Date: 11/30/16 05:29 am Title: A Missed Step
One more thing. The dog isn't to blame though. What if Tom told him to stay and look at the baby... that could be true. Geo seemed to be blaming the dog a bit. That's what I got from the tone.
Author's Response: Geo was thinking of the first time Hunter didn't alert him. The stress of the situation plus his memories of that first time made him frustrated. This was just two times too many.
Date: 11/30/16 05:29 am Title: A Missed Step
One more thing. The dog isn't to blame though. What if Tom told him to stay and look at the baby... that could be true. Geo seemed to be blaming the dog a bit. That's what I got from the tone.
Author's Response: Part two is up BTW
Date: 11/29/16 04:58 am Title: A Missed Step
Part 2 please asap :)
Although it's uncomfortable to read I love these stories.
Author's Response: Sorry it's uncomfortable. I try to make it as non triggery as possible but unfortunately with a subject like this it will always have an underlying uncomfortable nature to it. I am glad that you enjoy reading them despite that though. Thanks so much. I am currently writing part 2 and it should be up soon. :)