Date: 03/15/17 05:39 pm Title: TWIN TEXTS
Cheesy or not, I REALLY enjoyed this! If I can offer the slightest critique though, it would be to be careful of which tense you are using when you write and eliminate the "cuz" and "sigh" type of phrases because it makes the writing feel like a text message in some parts. That being said though, I loved this and will be adding it to my favorites and reading more. :)
Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for the critique!! Did I do that? That's definitely a mistake. Thanks for telling me. ... I just looked back and I have no idea why I did that. And so many times! Jeez, I'll have to change it. :( Anyway, I'm very glad you liked it anyway. Most of my stories, I try out a slightly different writing style or plot, so I guess this was ok in the end. Thank you! :)
Date: 01/29/17 06:41 am Title: TWIN TEXTS
Ohhhh this was cute, AND HOT ^_^
Author's Response: You're very kind. Thank you. I tried to write fluff, which isn't my forte. If you liked it though, I'm happy. :)
Date: 12/16/16 11:09 am Title: TWIN TEXTS
this was a good story!!
u should do a sequel to this!
Author's Response: That's very sweet of you, and thank you. But a sequel is out of the question for this story. lol. Sorry. While it's true that I could write something about the twins sharing a dorm at university... I think there's little substance for a plot like that. It would basically be PWP. lol.
Date: 12/16/16 03:53 am Title: TWIN TEXTS
I love cheesy. Great chapter, I could feel the heat building between them when they were sexting each other in the parking lot. The ending was so funny. Loved it xx
Author's Response: Ah, you're sweet for saying that. Thank you, Helen. :) I don't know if you can tell, but I'm absolutely terrible at writing sexts. HAHA. Which is why the twins are terrible at it too: no creativity, nothing explicit. I have zero imagination for that kind of thing... lol.
Date: 12/12/16 02:56 pm Title: PROM INVITES
Poor Tom, so confused and Bill turning the tables on him by leaving those notes. Funny, sweet chapter. Love Helen xx
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, Helen. :) Tom cracks me up in this chapter too. I wanted to find a way for the Bill to write anonymous notes like in the first chapter but in reverse, so... Tom had to be a little oblivious in order for that to work. Hahaha
Date: 12/11/16 11:10 am Title: PROM INVITES
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I just posted the final chapter. I hope you like it. Personally, I find this story super cheesy, to the point of being horrible. I was considering not even posting this. lol. But hey, I figured, why not? There's something fun about teenager twins writing naughty stuff to each other. haha.
Date: 12/10/16 10:04 pm Title: PROM INVITES
AHA!!!! Tom is a DUMBASS they were so obviously from Bill! I'm a little jealous, I never went to prom during high school because I didn't have a date, and then the one year I decided to go (with my sister tbh!!) I got heiiinously sick. It was so disappointing. Anyhow!! I kinda hope the next chapter is prom night :'D
Author's Response: Hahahaha! Yeah, for the purpose of this story, Tom was a bit slow, lol. I'm sorry your prom wasn't as eventful as the twins' will be. ;) ;) Yes, next chapter is absolutely PROM NIGHT!!! :) :) How could I resist writing it if I was writing a high school fic, right?? I had to cram all the fun into one story because I don't think I'll ever write another high school fic. lol. Anyway, I didn't have the typical Prom either. I took my best friend as my "date", who was a Junior so otherwise she wouldn't have been able to come. It was boring but ok. The drama unfolded a few days later when I finally told her I took her because I had a crush on her. HAHA!
Date: 12/10/16 08:53 pm Title: PROM INVITES
He really is a bit slow lol
Author's Response: Well, they are just high school students. They're used to drama and blowing situations like that out of proportion. lol. I didn't mean to make Tom sound so dumb, lol --although you're right and it cracks me up too! I think he's more insecure than slow. You know, like when the evidence is all in your face but you can't believe your own good luck cuz you don't think you deserve it so that means it can't possibly be true. I think Tom hasn't gotten used to being with Bill yet. Plus, I needed mystery, right??! What would y'all have done if it really wasn't Bill?? HAHAHA jk
Date: 12/10/16 02:21 pm Title: LOCKER NOTES
Beautiful! :)
Author's Response: Awwww! I think it was more cheesy instead of beautiful, but thank you so much. :)
Date: 12/10/16 12:54 pm Title: LOCKER NOTES
this was was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Another review on the first chapter!? I like your enthusiasm! Haha. Thank you!
Date: 12/10/16 12:15 pm Title: LOCKER NOTES
Love it!
Author's Response: You're too sweet. Thank you. :)
Date: 12/10/16 10:57 am Title: LOCKER NOTES
This was super cute and so well written!!! Thanks for sharing!! I can see how this was intended to be a one-shot so I'm interested to see where you take it from here. :)
Author's Response: Ah, Ms Ghostie, I don't know if it was so well written, but I appreciate that you think it was. I value your opinion as a writer. :) This was my attempt at a fluff high school fic, and then an attempt to write more fluff; but I think you'll see that in the end, this genre isn't my forte. But hey, I tried! lol. The next 2 parts are coming soon. :)
Date: 12/10/16 04:58 am Title: LOCKER NOTES
this sounds like a good story!
Author's Response: Ha. Thank you! We'll see what you think of the next 2 parts. IMO, the rest isn't really harmonious with the first part.