Date: 05/02/20 05:24 pm Title: Audit
this was a really good chapter!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 05/02/20 02:55 pm Title: Audit
"Can I have you gentle tonight?" aaaahw < 3 I also fucking love that jerk off session. I need more of that. ASAP. < 3
Author's Response:
I wanted to show that even in a relationship like this they can still have their sweet moments. Tom isn't always Daddy and Bill is not always up to have his ass broken in. I loved that jerk off session. I will see about writing more of them. This came from that conversation that we had about Tom's ring with Shaddix. I was inpsired. I do think I will write more in the future. Thanks for the beta and I always love your reviews.
Date: 05/02/20 02:54 pm Title: Shoes
Bill and Emily are forming such an amazingly sweet bond, I love them < 3 And fuck, Tom is so hot when he's dominating Bill in such a sweet way. God. < 3
Author's Response:
I love writing Bill and Emily. They are so cute and I love it. Tom is super hot to write like this. I find myself trying to write this version in other stories and I have to remind myself no. That is Daddy Tom for this story. Thanks for the reveiws and beta babe.
Date: 05/02/20 10:39 am Title: Audit
The audit is very derio ... they want to make Bill uncomfortable, hopefully most parents do not see any inconvenience with that teacher-parent relationship, since there will always be bad and prejudiced people.
Tom will also have some problems when he becomes independent but it is the right thing to do.
I am avoiding the hot parts ... thanks for the warnings.
Author's Response:
I am definitely cranking up the drama but it was needed the story was getting a bit cutesy. The relationships with parents and teachers is very important the audit is very annoying. We will have to see what happens with Tom. No problem on the warnings. I get that it is not for everyone.
Date: 05/02/20 07:04 am Title: Audit
I’m both scared and happy. Don’t want Bill to lose his job or Tom to fail, 😭 The snow scenes are wonderful. Growing up in Michigan was so like that 😁
Author's Response:
This is a hard section to write. Makes me sad. I am glad it translates well to others. I live in Southern California now so no snow but I grew up in Wyoming. I do miss the snow but never the cold. I am glad it made you think of winters at home. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/02/20 04:34 am Title: Parents' Day
🤗
Author's Response:
i am glad you like it. I hope you continue to enjoy. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/02/20 03:14 am Title: Audit
Started reading this story recently. Really like it so far.
Date: 05/02/20 01:35 am Title: Audit
Loved it! The whole school situation has me so anxious... can't wait for the next!
Date: 04/25/20 05:09 am Title: Shoes
this is a really good story!!
I can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/24/20 01:43 am Title: Parents' Day
Emily is so cute. I could tell she really wanted a sibling. I like it to be a baby boy. I could really see her being a protective big sister.
This story is really killing me. Can’t wait for the sexy scenes of Bill and Tom.
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed the beginning. I hope you will enjoy the rest of the chapters. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/24/20 12:00 am Title: Shoes
Em would trade her dad for candy ... that made me laugh ... ha ha ha ... Wow ... entanglement with the baby, I can't imagine having to explain that matter to a little girl ... Surely the aunt will go with the gossip to Em's grandparents ... let's see what happened ... and this is the issue of the parents of the school children ... Thank you and stay healthy.
Author's Response:
There were alot of ends in this one that I enjoyed. I hope you will enjoy seeing them end. Thank you for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/23/20 11:10 pm Title: Shoes
That was very good . Emily and her questions so accurate . Then the creative Dom/Sub. I have been on medical quarantine for 70 days now. I feel pretty close to a depression that might be very difficult to overcome. I live by myself. Keep me in your thoughts , please.
Author's Response:
I am glad it is helping with the medical quarantine. I wanted Emily to be accurate and for Tom to be a bit mean. You are in my thoughts. Thanks for the review and enjoy the update.
