Date: 11/14/19 08:30 pm Title: Funeral
"Red face" for the next chapter;) but they deserve it, after almost saying goodbye to their attraction and initial crush ... I remember crying when Tom practically said goodbye to Bill for saving his marriage and of course for the sake of his daughter, and Bill with a broken heart for losing Tom and Andreas who was unfaithful ... very sad ..
But now they are together and nothing and nobody can separate them ... =)
Author's Response:
I am not sure if the red face is angry or...? They do deserve all the happiness with all they have been through already. The beginning was very emotional and I want to make sure all of this is the same feeling. However the me who wrote the beginning and the me now are different enough that I worry I haven't nailed it. They are together and happy...for now. Thanks for the review. Enjoy this chapter.
Date: 11/13/19 08:32 pm Title: Funeral
Omfg that was so sad :( I really hope Em will be okay < 3
Can't wait for chapter 28 thoooo! xo
Author's Response:
I hope so too. I wanted to write an authentic grieving experience. I completely lost it at my mother's funeral. I am glad to have built the anticpation for you. I hope you will still be excited when it rolls around. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 11/06/19 04:12 pm Title: Fear
This is most definitely not unrealistic! I used to babysit this girl when she was just 9 months old. She now turns 9 in February and I still see her and take her out to do fun stuff and I love her like she's my own. This was really fucking good and I can't wait for more! I love this story so much < 3 Also, that beginning? SUPER HOT. Gimme more *drools* xo
Author's Response:
I am glad you think so. I was worried as I reread it that it would come across as unrealistic to anyone who hasn't had a close relationship with kids. It was scary to me and felt way too soon when I fell hard for my gfs kid. The amount of love I have for that kid is insane. I am glad you have that wonderful relationship with that kid. That is so amazing to me. I am glad you like the story so much and that it is super hot. I will be doling out more as I come across oppurtunities. I hope you enjoy the next chapter which will be up soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 11/02/19 06:23 pm Title: Milk
That couple is more sympathetic than expected, I'm so happy for Bill, his parents and even Gus may disapprove of their relationship, but when they see how well they get along and love each other, everyone will support them.
Thanks and recover soon =)
Author's Response:
I like writing this story but I know even the best relationship can face scrunity sometimes. My girlfriend was in the middle of a nasty divorce when we got involved. My entire family was against me getting involved especially because of the kid in the picture and the messy relationship I had just walked away from. I am glad you liked the chapter. Thank you for your review. My cuts is already healing I just have to be careful not to exert too much pressure on it for too long of a time. The next chapter will be up soon.
Date: 10/31/19 06:34 pm Title: Milk
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it. Thank you for your review. The new chapter will be up shortly.
Date: 10/30/19 07:50 pm Title: Milk
This is sooooo good and fuck I just need them to get tested and fuck their brains out, cuz the suspense is killing me. I mean, it's said that his wife died, but you can't deny that sexual tension. Even a blind guy can see it. Very good chapter again! And get well soon < 3
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. i wanted to crank the sexual tension. I am glad it is coming across the right way. Again I am very glad you liked it and it seems I am a fast healer. The wound already doesn't hurt although there is enough damage to the nail that I am worried about it falling off so it is still bandaged and enough force makes it hurt again so I have to be careful. Thank you for your reviews and well wishes. The new chapter will be up shortly.
Date: 10/26/19 05:34 pm Title: Mediation
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review. Hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 10/23/19 10:50 pm Title: Mediation
I loved the chapter, despite being sure that I would get custody of Pumba, having the man who betrayed you in front of you, so cool! It must be terrible, Bill was calm and that was also because he is in love and no longer hurts so much the betrayal of his ex.
Congratulations for your work!!! I came to wish to be a chef but I don't have enough skill, success and keep going!
Thanks, I love your story !!
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. I wanted to show that losing an animal can be just as tramutizing as losing a child. Having the person who betrayed him was definitely painful for him. I did want to show though that Bill had himself under control. I appreciate the congratulations on the job. I have already managed to hurt myself in a way that means typing is not altogether easy or nice but I had this next chapter ready and wanted to make sure I answered reviews. I am so glad you enjoy the story. Thanks for the reviews and I hope you enjoy the next chapter.
Date: 10/23/19 09:57 am Title: Mediation
Omfg I love this story so much! I can't wait for more! < 3
Author's Response:
I am so glad you enjoyed it. There will be a new chapter today. Thanks for your review.
Date: 10/19/19 01:17 pm Title: Upgrade
I'm very surprised for the conversation between Tom and his daughter, about if Bill is his boyfriend, Emily is so mature for her age. She is my favorite character in this story. Bill and Andreas face to face I hope, Bill win this fight, and Pumba stay with him.
See you next chapter, have a nice weekend and a great week 😊
Author's Response:
I wrote Emily as very mature on purpose. Also very serious after the death of her mother. I grew up alot in a very short period of time after my mother died and felt like I wasn't allowed to be happy anymore. I wanted to show that as well as Bill being a lynch pin in making sure she doesn't take life too seriously. I am glad she comes across in the pages as I see her in life. She is such a sweet girl and so much fun to write. I had a good weekend and a lovely week. I hope you did as well. Enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 10/19/19 02:54 am Title: Upgrade
The work really consumes time, I'm glad you can spend time writing, go at your own pace just don't leave the story, please.
