Date: 10/29/16 12:40 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm hoping this turns into a long story! :)
Author's Response:
I'm planning meduim to long. We'll see how long the events I have planned so far hold out. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/28/16 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 4
Ooh very interesting to get some insight into Tom's vampire life. Looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I wanted to write that for a bit but wasn't sure when. It showed me when the right time was finally. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/28/16 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 3
Really enjoying your story!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 10/28/16 10:16 am Title: Chapter 4
this was a really good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/27/16 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 3
wohooo! I'm SO excited and curious what will be next! Bill is incredibly cute here and Tom...oh...:3
Author's Response:
I love writing this story having Tom and Bill on opposite sides like this is fun. It is fun learning with Bill about Tom and his world. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/27/16 10:55 am Title: Chapter 3
this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/27/16 04:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Sooo interesting. I like this story very much!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked this chapter. I will be posting again soon.
Date: 10/26/16 05:10 pm Title: Chapter 2
this sounds like a really good story!!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I will hopefully have the next chapter up very soon.
Date: 10/25/16 03:58 pm Title: Chapter 2
That's so so nice, I love how you portrayed both Bill and Tom, who's so so sexy!! Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Tom being sexy seems to be what many people think. I will be posting chapter three as soon as I finish it which I hope will be tonight. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/25/16 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yay!
Author's Response:
This review makes me smile. Thanks.
Date: 10/25/16 11:18 am Title: Chapter 1
Loving this story!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/25/16 11:12 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww, vampire!Tom is amazing! His mother being a witch was also a great idea, I liked the scene of her meeting with Bill very much. Thanks for great chapter!
As for the Halloween skins, they both look awesome, but I think I like the burnt one better :).
Author's Response:
I love writing this story. I have tried my hand at vampire stories before and they fell rather flat but I am enjoying this one. The witch thing kind of came at me from left field and was no where in my orginial ideas but I thought it's for Halloween, why not? I am glad you liked the story. Burnt is my fave too. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/25/16 02:49 am Title: Chapter 2
I definitely like the burnt skins when they do special things like this a lot more than jelly not gonna lie.
As for the chapter, I am in love. I cannot wait to see where this tale goes. I love Vamp!Tom it's so sexy for some reason. The writing is also really fluid and easy to follow and read. I can actually visualize what's happening. Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
I generally prefer burnt but I am excited to see if we get new skins after Halloween or just go back to the old ones.
rnI am glad you like this story. Tom is very sexy as a vampire and a lot of people seem to enjoy him. I have definitely tried to up the stakes with my writing on this one and make it feel as real as possible. The next one will be up soon. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/25/16 02:21 am Title: Chapter 2
Haha you were too fast, you posted chapter 2 before I was even half way through the first. I guessed vampire, Tom would make a sexyyyyy vampire. Give in to it, Bill! You know you want to.
I'm surprised Tom would reveal how much power he could wield over Bill's 'woefully unguarded mind', because how will Bill ever know if what he's doing is happening because he actually wants it to? I guess it's up to Tom to get him to trust him completely.
I'm glad you like the Halloween skins, I made them so I guess I shouldn't pick a favourite but I probably like the burnt one better, that's the one I'm using. For now.
Author's Response:
I was so stoked for this story that chapter 2 was basically done before even posting chapter one. Tom would definitely make a sexy vampire and while this wasn;t my orginial idea it is one that has inspired a few more chapters. I have always wanted to write a vampire story and Halloween was the perfect excuse.
rnI wanted to use that line as soon as it popped into my head so I made sure it fit into the story. Plus I have always like supernatural beings like vamps with telepathetic control over their 'victims.' I think with a proper conversation these two could easily make a run of it.
rnI've been using burnt for the better part of a year now. I liked it when it changed to all four of the guys smoking and not looking at the camera. It seemed like a very sweet moment. I checked jelly when the skin were updated and I like burnt better still, more intense. Thanks for making them they are both awesome.
rnThank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/24/16 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
I am super excited to see where this goes. Did Bill fuck a dead guy, if so, then how? So many questions! Ah, I can't wait to read the next one.
Author's Response:
I am glad I have you on the edge of your seat. I hope you will enjoy the next chapter which will be up later today actually.
Date: 10/24/16 11:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Cold skin and body drained of blood? That screams vampire to me :). I can't wait to find out more about Tom. Amazing start, I'm excited for more!
Author's Response:
I guess we will have to wait and see if your insticts are right. More is on it's way. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 10/24/16 09:30 am Title: Chapter 1
:-O Wow!!! That's amazing, girl! Can't wait for next chapter!!!
Author's Response:
I am so happy you liked it. Thanks for the review. Next chapter will be up as soon as I finish answering reviews.