Date: 04/21/25 05:09 pm Title: THINGS FALL APART
I am a Chinese fan who came a bit late. Discovering this website is the happiest thing for me in recent years. I used to use bookmarking as commenting. I must say that I have read and bookmarked this story. Reading this story is undoubtedly a pleasure! Today I plan to leave a comment. Thank you for your story. You are an amazing writer.
Date: 12/13/16 09:29 pm Title: THINGS FALL APART
that was great
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I think you've been following my stories for a while now, right? Thanks for your support. :)
Date: 12/13/16 02:50 pm Title: THINGS FALL APART
too good, really. Can I translate it to thficcion.com?
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you very much for the review, it makes me happy! And for your interest in translating my story into Spanish. :) About translating: I have some rules, so please email me at ema [dot] dan [at] live [dot] com, and we can talk further. Ok? :)
Date: 12/10/16 08:52 pm Title: THINGS FALL APART
You write with a rare insight into your characters. It's fine to imagine what it might be but it's lovely to read a story that goes one, perhaps more, step further than our imaginations. Very well written and I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: You're spoiling me with such a wonderful review!! Thank you so much. I absolutely love psychoanalyzing the twins! When I write most of my fics, that's primarily what's going through my head; I try to insert myself into the character's head. I don't know if I ever achieve quite what I aim for, but I'm glad there's enough translation for an enjoyable story. Thank you. Your review really stoked my ego, lol. ;)
Date: 12/10/16 01:55 pm Title: THINGS FALL APART
This was so great. I can really see this being his pov if this existed. The details were nice.
Author's Response: Thank you! Your review makes me happy! I tried to write in a way that captures Tom's POV while navigating through some of their more heated moments. Glad to know you liked the result. :)
Date: 12/10/16 05:34 am Title: THINGS FALL APART
Amazing. I did want to slap Tom silly at times for being such a selfish prick, but it seems the twins have come to a point where they are both with other people sometimes but always end up back together. Really clever writing from Tom's pov. Love Helen xx
Author's Response: Thank you Helen!! :) I'm so glad you liked it. I guess my fic is about how life isn't always a straight line. I imagine it must be difficult to be in their shoes, struggling between the love of your life and a more normal life. The fact that they're glued at the hip means they'll always be pulled back together, even if not "all the way". I imagine that even in real life it's a very fine line they tread between intimacy and sexuality. :)
Author's Response: Thank you Helen!! :) I'm so glad you liked it. I guess my fic is about how life isn't always a straight line. I imagine it must be difficult to be in their shoes, struggling between the love of your life and a more normal life. The fact that they're glued at the hip means they'll always be pulled back together, even if not "all the way". I imagine that even in real life it's a very fine line they tread between intimacy and sexuality. :)