dont worry :)
It sure goes against Bills moral, and you know what?
My mother had a really worse divorce. After the big fight with her husband, there was a married dude that wanted to beep with her and she wanted to. I told her, that this is cheap and dump and that you never should do that to a person (his wife) because she would never want that to happen to her.
But: When I read something like that, I'm most of the time for the cheating person. You know why? Because there are almost ever feelings.
Cheating for just sex is always shit, cheating because of feelings is a different thing. Sure its bad for the person they cheated on, but ... yeah ... when you love you love, you know?
Probably Bill wont cheat to andreas anyway, but I wanted you to know about my thinking because of the moral. Sure you should always be honest to your partner and at least tell you cheated, when you cheated - doesnt matter if it was just for sex or for feelings.
and yeah, I slept well, thank you for asking. Now it's two hours earlier, let's see when I finish the new chapter, haha :D
Author's Response:
I am glad things were clear. I wanted it to be an indepth thing about the feelings that Bill had around Tom and for Andreas. I am not sure when cheating would be ok but that is just for me. I have been on both ends of a cheating partner and it basically hurts all around. I understand that feelings aren't something that can be pushed aside but the person I am with now I am faithful too because I enjoy it and the relationship that we have.So, I don't know but that is my own personal belief system and everyone is entitled to their own. We will just have to wait and see which one Bill's subscribes too. I always appreciate your reviews. They give me a lot to think about.
rnI am glad you slept well and I hope you will enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 02/10/17 03:37 pm Title: The Telling
Oh, you posted so soon! Thank you!
Of course another great chapter, I really liked the way Bill's mother talked to him, it was comforting. And obviously now I'm curious to see what happens between Bill and Tom now that Andreas is "out of the game"... Tom seems enterprising, I like that!
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I wanted to get it up because I felt it was such an awesome story. I love writing Simone, she always seems to come out caring and wonderful. I have never written her any other way. We will have to wait and see what happens between Bill and Tom. Tom is very enterprising. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 02/10/17 02:11 pm Title: The Telling
Bill is doing better, I'm glad he is trying to build a new life without Andreas. I like the chemistry between Tom and Bill but I can't imagine that Tom would leave his wife, even if he isn't happy with her...
Author's Response:
I wanted to show that even though his relationship with Andreas meant a great deal to him, he was happier without it. I like writing Bill and Tom, they seem to have a lot of fun with very little help from me. We will have to see what goes down. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 02/09/17 05:49 am Title: Late Night Chat
some how when bill was packing up i was hearing the Jefferson theme in my head lmao. he's movig on up from that lame situation lol
Author's Response:
I looked on YouTube for the Jefferson theme. I am not sure I found the right one. I am glad you had a song for this however because I am very conflicted. Psrt of me thinks my break-up playlist would be right, another part says no go with your victory playlist. Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 02/09/17 02:36 am Title: Late Night Chat
Sad for Bill but pleased he's finally stopped allowing Andreas to make a fool of him. It must be extra hard to walk away when there's years of friendship before the romance started, but he needs a completely new start with someone solely devoted to him. Not so sure about Tom, it's not like Katherine is cheating on him. In fact, if he and Bill get together at this point it makes Tom the cheater and nearly as bad as Andreas. But he's clearly unhappy in his marriage, and I wonder if Katherine is truly happy as well since Tom doesn't seem to match up to her high expectations. Mum's cookies always make things better so I hope Bill gets to be her little boy for a while and can see things more clearly with some distance between him and Andreas. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love Helen xx
Author's Response:
I walked away from a relationship that had years of friendship attached and it was the singlest hardest thing I have done. I lost my best friend and boyfriend the same day. There is something to be said for dating your best friend, it was one of the best relationships I have had to date but there is the arguements against it. It was also one of the worst relationships I have ever had and when it was over so was the friendship that I had known most of my life. He does need a new start.
rnTom and Katherine is interesting to write because I know when a relationship is falling apart it's hard to see on the inside. I also know even in the end there are a lot of really good moments. Those good moments can make it even harder to walk away. I want to make that relationship as realistic as possible.
rnI hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time for a wonderful review.
Date: 02/08/17 08:36 pm Title: Late Night Chat
Oh, I love it. Your Bill/Andreas relationship is so realistic. It makes me so sad (for Bill, y'know) and at the same time I'm like "but this is totally going to open the way for Tom, right?"
I really, really liked that they opened up to each other this chapter. I think you're doing some really great things with these characters - they're not just jumping into something, you've got it all worked out. I love it :)
Author's Response:
I am so glad you like it. I wanted to write this as realistic as possible. I was so sad for Bill in the beginning too. We will have to see how things go. I wanted to make sure that they developed a nice relationship that honored what was already in place. It is a little harder to write than I thought. Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 02/08/17 07:41 pm Title: Late Night Chat
Great!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 02/08/17 06:09 pm Title: Late Night Chat
The storys of the old andreas sounds awesome. He was a great person. But it seems like he changed, because he is a awful person. The love between Bill and him isn't just ofer. No, he is also manipulativ when he is talking with bill. And he is also using his new girlfriend. Would he love her, he would have moved in with her a long time ago. So he is using and manipulating two persons a way he gets the best out.
