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Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/19/17 02:22 am Title: The Four a Coins 'n holdin' on

It's ironic how Bill denies that he is more and more into Tom with each new day. Bill seems just a stubborn boy set to prove that everyone is wrong about him and Zane.

It seems that Zane has not revealed all his secrets yet. Bill really should do a tarot reading for Zane!

Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!

Author's Response: I totally agree with everything you said! Including wanting more! So I'm working on the next chapter for us ;)

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/16/17 08:48 am Title: The Four a Coins 'n holdin' on

Even Bushido already sees that Zane is not the right one for Bill. But I believe Bill will understand it in time. He already perceives Tom differently than before.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Everyone likes Tom and doesn't like Zane, and Bill doesn't understand why. Hopefully in the next chapter or two, he'll be able to share with us a little bit of insight to what everyone sees in these two men. Whether or not it means he'll fall in love with Tom, I'm not sure, only Bill will be able to decide that! Thanks for reviewing, Nade, see you soon!

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/17 10:08 pm Title: The Four a Coins 'n holdin' on

I sure have missed this lol Just the other day I was wondering how my favorite tarot card reader was doing lol

I'm not too sure how Bill is going to prove to everyone that Zane and him are a match made in heaven but I sure am interested to see how he does it lol. It's funny to see everyone wanting him to be with Tom and it does make me wonder how Tom has weaseled his way into everyone's hearts. I mean, I want him and Bill to end up together, but yeah, there's gotta be something that everyone else sees too. I do believe they are meant to be and are somehow soulmates, but I guess we will see.

I do think Bill may have to talk to someone about what had happened to him in the Bayou and about what Sarah did to him. But maybe just having the support of his friends and family will help. I do think Zane being her relative is not helping, though :/

I cannot wait for more! Thank you for this fantastic chapter!

Author's Response: TCG! Sorry for the wait time, but the next couple of chapters should come out sooner than every five weeks. Not having time has been killing me, but hopefully I can devote more hours to writing now. I'd like to see how Bill and Zane fare in the aftermath of Sarah, and I really want to know why no one likes Zane but everyone adores Tom, who just really kind of hangs around not doing much of anything! Maybe it's his aura, I'm not sure... Bill's dealing with the whole kidnapping/attempted murder thing as best he can. At least he talked to Anis about it, and he's determined to get past it. Zane and Sarah and the familial resemblance, that's probably not such a good thing! Thanks for always taking the time to write, see you next chapter!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/17 12:55 pm Title: The Four a Coins 'n holdin' on

this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you, JF69! Working on the next one right now!

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/11/17 01:54 am Title: The Four a Coins 'n holdin' on

I hate thinking this but everyone's right about Zane. I know what happened wasn't directly his fault but I can't help thinking that maybe things might be been different had he told Bill about Sarah. And even if not I think Bill should've given himself a little space from Zane afterwards. I mean her was hit by a car and kid napped for christsake not to mention ms. P !!!!

Anis and Tom are going out for a beer? Alright, I can dig it! Lol

Great chapter !!

Author's Response: I love that you're trying your hardest to be fair and kind to Zane, that's very sweet! He definitely could have handled the situation better, but you know what they say about hindsight... Bill probably could have used some space, but Zane's going to want to try to make things up to him, and Bill obviously wants to keep the relationship going, even with the disaster that is Sarah. Tom and Anis going for beer? That surprised me, too. I think Tom's just one of those guys everyone gets along with. Must be nice! Thanks for your review, ILWT!

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/17 09:41 pm Title: The Four a Coins 'n holdin' on

Really good chapter. But seriously we all see it that Zane will always be trouble. Bill needs to realize it soon :)

Author's Response: Now now, mcr1970, it might SEEM like Zane will always be trouble, but maybe, just maybe, everything will be just fine from here on out! That's what we all want, isn't it? Bill and Zane, happily ever after? Let's hope for the best!

Reviewer: Kaulitzlover Oo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/06/17 11:57 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

It's been a month since you last updated this story and i just hope everything its ok, i miss reading this universe and cant wait to see whats gonna happen next.

Greetings from México 😘

Author's Response: Hola mi Amiga! Encanta la d.f.! I'm so sorry to keep you waiting, it's been a busy time and I'm missing all of you and the story, too. Hopefully a new chapter will be posted on Monday! See you there!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/17/17 01:59 pm Title: That Sexy Knight a Swords

I just wrote you a long review that doesn't seem to show up. In case it's gotten lost in cyberspace I'll say I loved this chapter. You finally got me feeling sympathy for Zane. Poor thing. Still on team Tom, but I'll feel sorry for Zane when/if he and Bill break up. Hope my other review shows up too. Love you xx

Author's Response: Sympathy for Zane?? Score! We'll see if that sticks, maybe to the point that you'll be on Team Zane in the future...right? Hmm....maybe not. Anyway, just sent you a long email. I've got to get to work on chapt 14! Love you!

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/17 10:55 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Love the chapter. And that kiss too.

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm hoping there are more smooches in the future😀

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/17 03:07 am Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Forgot to say: The Kiss of Bill with Tom was hot and loving and all kinds of amazing!

I think Bill should do a reading for Zane... Will he ever?

Author's Response: Wow, am I glad that kiss came out just right...how could Bill possibly resist Tom now?! And a reading for Zane...great idea.... I'll keep it in mind!

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/08/17 03:04 am Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

I feel sorry for Zane (what a messed up life story!), but not enough to wish he and Bill stayed together. I think Bill deserves better. Bill deserves Tom.

