Date: 05/08/17 02:14 pm Title: Nervous Breakdown
And here I was thinking that Katherine was some kind of witch. But I still have my doubts she's really pregnant.
Those two don't know the meaning of just friends. And... butt dialing, seriously?? How can he be such an idiot?
Tom is really insensitive in this one, I mean, I get he doesn't love his wife anymore, but bringing Bill home is a bit of a dick move, as much as Katherine is unlikeable.
I really liked this chapter, and I also can't see this story having a cookie cuter happy ending. But I know however it ends, I'll like it.
I hope you find the motivation to finish this story because it's really good. Your boyfriend seems cute, and such a sweet guy. I hope he's ok.
Update soon, please!
Author's Response:
Katherine is not a witch she is just very manipluative. Bill and Tom are definitely not friends. Butt dialing doesn't seem to happen as frequently with the newer smart phones, I wouldn't even have thought of it if I wasn't watching an old movie where it happened. I know it ocassionally still happens and it was a great (or terrible) way for Katherine to find out. Bringing Bill home was definitely a dick move. I am glad you liked the chapter and I hope you enjoy the next one as well. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/08/17 01:23 pm Title: Nervous Breakdown
So his own phone betrayed Tom. It must have been terrible, listening to something like that. That's why I am astonished that she took it so coldly.
But Tom and Bill ... they still have hope?
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response:
It really would have been horrible but Katherine very rarely shows emotion. I wanted to show even when faced with something that would have most people losing their minds she takes it and disgests it very easily. They might still have hope. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 05/07/17 10:55 pm Title: Nervous Breakdown
All I can say is YAS!!! We got some contact between them! I still can't believe Tom's wife pregnant. Like come on! I hope it's not Tom's baby but it is. I hope Bill figures everything out. I want him and Tom to be together BUT THEN there is Georg! Maybe one more sexy time with Georg then they can be friends. OHHHHH! When will Tom find out about the sleeping together?! More drama!!!!!! Great chapter and hope you are inspired to update soon! Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Katherine being pregnant was planned from the very beginning. Bill and Tom will hopefully figure everything out and I have a few ideas courtesy of your friendly neighborhood beta. Georg seems to be a dividing factor. People either love him especailly for how sweet he was or hate him for being with Bill. I hope you enjoy the newest installment.
Date: 05/07/17 06:08 pm Title: Nervous Breakdown
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it.
Date: 04/02/17 08:05 pm Title: Counter-Sue
Love it!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 04/02/17 07:23 am Title: Counter-Sue
Katherine is a massive b****. I wonder if she is even really pregnant, or just faking it to shoo bill away....
anyways, great chapter, can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
Answering reviews at work not always a good plan. I was glad you used stare instead of the actual word when I realized my boss was right behind me. In regards to Katherine's pregnancy we'll have to wait and see whether or not she's lying. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/28/17 05:51 am Title: Counter-Sue
I was sure that Katherine will come up with something like that. This is so nasty. Of course Tom must be happy to become a father of two but it's still with a woman he don't love anymore. I don't know how it's gonna turn out, or turn better because this is a shitty situation.
I don't know what to think about Bill and Georg and the fact that Georg call him at THIS precise moment. He didn't do it but I don't think sleeping with Georg would help him at feeling better. He still haven't figured out about everyhing that had happened with Tom and trowing himself to the arms of someone else again is not the best choice to do. But it's up to me, some people may have other opinion.
I don't like Katherine, at all. But I can understand the contempt she have for Bill. He spent a night with his husband after all.
I can't wait to see what Bill's gonna do and what Tom think about all of this. But Tom is so stuck. I'm frustrated as hell for him.
Author's Response:
The whole mess with Katherine and Tom is definitely going to be interesting.Georg and Bill is because after a break up a lot of people turn to someone like Georg hoping meaningless sex will help them feel better. It doesn't help always but it can be great for a detox after a serious relationship. I think Katherine's contempt for Bill is justified even if I dont like her. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/26/17 06:13 am Title: Counter-Sue
Why do I think that Katherine was lying right now? Even I'd managed to get a positive pregnancy test anywhere. Well, let's see how serious it is.
