Date: 01/22/26 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 14
Awww twin kisses.. I love how natural their intimacy is progressing and that they’re so close they don’t have to talk too much about it right away, it could use some more dialogue though but at the same time it’s very nicely written with the sensations and closeness and all..
Date: 01/22/26 08:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
Awww twin kisses.. I love how natural their intimacy is progressing and that they’re so close they don’t have to talk too much about it right away, it could use some more dialogue though but at the same time it’s very nicely written with the sensations and closeness and all..
Date: 01/22/26 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 6
It’s a bit strange that Tom was the one super clingy to Bill and whined when he left the bunk a few days ago and now he’s cold towards Bill and don’t want his closeness? :b And they don’t seam to be bothered to be apart either.. hopefully that isn’t true otherwise it’s very out of character for what’s been written and hinted at and so on…
Date: 12/17/17 11:50 am Title: Chapter 24
this was a really good story!
i am glad that tom got to be with tom
u should do a sequel to this
Author's Response: I’ve thought about it but I’m not quite sure where to go with it. Maybe some day
Date: 12/16/17 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 20
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
an thanks for updating this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I’m sorry about taking so long! The last couple months had just been crap :( but I hope to finish the updating soon
Date: 12/15/17 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 16
please update this story soon!
Date: 06/24/17 12:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 05/10/17 04:03 am Title: Chapter 14
I just started reading this. I read all 14 chapters tonight and I love this!! :) I think the writing needs some work, but the plot is fantastic and I can't stop reading this. Can't wait for more!!!! :) In fact, it's giving me plot ideas of my own and I was wondering if you wouldn't mind if I wrote something similar or inspired by your fic? Maybe? Anyway, never mind me. Seriously great story happening here. :) So glad I decided to start reading this. :) :)
Author's Response: By all means, feel free to be inspired! (If you don't mind and post it anywhere, please just put that you were inspired by my story? ^_^).rnrn Yea, my writing needs work, but compared to the stuff I wrote 20 years ago in a different fandom this is amazing heh. rnrnThanks for the review!
Date: 03/25/17 02:31 am Title: Chapter 13
So I stumbled upon this story, thinking that it was a completely different one I was meaning to read. Only to find out it's something completely different and wow, it's awesome... I'm glad I found it!!! Sadly I can't find the story I was originally looking for but... in due time. Anyways can't wait for more!!
Author's Response: I've been there, looking for a different story, heh. So I'm glad you stumbled upon mine and liked it :)
Date: 03/21/17 04:35 pm Title: Chapter 13
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/05/17 12:27 pm Title: Chapter 12
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading!
Date: 03/05/17 04:10 am Title: Chapter 12
It would freaking me up, too...
Author's Response: Wouldn't it though?
Date: 01/18/17 03:34 pm Title: Chapter 10
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have it posted soon!
Date: 12/29/16 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have it posted soon!
Date: 12/29/16 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 9
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have it posted soon!
Date: 12/21/16 03:22 pm Title: Chapter 7
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have it posted soon!
Date: 12/19/16 05:36 am Title: Chapter 6
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to have it posted soon!
Date: 12/18/16 08:41 am Title: Chapter 5
Aww poor Gus.
Author's Response: I know but things will work out in the end :)
Date: 12/17/16 03:41 pm Title: Chapter 5
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: It was an interesting to write :)
Date: 12/15/16 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Ok I think I found an understanding of where we are at. I love the concept.
Author's Response: Thanks!