Great chapter as always!

Author's Response: I feel sorry for Zane, too. But I think we're all kind of rooting for Tom ftw, huh?

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/07/17 07:35 am Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

this was a really good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Hello Jesse4ever! Thanks! Me too!!

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/17 10:01 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Holy hell, that wasn't an easy read. I've never been quiet about how I feel about Zane, but oh my goodness, poor Zane and what he had to go through. That hurt my heart and my stomach was all knotted reading it. I'm glad he was able to finally open up to Bill and tell him everything. It was definitely time!

I do think him needing to go see Sarah isn't going to help Bill or their relationship, though. But at the same time, I think he does need to go see her.

And then there is Tom, oh so sweet and loving and safe Tom. *sigh* I hope he doesn't get anymore hurt than he already probably already is. Him and Bill would be so good together, but not before Bill and Zane are done. No more kissy kissy while attached lol I do love that Bill feels so safe with Tom and that when he woke up from his nightmare that Tom was the first one he thought of. And the text, omg! Of course Tom would know that Bill would have nightmares. Just too sweet.

I cannot wait for them to meet for coffee and to see what you have in store for us next.

Congratulations, again, on being featured! You totally deserve it!

Author's Response: It's getting so complicated! Now we have to feel sorry for Z, and B may never fall in love w/T!but I suppose we'll see how this all unfolds. Thanks as always for writing, see you in the next chapter!

Reviewer: Kaulitzlover Oo Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/17 02:45 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Okay, first thing first... That was the best kissing scene i've ever read on this site omg, Kudos girl! I have to say that i feel a lot more compassion for Zane now that I know the whole story, but shitty past aside i don't think he's right for Bill and Bill himself is staring to realize that even tho he refuse to accept it just yet, i feel like his feelings for Zane have shifted and now when he thinks about him his focus is on how handsome he is and how blue his eyes are but that's it, (and considering all the mess that's has happened i cant blame him) and when he thinks about tom he feels loved, appreciated and safe and damn the boy knows how to kiss 💋 😂 i think he's attracted to Tom on a more spiritual level.

Can't wait for next chapter tho something tells me next chapter won't be a happy one for Tom, Bills gonna break his heart just like the last time he read the cards for Tom 😕 Oh, and CONGRATS ON THE FEATURE! Its very well deserved 💖

Author's Response: Best kiss ever on this site?? I'm gonna go back and read it! You've got some astute observations on B and how he seems to be emotionally removed from Z. But even though he's feeling closer to T, doesn't mean he's in love! I'm ready to sink in to the next chapter, but going out of town this week 😕...see you soon, though, and thanks!!!

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/17 12:50 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

If Bill stays with Zane, Sarah will be a part of their life forever. But Tom is the one Bill needs when he's troubled by nightmares. How long will it take for Bill to realize it?
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.

Author's Response: Bill certainly seems to like Tom a lot, but that doesn't mean he's like, in luuurrrv with him...yet..if it ever happens. Fingers crossed!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/17 10:57 am Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

And congrats on the feature! I hope more people find this gem now!! 

 



Author's Response: Thank you! That was a lovely surprise. I hope more people are having fun with this too... Makes for a better ride!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/06/17 01:17 am Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Ahhhhhhhhh, it's just not RIGHT and this one we're gonna do right, RIGHT? I'm worried Zane woke up early and snooped in Bill's phone, but I kind of don't want him to have to deal with more of a situation than a simple breakup that's as kind as possible. Sarah really screwed his life up, but that's not Bill's responsibility to stay with him just for that. He's feeling unsafe and Tom is just better, though either psychic or actually the best person ever. (How can I get that awesome?) You should have heard me after reading your review on said old story, HA. 



Author's Response: You already ARE that awesome! My phone won't let me leave long responses, so I'll just say that I think Tom's link to Bill is awesome, too! But is it love?

Reviewer: ceciliawashere Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/17 10:18 pm Title: The Three a Cups. Two too many.

ohmygod okay so i've been reading this almost nonstop and to be honest you got me hooked since the very beginning and now i feel awful for not reviewing earlier :( you'll have to forgive ne but i totally suck at reviewing, i either rant nonsense like right now or comment something very short lol i just wanted to let you know i'm completely in love with this story and i know you said it takes long for you to update but please don't stop doing it!
wow i really suck at this anyway i'm currently screaming at bill, zane, tom and bushido all together O.O!!
i love tom, he sounds like a nutcase so far but he's funny lol
zane, i suspect he's got a wife or something mmmmm...
and bushido, i die a little every time there's a convo with him and bill :((( but bill needs to let him go for good and get over him somehow :(

thanks for writing, i'll keep on reading now!

Author's Response: I forgive you! I'm thrilled to know you're enjoying the story, and I promise I won't stop updating. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: kireinayorudakara Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/17 07:36 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Woah woah woah, I'm only halfway, but I had to stop and mention that I haven't really ever heard UCLA called anything but UCLA, and I'm from SoCal. Not sure if you'd want to change it, but it struck me as so odd 😂



Author's Response: UCLA!! I know that, daammmnn.. I'll have to fix it. For shame! I grew up in socal!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/05/17 07:28 pm Title: The Page a Swords 'n the truth he brings

Having a feeling zane isn't all there. He may snap at Bill if he gets defensive about tom.

Author's Response: So you're suggesting that mental illness might run in Zane's family? Hmm maybe he'll end up taking Bill into the bayou and tying him to a tree! Lol...

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