Bill takes it as a clear sign, but I'm very sorry for him.
Thanks for the chapter and look forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Whether or not Katherine is lying will be revealed. Bill is in for more heartbreak poor guy. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/25/17 02:28 am Title: Counter-Sue
I definitely was not expecting a pregnancy that's for sure. I thought this was gonna turn into some straight up double life type of thing... idk why but I probably would've enjoyed that for a while even if it goes against everything I believe in. Lol Katherine's biological clock is on point! Getting pregnant just in time for her husband to have an affair...
I totally saw that crying fit at Georg's place coming though. Lol it was wayyy too soon...
Either way this was a great chapter. I'm really excited to see what's next!
Author's Response:
The pregnancy was planned from the beginning but I didn't want to give it away. I thought about the double life thing but I figured Bill with everything he went through wouldn't do that. That crying fit at Georg's place was out of nowhere but suddenly Bill's phone was ringing and I had to figure out who was on the other end. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review
Date: 03/24/17 12:36 pm Title: Counter-Sue
Got no words, this is so interesting
Author's Response:
I rendered someone speechless with nothing more than some typed words. I feel like that should have been on bucket list. Well if it had been you would have helped me cross it off. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/23/17 10:43 pm Title: Counter-Sue
Damn!!!!! She's pregnant! I feel so bad for Bill but I feel like Tom has something up his shelve. As for Georg,...I feel he might start to catch feeling for Bill! Ugh! Update soon! I love this story!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked all the intricacies of this chapter I hope you enjoy the new chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/23/17 06:35 pm Title: Counter-Sue
Awh, that was so mean of Katherine :( poor Bill :(
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I cried for Bill in this instant. Katherine is terrible. Thanks for taking the time to read and review
Date: 03/23/17 09:52 am Title: Counter-Sue
I am *never* comfortable around my partners' parents, I feel for you.
I don't think it was off at all. My hatred for Katherine continues to grow, though I can't quite decide if she's genuinely a hideously selfish human being or simply terrified about losing her husband. Neither is an excuse, of course. Grr.
I love that Georg is just like "okay, yep, no sex tonight, you need comfort right now." He is so nice, I'm almost at the point of wanting him and Bill to get together XD
I also love Tom and Emily's relationship. It's so cute and I foresee trouble when/if he leaves the house and Katherine uses her as a weapon in the ensuing chaos...
Author's Response:
I find myself dreading the days she's over. Katherine is interesting in her own rite but I haven't liked since I started. Georg is fun to write and I dont get why people are so negative on my g-man. I think everyone at some point will have a Georg type relationship. I find myself wishing I hadnt introduced a child but then they would never have met. *sigh* Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/23/17 04:03 am Title: Counter-Sue
Andy really is an asshole. Sure, both points seems to be valid, pumpa and the rent, but he obviously didn’t liked pumpa, so he just wants to hurt Bill. And the rent – he didn’t wanted to go to his girlfriend, so it's not bills fault.
Andreas really is an ass, not just to bill but also to his 'girlfriend'. First he used her for sex and now for a lawsuit. Obviously he don't loves her, else he would have be officially with her a long time ago, and probably even moved in with her.
When Tom was honest when he said, that bill is a welcome change, then it sounds as he don’t likes his work. I mean it also seams that he became a lawyer because of Katherine's father, so it's possible he didn’t wanted to become a lawyer and he still dont likes it … Poor dude.
The Pregnancy … She is not pregnant (you can buy faketests) because Tom already said, that they hadn’t sex in a very long time. So ether she is not pregnant, or it's not Toms child.
That also means, Tom knows, Katherine is lying maybe even cheating. Did he smile because of that? Was he happy to have now a point in leaving her without being the bad guy?
