Reviews For Together Forever
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Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/31/16 12:08 pm Title: Together Forever
Date: 10/31/16 12:08 pm Title: Together Forever
Such a cute, sad story. Bill is so protective of his twin, he's such a lovely caring brother.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for reading first off. Second, I like the idea of how protective the twins are of each other in real life. Like you can see it in their behavior, mostly from Tom to Bill but I like flipping the script. For the sake of this story, Tomi needs a protective brother and that's what Bill is for Tom.
Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/26/16 12:32 pm Title: Together Forever
Date: 10/26/16 12:32 pm Title: Together Forever
Sad story, but cute too.
P.S. You call the boys toddlers, but then in one place you said that Bill is 6 years old.
Author's Response: I consider 6 year olds to be toddlers to me, I don't know why, I guess because my mother called me a toddler until I was like 7 years old
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