I would be almost a bit shoked if bill not realizing that while he is at his mums. Also with some feelings left for andi and with these memories, he has to see, what a awful person andi became.
I almost want to vomit when I read the 'new' andi. He is just ... urks ...
The talking between Bill and Tom was kind of weird. I have to admit I had a feeling that you dont know how you want to let bill feel for Tom (strange, friendly, fallen for, etc), so it kind of changed a bit in every sentence, haha. But its okay, I like this story and Bill and Tom.
I hope they will get closer soon. I mean, bill already relized in the first(or second? no i think first) chapter, that Tom is attracted to him, so it shouldnt take much of courage for him to take the step. And Tom dont seems to be far away from it too.
I just think that katerine and andy will try to go between them in a mean and agressive way (not like aaah i love you, come back to me). They both seem like egoistic persons. Maybe like kat bringing her dad to fire tom and andi to take bills things away or somting like that.
Aaaah, I have so many thoughts about that. I just should stop, it's already past Midnight here in germany :O So ...
Great story and good night :)
Author's Response:
I wanted to show that Bill and Andreas weren't oil and water from the start. Something, not quite sure what changed in Andreas and made him this person.The conversation between Tom and Bill was supposed to be stitled and a little bit off because Bill is in a relationship with Andreas, any feelings he has for Tom will go against his own moral factor. Same with Tom he is married so he can't do anything about his attraction. It't the classic case of their brains overriding their hearts. The logical side says be friends while their hearts are screaming just kiss. Their full feelings are going to spill over occasionally. The tone and feelings were supposed to change a little with every statement. I am glad someone saw that. We will have to see what happens with everything else. I hope you slept well and will enjoy this next chapter. Thanks for all the predictions and for taking the time to leave such a thorough review when it is so late were you are.
Date: 02/08/17 05:34 pm Title: Late Night Chat
Yeah, I guess it would be good for Bill to go home to his mother for a while :) I liked the conversation between Tom and Bill ;) Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Mom's tend to make things better if only for the length of a hug. That was something I had planned to happen in a different way and it just kind of came out there. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 02/08/17 05:18 pm Title: Late Night Chat
You could show more of their night talking, I would love to read it! But I still loved it anyway! Andreas is an asshole and he doesn't deserve Bill.
I'm glad that both, Tom and Bill, found someone who they can talk with about everything.
I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I think I ended it in a good place but maybe I will write it all out at some future date. Andreas is definitely an asshole. Tom and Bill really found each other at a time where I feel like they definitely needed one another. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 02/08/17 05:02 pm Title: Late Night Chat
Loved it :D
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/07/17 03:41 pm Title: Fight
Yay for Bill!
And whoa, things are getting interesting! I hope something happens between those two on saturday!
Thanks for another great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked Bill standing up for himself. We will have to see what happens on Saturday. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/06/17 03:42 am Title: Fight
YAY BILL !! I'm so glad he took the courage to talk to Andreas ! He stand for himself and for their relationship (or what is left). But Andreas, seriously ?? He's such a bastard ! He's selfish and I can't find my words to say how pissed I am. He is so ignorant and how can he do that to Bill ? His best friend ? And did he ever considered Bill as his boyfriend and more than just his best friend ?
I don't like Andreas, at all.
But I'm willing to see how the dinner between Bill and probably just (or mostly) Tom will goes. I'm sure it will be conforting in a way for Bill, to talk to someone he don't really know. He can escape his life for a moment.
Author's Response:
I am really glad I wrote the fight since everyone seems to love it. I was really glad that Bill stood up for himself and their relationship. Andreas is definitely a bastard. I think Andreas definitely has some issues.
rnThe dinner is interesting. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/04/17 05:22 pm Title: Fight
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/04/17 02:39 pm Title: Fight
Brave Bill! I´m so proud of him! I hope he won´t back away, though...
Now it look like that diner will be just Tom and Bill and I like it... :D
Author's Response:
I hadn't actually intended that fight to come out but it did. I hope Bill won't back down either. We will have to wait and see how the dinner goes. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate it.
Date: 02/04/17 03:23 am Title: Fight
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/04/17 12:27 am Title: Fight
I feel mean saying this chapter made me happy x)
Author's Response:
It made me a little happy too. Thanks for the review.
Date: 01/28/17 11:09 pm Title: Dinner
Poor Bill , thank you for your response to my comment on last chapter , I belive Bill is what we in mexico say "Ojos que no ven,corazón que no siente " that means what bill is doing he know he's being cheated on but as long as he doesn't see it he won't let his heart know , I wonder who Andreas is cheating , what if it's not even another dude , what if it's a girl , that would be a major blow for bill , anyways hope to read you soon.
Love Alex
Author's Response:
I feel so bad for what I am putting Bill through. I believe you might be right. I hope you enjoy the story. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 01/27/17 06:09 pm Title: Dinner
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.