Date: 02/22/17 04:32 am Title: Revenge or Crying?
I'm not a big fan of Bill/Georg and I don't know if I like Georg or not.
It's only been one week since Bill broke-up with Andreas, he's been in a long-term relationship and it's not easy to go through this but I don't know if sleeping with Georg already is the solution, it's very fast.
And of course Tom is a married man with a kid, of course Bill can't picture himself with him but he's attracted by him and he can't denied that. But never he thought about the fact that he's sleeping with Tom's friend.
At least the egging car was fun and I'm sure Andreas will be pissed off ! Good for that bastard !
Looking forward for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Many people when they get out of a long term relationship sleep around, it's a typical response to the whole ordeal. It is very fast but it felt very natural for me to write. I have slept with people my friends liked and vice cersa and it never hurt our friendships. They are all adults and I think they respect the choices that they all make. I loved the egging scene it was so much fun to write and has gotten positive feedback across the board. I was a little worried it would come across as juivenile but maybe that's why it's so well recieved. Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 02/22/17 02:44 am Title: Revenge or Crying?
This was a really fun chapter. At least Bill knows that Georg is honest and upfront and isn't interested in a serious relationship and he enjoyed himself. The car egging was hilarious. Would love to see Andreas' face when he discovers it.
Author's Response:
I had a lot of fun with this chapter, I wanted to show that Bill knew how to enjoy himself when he just let go. I loved the egging, I have always wanted to do it but I was always afraid of getting caught or in trouble. I have always been too straight laced to ever egg anything. I wanted to right someone else doing it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate it.
Date: 02/22/17 12:21 am Title: Revenge or Crying?
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/21/17 11:36 pm Title: Revenge or Crying?
Omg!!!!! I loved this chapter! It was nice that Georg helped (😉) Bill out to forget Andres. I also liked how Georg knew something was going on or could have been going on with Bill and Tom. Wonder how Tom is going to feel when he finds out Bill and Georg slept together!!!!!!! CANT WAIT!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked Georg helping Bill *hem hem* Georg may be a playa and a dawg but he is very preceptive. We will have to wait and see how them seeing each other after Bill slept with Georg will go. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 02/21/17 05:50 pm Title: Revenge or Crying?
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, I appreciate the support.
Date: 02/21/17 04:43 pm Title: Revenge or Crying?
And I like Georg... He stopped and gave a fair chance to Bill to back up. But Bill doesnīt want to ruin Tomīs marriage and isnīt going to go into that, at least not yet. So, why donīt have a little bit of fun? I believe that Georg knows it wonīt last forever and is prepared to step away and make a place for Tom... At least I hope so!
Author's Response:
That was my thought about Georg, he gaev Bill every oppurtunity to back down. I am glad someone else noticed, Bill is not a child. He is an adult capable of making his own choices. The whole thing with Tom being married was a little more complicated than I anticpated. However with Georg we'll have to see what happens. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 02/21/17 04:15 pm Title: Revenge or Crying?
No, I reality don't like Georg and his behaviours. He's not being a nice friend: he says he sees something between Bill and Tom but whatever let's fuck! I hope this thing between those two won't go on further more.... not in my likings haha I don't know where you want to go with this, but we will see :)
Author's Response:
Georg is currently a plot device and he will soon be out of the way. I have some friends who have slept with someone I liked and I got over it. Thanks for taking the time to review, I apprecaite it.
Date: 02/21/17 02:43 pm Title: Revenge or Crying?
Hmpf … First I liked Georg in this chapter, because he was so bad at choosing the restaurant and his questions. He seemed so … nice, lol.
But now, I dont like him anymore. Even if Bill said no to Tom, Georg himself said he saw the love on both sides. So he is just fucking someone who he knew his best buddy is falling for. Thats an ass-move.
