Date: 05/27/09 09:46 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
*jumps up and down* Oh boy oh boy how I loveth this story. So much. Giovanni is a major creeper though. Ew. I think he needs to stop but I definitely have a feeling that he wont.
I only hope that he doesnt try anything to drastic and/or....scary. Lol. If Billa gets hurt later on...or his baby! *le gasp* XD
Love this. I think I have a feeling what they may do the next day in Vegas...Weeee!
Author's Response: We're happy that you liked it! :D And about Giovanni we can't tell you so much, better read! :D Thanks for your kind review!
Date: 05/27/09 07:38 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
I just LOVE this ficcie! I need more!
Author's Response: Thanks! You will have it! :D
Date: 05/27/09 07:05 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
great story. i love how developed it is, lots of depth to the characters. i'm interested in learning more of bill's past, sounds sad. and scared of the evil neighbor. keep up the great work, i look forward to more! =)
Author's Response: You will have it soon! Thanks for your review! It makes us feel special! =)
Date: 05/27/09 05:53 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
... *listens to the wedding bells*
Author's Response: ...*listen with you* Thanks! =D
Date: 05/27/09 05:37 pm Title: The Beginning
aww i loved this chapter!
haha i loved when the lady thought bill was a girlXD
but i got sad with that conservative gay hater.. :/anyways i love it
and i cant wait for an update
Date: 05/27/09 05:31 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
Wow, I just can't get enough of this story! Every time I see that you've updated I get so excited! I really love how different this story is, it's quite refreshing.
I'd say that it was well written.. but I can't. WELL is no where near worthy enough to describe how great it is! (did I scare you? ^^ haha)
This is BY FAR one of my favorite stories. I absolutely LOVE it and if I could, I would marry it in a second =D
Another thing I like is how long the chapters are. I hate stories with super short chapters. When I finish one of your chapters, I feel satisfied unlike when I read short ones.
I also love how your story just pulls you in and makes you feel like your watching it actually unfold. It takes a really good writer to be able to do that; JUST LIKE YOU GUYS =D
I love you guys and I love your story, it's amazing!
I hope you update soon or I'll just have to take actions with my amazing action taking skillz. Or maybe I'll just kidnap you two and force you to write to my hearts desire? =D Seems like a good plan to me! Beware a crazy ladies hiding in your washing machines..
PS I CAN NOT STAND GIOVANNI grrr I want to bite him >=[
Author's Response: OMFG! We are LOVED! That's SO super cool!! *squeal* And yes yes! You evil little one! You scared the shit out of us! xD Don't worry! We have this chapter finished, we're just being lazy in posting the parts of it! To be honest...we already have this chapter and the next one and the NEXT one! xD We're really touched by your kind words! They really make us wanna write more and more and MORE! Just for you! =) So you can just kidnap you whenever you want! We will be glad to be writting for you! *send kisses and huggles* Thanks you SO SO much! Now in Spanish: Muchas muchas GRACIAS! Now in German: Vielen vielen Dank! Danke schön! Now on Finnish: Kiitos! Kiitos! Well...and there are all the languages we know! XD
Date: 05/27/09 04:55 pm Title: The Beginning
YESSS!!!!
ME LIKE ME LIKE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05/27/09 04:26 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
well absolutely lovely asi said mny times, but i fell that tom needs more character...be a little bit more strong, but anyway you`ll see, besides i would read don`t matter what...keep going and update soon .....please.
Author's Response: Aww thanks! and thanks SO much for the advice! We really want to improve ourselves! And we be sure that we're going to update soon! =)
Date: 05/27/09 04:20 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
WRITE MORE!!!
ITS AN AMAZING STORY!
I CANT WAIT UNTIL YOU WRITE ABOUT THEIR WEDDING!
Author's Response: That would be soon, we promise! The wedding it's already written so be prepared for pure fluff! XD Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/27/09 04:04 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
HMMMMM, I wonder why Tom brought Bill to VEGAS!
OH IT GET IT! The Elvis impersonators! DUH! :D
Author's Response: Was that SO obvious?! *pouts* ;P Thanks for reviewing! =)
Date: 05/27/09 03:31 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh! Haha, no I don't know it, I do know what chobits are, but nothing else :P (and manga of course :P) But my nickname comes from the name Chieana ;) in case you wondered :)
xx Chi ^^ (:P)
Author's Response: Oh yes! I was wondering that actually! Is that your name? It's actually cool and not so common! Sorry for being confusing...my bad my bad.
Date: 05/27/09 02:43 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 6
Oh god! I really hat ethat guillotine or guilotta or what ever his name is... ARGH! Tom! You don't hit people! ARGH! Bill! You don't go on dates with people with a hard-to-pronounce - name, that's wrong...
Oh god! Love is all around us! ARGH! I loved it! Please more soon! Oh, and get Guillotine in jail;D Thank you!
Author's Response: It's Giovanni! XD OMG you have make me laugh SO fucking hard! XD Don't worry Tom will not keep on hitting people but I can't assure you anything about Bill...*evil grin* and that's all I'll say! You will have more soon! Don't you worry! Thanks for the review! :D
Date: 05/27/09 02:34 pm Title: The Beginning
What was CLAMP again? ^^' I don't know it, sorry xD Or I'm just too stupid to function right atm xD
Author's Response: CLAMP is a group of very VERY talented girls that write and draw manga, which are japanese comics. They also do anime, which are japanese cartoons. And they have a manga/anime called 'Chobits' were the main character is called Chi actually and it's very damn cute! SO I was wondering if you had seen it by any chance because of your nickname but I see that not! :P
Date: 05/27/09 10:02 am Title: Becoming United as One - Part 5
cute!
Author's Response: We know! And to be honest...we've become really fluffy in this chapter! :S Thanks for the review!
Date: 05/26/09 01:37 am Title: Becoming United as One - Part 5
I love this story!! I hope you continue soon!!
xx Chi ^^
Author's Response: We will continue soon, don't worry! :D Thanks for your support and...by any chance you like CLAMP?
Date: 05/25/09 09:53 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 5
LOVE the chapter!!!
I have to say that I don't like so much malepreg but I love in this one haha...
So finally Tom meet Bill's family, they seems to be good persons well Daniel is just a little overprotective but I think is ok...
Well I don't like the idea of not telling the truth to Tom but well... I think we are going to have a little bit of drama soon...
Girls your chapters are always long and I love it!! you are an amazing writers... keep going cause I want more and soon!!!
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you SO SO much! We will keep on posting soon since we have this chapter finished and the next one! xD We're just being kinda lazy in the updates! Our bad, sorry! It made us feel special that you like this! :D Thanks again! We hope to keep you interested in this!
Date: 05/25/09 08:27 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 5
plz update soon thx=]
Author's Response: We will! =] Thx for the review!
Date: 05/25/09 06:50 pm Title: The Beginning
ahh im soo happy for bill lol :D
love it :)
Date: 05/25/09 01:27 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 5
So SO good. This keeps getting better and better!
Author's Response: Thanks!! It will get better I can assure you that!! =D
Date: 05/25/09 12:54 pm Title: Becoming United as One - Part 5
I love it!
Omg I hate Daniel and hope he dies and Bill never should have forgiven him!
Pleeeaaase update soon!
Author's Response: We're glad you loved it but...give Daniel a chance. He just wants what's the best for Bill even if he did something really stupid! LOL We will update soon so don't worry...and thanks for the review!