That Georg called … I began to like him, but they agreed on never having sex again with each other and he knows tom loves bill and bill loves Tom so why the fuck? He thinks Tom is letting Katherine go and giving it with bill a chance but calls bill for sex? That dude is a fucking asshole, not a friend. It almost seems to me, that he is doing something with Katherine or Andreas and plays a dirty game.
Also …. You know I love your writing and I love this story, but I need a pause of it. I love drama really much, but at the moment this story has to much drama for me, that it feels like you are just looking for some drama all the time and so you let some things happen that are too much and maybe not fitting in. Maybe I'm feeling that just at the moment, but I just will wait a few chapters to see, if it feels better later.
Also it's getting too much georgxbill for me and I'm beginning to not understanding(and not agreeing with) the characters.
It's just … yeah. Not agreeing, not understanding and not realistic – to me.
But as I said, you know I like your writing and I like this story really much, so I hope in a few chapters I will have fun with this story again :)
Oh, and tell your boyfriend he did a good job :)
Author's Response:
Andy is an asshole, he is one of the evilest characters I've ever written. The lawsuit is a cute little manuver. I actualy got inspired by a show i watched called Stalked. The woman moved out and was filing for divorce and her husband sued because the car she used was in his name and she had taken their cat. Andreas' feelings or lack of for the girl are indetermined so far. I might have to go in depth with that relationship to figure it out. Tom definitely has more than platonic feelings for Bill and vice ersa. As for his career path once again I am little hazy on it. These are details I am going to have to flesh out but they will be. in the bginning I did mention that they hadn;t had sex for a while but in the second or third chapter he did say let's get started on baby number two end scene. I thought it was implied they were going to sleep together. Other than that everyone will have to wait to see what is going on. (It's kind of funny how everyone just assumes she is lying.) Georg is a different kind of character and one I haven't really written before. He and Bill didn't agree to not have sex they agreed not to date. However they are both single gay men who enjoy each other's company. men tend to think with their little heads especially when facing emotional distress. I am sorry you feel however that it is unrealistic and that the characters don't make any sense.I have been loyal to what they are telling me. My bf appreciates the comment.
Date: 03/23/17 01:21 am Title: Counter-Sue
Oh no. She is pregnant :( I wonder if she really is pregnant or is a big lie to mantener Tom for herself ;). Great chapter as always :)
Author's Response:
I guess you will have to wait and see whether or not Katehrine's pregnancy is for real. Thanks for the review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/19/17 02:50 am Title: Lawyer
Katherine knows? How?! I don't believe that woman is witch jajaja I love this history. Ohhh i really wanna see the Katherine's face when she watchs Bill in her house I'm dying. Ahhh beautiful fic. Love it ;)
Author's Response:
Katherine gets explained I promise. I am glad you liked it. I hope you enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/18/17 09:37 am Title: Revenge or Crying?
I love it!!
Author's Response:
I am so glad. I will have a new chapter up soon as well as an explaination for my long absence. I hope to see you afterwards.
Date: 03/17/17 02:27 pm Title: Lawyer
Andreas is a sick jerk... katherine is hysterical psycho wife... and Gus is just good Gus as he's always been xD every time it seems like the chapter is way too short, but actually your are pretty long xD just cant have enough of this story so please dont let us waiting more! XD
Author's Response:
Very good descriptions of the characters. I might have to change the summary eventually and use those descriptions giving credit of course to the orginial author. *tips an imaginary hat* That wasn't meant to come off as sarcastic as I feel it did. I meant it sincerely. I love writing Gustav he is so very much fun. I am glad you enjoy the length and they seem too short. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 03/15/17 04:20 pm Title: Lawyer
Hi ! Just wanted to say that I love this story ! Can't wait to see what will happen :D
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoy it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I hope you will enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/15/17 01:08 am Title: Lawyer
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks. :)