Date: 04/20/20 10:21 pm Title: Punishment
THIS WAS SUCH A GOOD CHAPTER. Like really, really hot as well I'd definitely say HAHA I love how Tom completely switched out of character and worried about Bill as soon as "sex" ended, that he's still not 100% sure and he's trying his best to figure things out while remaining in control, love that.
And I also love that they're still able to play and pick at each other outside of the bedroom, that Bill is still allowed to play and tease and not give kisses 'cause he's fake offended haha
Also the closing line is just genius, I have to say HAHA great job!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. I have been trying to figure out their dynamic. tomssweetheart has been a big help in that respect but it has been so fun to write them. I wanted to show that Tom was still very caring and everything. I am so glad you liked the closing line I worked on that one for longer than I usually spend on a line. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/18/20 10:08 am Title: Punishment
To continue fighting against this virus.
Author's Response:
I am trying to keep my head but it was very hard for a few weeks. I seriously thought I was going to lose my mind. Thank you for the review. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/16/20 10:48 pm Title: Punishment
It took me like... six tries to beta read this because it is so fucking hot and I'm easily distracted. I find myself just reading and enjoying it, instead of looking for the lack of commas. I love this story so much, it's totally addictive! I love being your beta and I can't wait for everyone else to catch up and find out what happens! < 3
Author's Response:
I am so glad that it distracted you to that point. I had fun writing it. I am glad you enjoy it so much. Thank you for the beta. Enjoy the update.
Date: 04/16/20 08:52 pm Title: Brat
Sorry to read about your girlfriend, hope she's doing okay!
For the chapters I have to say: ROUND OF APPLAUSE. I loved this. I love Bill being a tease and then being fine with taking the punishments, even basically asking for it HAHA glad Tom did his research ;)
Author's Response:
It's been a rough couple of weeks but we are over the hump now and she is on the mend. The prison guard girlfriend AKA yours truly isn't letting her out until she is completely better. Last thing we need is for her to get a cold when she is feeling better. I am glad you enjoyed the chapters. I wanted to show Bill being a tease and tomssweetheart helped me alot with that. As for the research I did that myself so I could write it realisticially. The internet gets weird after two in the morning. Thanks for the review. I hope you will enjoy the update.
Date: 04/09/20 09:52 pm Title: Brat
Force with the covid-19. Happy birthday to Tomssweetheart. I'm really not a fan of Bdsm-style hot scenes ??? ... despite this I love this pair and will follow them to the end. Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoy the story even if you aren't a fan of BDSM. The trend will continue. It is an idea I have wanted to write for a while so this one I just went with it. I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 04/09/20 06:31 pm Title: Brat
THIS SHIT IS SO AMAZING I WANT TO YELL AT YOU. I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU GAVE ME THE PRIVILEGE TO BETA FOR YOU BECAUSE I WOULDN'T HAVE BEEN ABLE TO WAIT FOR MORE. SHIT IT IS SO GOOD AND I LOVE THEM AND THEIR DYNAMIC AND THEIR DICKS AND HOLY HELL. YES, THE CAPITAL LETTERS WERE NECESSARY. AS I SAID, I WANT TO YELL AT YOU. SO GOOD. UHG. THANKS < 3
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it enough to yell at me. You do yell at me when I don't give you more. it's why I have time to take off to write Paper Boy because you pushed me to get so much done. I am really glad you enjoy it and being my beta. Thanks for the beautiful work and review.
Date: 04/04/20 11:25 am Title: Permission to Deceive
When the relationship becomes toxic all you have to do is walk awaAaAaAay
Author's Response:
I agree but sometimes it's not all that easy. Are you quoting a song? Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapters.
Date: 04/03/20 12:03 pm Title: Wishes
Good advice, stay safe and quarantine ... Hopefully the psdres of Em's classmates, do not disagree with the teacher's relationship with a widowed father, it would be very hard for Bill to have to face them. Thank you!!
Author's Response:
I have a whole thing planned out but don't want to give anything away. I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for the review. Enjoy the update.