Also Bill is liking Georgs doing too much. It doesnt seems like he really cares for Tom and is falling for Georg. He didn't even once thought of Tom. The way he thought about Georgs kisses and touching. I mean, when he loves Georgs touches and kisses so much, how should Tom top that? And why should he think Tom could be better than that? :(
I have to admit that I have to stop reading and wait a few chapters to see where it takes the story. I know one of the mainparings of the story is BillxTom, but it just totally looks like an other Pairing at the moment. And not like an Side Pairing Georgx Bill. I just hate any other pairing as TomxBill and too much GeorgxBill is just me not liking a story – so that has nothing to do with you and your writingstyle. You are a great author and I'm impatiently waiting for a new chapter of your vampirestory.
And btw – maybe you should change the rating, I think it was more as PG-13
So … Hope to see you again in this story, if not probably in your next or in masked stranger
Ps.: Good luck with your Baby gift :)
pps.: The Egg-Car war a nice thing and probably was good for Bill. He is finally seeing Andi as that what he is: An Asshole. Not the nice guy he maybe was a few years ago.
Author's Response:
I hate the cliche of the first date always being so perfect. I wanted to show even if two people like each other the first date can be horrible. The sleeping with someone who your best friend likes is actually very common in many gay men, especially the archetype that Georg falls into. Feelings make everything better so Tom will always be better. Still enjoying an encounter doesn't mean anything in the long run. Many people sleep around after they get out of a long term relationship. Georg and Bill is over by the middle of the next chapter. If you are willing to read it I think you will like the rest of it. The vampire story is on hiatus until I get some new inspiration for it. I appreciate you continually checking on it, it means alot. I am really trying to come up with ideas for it.I contacted the THFF staff and asked about the rating, my story is just barely PG-13. Anything more graphic I will have to change the rating but thanks for the heads up. Thanks for the luck. I never got to egg any of my exes cars but I wanted to. I thought writing in would be fun. Thanks for taking the time to review and I hope you will give the next chapter a shot.
rn
Date: 02/16/17 08:08 am Title: Late Nights
This was a pretty good chapter.
It was kind of nice to see Tom and Katherine connecting a little bit. I can see where the romance and connection can be lost in chaos once you have kids. My daughter is only 4 months and my wife and I find it really hard to stay connecting outside of being parents.
I hope more of the date is in the next one!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I have seen it happen to other relationships and I have had my own relationships overwhelmed by the chaos of life. I don't have kids but there have been times I have looked at the person across from me at the table and realized it's been a few weeks since we had a conversation that was anything more than arranging our busy schedules around one car. I hope you and your wife can continue to make it work and that your daughter continues to grow happy and healthy. Thanks for taking the time to review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 02/13/17 09:45 pm Title: Late Nights
Love it!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 02/13/17 03:16 am Title: Late Nights
Cheating is always a bad thing, you are right. It's just that the reason can make the person more or less of an ass. :D
To this chapter: Hm … Dont understand Bill why he said yes, while Georg left him and tom the night before for some stranger. (Anyway I am going to leave you two at it because I just spotted a dime across the bar. )
I think Tom geave Georg the number so he baby has a new reason to stay away from Bill. To be honest I hope its not working. Also not the date, so they dont have to hurt one more person.
Make BillxGeorg as short as possible, please :D haha
Author's Response:
That is very true. I would be more inclined to forgive someone for cheating if they had real feelings for the person they were cheating with. Bill is in a weird place and I think that Georg represents the dangerous and stuff that he hasn't had. It makes sense to me. As for Tom and his reasons, we'll have to wait and see if the character gives me the insights into that. I will definitely try. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 02/12/17 05:30 pm Title: Late Nights
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 02/12/17 05:25 pm Title: Late Nights
I suck with review lately because I'm out of time. But I'm here !
The first part with Tom and Katherine was kind of cute if you don't know what's going out between them. Tom seem like a very nice guy even when things aren't perfect.
I don't know what to expect about Bill and Georg but I'm curious to see their date. I just hoped that Tom would be a little jealous, because he easily gave Bill's phone number and he didn't say anything against the date or something.
I can't wait for more !