I hope Bill gets custody of Pumba, and although he's losing Andreas he's beating Tom;) including a girl, that is, a whole family for him.
Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
My new job does eat up alot of time and energy but I enjoy it except when I'm getting off at 9p and looking at the hour bus ride with sore shoulders going nooooo.... I am pretty sure this story will not be abandoned at this point (but no promises, my track record is spotty.) I do have the next several chapters planned out so for now I'll have new material at least once a week. The next chapter will be up in a few minutes so no spoilers. I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review. Enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 10/17/19 05:34 pm Title: Upgrade
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 10/17/19 05:49 am Title: Upgrade
Aaahw noooo Bill, he did not upgrade! No one is better than you, just ask Tom!
Fuck I love this story so much and I can't wait to read the next chapter, but just take your time < 3 sometimes life gets in the way and that's perfectly fine. xo
Author's Response:
That was the last paragraph I came up with and was exhuasted when I wrote it. I wasn't sure the emotions were going to come across like I wanted so I am glad they did and were devastating. I am glad you are willing to wait for new chapters. It does help with motivation to know that you are all invested but willing to wait when the annoying adult parts of life come along like work and such. The new chapter will be up shortly I hope you enjoy.
Date: 10/13/19 04:59 pm Title: Conversations
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you enjoyed it and I hope you will enjoy the next chapter. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/12/19 06:27 pm Title: Conversations
I feel so sorry for Emily, but at the same time, I'm really happy that Tom and Bill can finally be together! Please let them be happy *cries in Dutch* Thanks for the update! xo
Author's Response:
I have to admit your review made me giggle. It was unintentional but the *cries in Dutch* caught me off guard and caused a giggle so thank you for that. I hate doing things like this to my characters, especially ones as sweet as Emily but this was the way the story was going. Tom and Bill have a bit to go yet and we'll have to see what happens. If you've read any of my other stories you know it won't be that easy. I am glad you enjoyed this chapter and the next one will be posted as soon as I finish answering reviews.
Date: 10/11/19 01:21 am Title: Pumba
omfg!! Katherine is dead! and I have this mix feeling, I'm sad for the little Emily, but at the same time I gladd that she's not in the picture anymore for the future of the relationship for Bill and Tom.
See you in the next chapter, have a great weekend 😊
Author's Response:
I always had Katherine dying in this story and I had it written before life imploded. I had to rewrite it and I like this version better then the original. I always felt bad for Emily but felt like this was the way the story was meant to go. I definitely think this will be better for the future of Bill and Tom. I will be posting the next chapter shortly. I hope you have a lovely weekend as well.
Date: 10/09/19 10:11 pm Title: Pumba
Congratulations on your new dream job. Although that means waiting for an update;)
Things for Bill couldn't be more perfect, although that meant Kat's death.
Now the important thing is Em and that Bill can be well received in that family;)
Thank you!!!
Author's Response:
I am so happy that things finally worked out. I was getting really messed up about it thinking that whatever I was doing was shutting people down toward me. I was glad this was the interview that dispprove that. I agree that the setup for the next several chapters is there so hopefully the wait wont be too long. Chapter 18 is just about complete. It needs a final polish. I start work tomorrow so I wanted to answer reviews before bed. Based on how tired I am tomorrow there might be a new chapter but in all likliehood you'll have to wait until Friday. I agree that Emily's well being needs to be everyone's focus right now. I am glad you enjoyed it and will see you soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/09/19 05:15 pm Title: Pumba
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. The next one should be up soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/08/19 04:04 pm Title: Pumba
Oh my fucking God, I actually gasped when I read that Katherine died. It's horrible, but at the same time, I'm kinda glad? I want Bill and Tom together, they deserve happiness. I love this story so much, I can't wait for more! xo
Author's Response:
Kat dying was something I had started working on when my life went to hell. Honestly I am more pleased with this version of events then the original. This to me reads as more authentic. I am glad the story is so good for you. I will have more up soon. Chapter 18 is nearly complete but I wanted to get to reviews before bed. If I'm not completely dead after work I might post it tomorrow but it will likley be up Friday. See you soon and thnaks for the review.
Date: 10/06/19 10:15 pm Title: Casserole
I'm divided too, just like Bill would be ideal if Kat comes out of their lives but it would be very sad for Em to lose his mother so young.
What happened to the baby? I think there is no such baby but and the pregnancy test ???
There is still little hope that Bill can be with Tom .. ????
Please continue!!!!!
Author's Response:
I wanted this to be very devisive. The things that we feel in this situation are so confusing usually. I wanted Bill's feelings to reflect that. It would be very sad for Emily to lose her mother. The baby's fate is currently a mystery. I'm not even sure I'm going to bring it up again. Always a little hope. I will be posting the next chapter sometime either before or on Wednesday. Feel free to bully me if I don't get it up by then.