Author's Response:
I don't mind reviews short or long. I enjoy them all. They all make me smile and I love getting new perspectives and thoughts on a storyline. I wanted to show that even though Tom and Katherine are having problems they got married for a reason and some of those reasons are still there. Tom did love her at one point and I think she loved him. Life just kind of got in the way. Tom's lack of jealously doesn't mean he's not jealous it means he's a married man who knows he shouldn't have those feelings so he is repressing them. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 02/12/17 04:11 pm Title: Late Nights
Sooooooo good! I was smiling a lot when Bill was flirting with Georg. Like it was so natural. I figured Tom would be jealous since he is attracted to Bill but maybe not. Hopefully Bill and Georg make a connection and Andreas doesn't ruin it. Also, I can't wait for more Bill and Tom interaction. Update soon!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I wanted to show that when Bill wasn't distracted or hurting he could be very sexy and flirtatous. I wanted Tom to be a little jealous but not like crazy jealous. I am glad you enjoyed it. I hope you enjoy the next chapter as well. Thanks for taking the time to review.
Date: 02/12/17 03:26 pm Title: Late Nights
I would be more upset about the whole thing with Bill/Georg date and Tom/Katherine night, but I loved the scene when Bill was preparing for the date and Tom couldnīt také his eyes of him!!! So I forgive you and I canīt wait for the next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad that scene made up for it. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter. Even if you don't I hope you will continue reading. Thank you for taking the time to review. I love reading and responding to reviews. They make me happy.
Date: 02/11/17 04:11 pm Title: The Telling
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 02/11/17 04:00 am Title: The Telling
Can't have all that life and fire sucked outta our Bill can we! Haha I really enjoyed that little back and forth between Bill and Georg.
I have a friend that reminds me of Georg, including all the dramatics and similar overreactions to any kind of romantic commitment.
Can't wait for the next part
Author's Response:
I admit I got inspiration for that line from Titanic where Jack grabs Rose and basically begs her to run away with him. The little back and forth was fun to write. I tried to imagine what the Bill before Andreas was like and how he would be now that he was free. This is what came out. Georg is based loosely on Barney from How I Met Your Mother, early years and Holly Holliday from Glee also early years. I am glad you liked it, thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 02/10/17 08:02 pm Title: The Telling
Look at Georg opening up Bill's flirting ablilities. I hope he and/or Tom make a move soon! Like a kiss! YAS please! Great chapter! 😁
Author's Response:
Georg is a purpose character. He had a purpose and once he fulfills it he'll die. JK, just a joke. Georg isn't going to die I promise. He does however have a purpose which will become very clear over the next few chapters. We will have to see what happens with Tom and Bill. I am glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 02/10/17 05:42 pm Title: The Telling
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review and enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 02/10/17 04:53 pm Title: The Telling
Tom is wrong, when he thinks he should stay together with his wife, for his daughter – as every parent that is unhappy in the relationship but stays in it for the kids sake.
Because it makes the parent unhappy and that can a child feel. Also its worse for a person to know, that her/his parents just stayed together for her/him and so missed years of the chance to met someone new and becoming happy. It sure feels worse, also if the child maybe never does to aknowlege that.
And also its not nice to lie to your child for years.
Tom was just trying to hide the hurt that Bill could flirt so easily with Georg when he had been holding Tom at an arm’s length since meeting. " - nawwwww, i felt a little bad for tom at this point. But also it's good that bill really did end his relationship.
Well see if Tom still holds back or takes the chance. In chapter two he already got hard when bill looked at him, lets see what a little private time can do.
Naaa, joking, but I see bad and good things coming, so lets hope the good things will be more :3
Author's Response:
I have been the child in the middle of an unhappy marriage and you are right it is not pleasant for the kid. I was actually glad when my parents' got a divorce. I liked writing that scene because while I feel Bill would never actively pursue a relationship with a married man the feelings are still there. Feelings that aren't just going to go away. So Bill holds Tom at arm's length to avoid anything he would regret later. It sucks for Tom who also has feelings for Bill so i feel bad for both of them.
rnThank you for the review and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.