Date: 09/30/16 10:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh Its great!!! Scary!! And so well tell ;) sorry my bad english! So interesting! I definitivamente want more. Much more! ;)
Author's Response: Thank you much and, yep, there is still more to come. :D
Date: 09/30/16 07:46 am Title: Chapter 5
Uh oh, who would put their hand in to the water in such conditions? Silly Bill, hopefully he will manage to get himself out of this situation!
Eva -suprasingly beautiful name ;)
Author's Response: Sometimes you have to check your ghost bathwater to make sure it's not too warm. Don't want to scald your ghosts, after all. But, yeah, don't touch creepy ghost water. That's the PSA of the day.
Date: 09/30/16 06:16 am Title: Chapter 5
What, five chapters and you've already murdered Bill ? D:
Things are starting to get spooky... I love it !! I'm eager to see what's on the tape about the painting, it can't be nothing...
AND DAMMIT THE BATHTUB okay I'm happy to have a shower now. Like really.
(...But please don't kill Bill, he seems nice D: )
I can't wait to read what's next !
Author's Response: Murder most tub! Apparently folks have been thinking I was gonna murder Bill off since part one. The boy must be marked.rnrnFinally spooky! \o/rnrnAnd, man, you have to always suspect the murder tub. Nothing good can come from a murder tub.
Date: 09/28/16 12:22 pm Title: Chapter 4
I just moved into a new apartment and spent half an hour trying to locate the source of a dripping sound in the bathroom. And then I read this. I’m feeling a bit uneasy now, even though it’s probably just old pipes.
Still love this story though :).
Author's Response: If it helps any, I can hear water dripping right now, too. Of course it's also raining a little, so that's most likely what it is in my case, but still. Drip drip drip.
Date: 09/28/16 12:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
I've just read the four chapters in a row, so hey new reader !
I like this story so far. The twins are... Hm. Adorable and yet totally stubborn. I like that, even though I would TOTALLY be as desperate as Gustav.
Georg's obsession with renovating the house is cinnamon roll material too. Got me even excited about it (though I never like, got excited about houses before - except if it involves bookshelves).
And Gustav... Poor, poor Gus, I think your future totally involves some other cold sandwiches, brace yourself XD
I'm puzzled about the dripping Bill has heard though. Tom's flashlight could totally be a coincidence, but this... I don't know, it feels weird.
Looking forward to see more, thank you for writing this ! :)
Author's Response: Hi, new reader!rnrn*waggly creepy fingers* Things are starting to get spooky all up in this house. Spooooooky.
Date: 09/28/16 01:47 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm tracking this, looking forward to the rest :)
Author's Response: With any luck, I shan't disappoint. :D
Date: 09/28/16 01:27 am Title: Chapter 4
Oh, he's GONNA have a whole day of cold sandwiches and clammy ghost hands clasping at him coming. I can feel them already. Bill wont leave when he finds a ghost, he'll try and save it. From behind Tom. Or try and take a selfie with it, haha
Author's Response: The COLDEST of sandwiches and the coldest of hands to go with them *spooky!* rnrnI can absolutely see Bill trying to snap a ghost selfie. It would be the fastest selfie he EVER took.
Date: 09/27/16 09:00 pm Title: Chapter 3
OMG what has Bill done. O_O
Author's Response: THINGS.
Date: 09/26/16 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Oh, where is Bill...???
Author's Response: *mystery of the ages*
Date: 09/26/16 07:25 am Title: Chapter 3
Awww, I hope that Bill is ok!
Author's Response: *dun dun duuuun*
Date: 09/25/16 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Bill will be the first to faint and run away. Tom will refuse to believe it, Gus will get a weapon and Georg will try to reason with it and them. O_O OR NOT, knowing you. XD
Author's Response: *AGGRESSIVELY INNOCENT FACE*
Date: 09/25/16 12:11 pm Title: Chapter 2
I really liked Georg in this chapter, his raptures over the old furnishings was cute - to be honest, I'd probably react the same way :). And I love the way you write dialogues, they are smooth and natural. Thanks for update, hope you'll post more soon!
Author's Response: Georgs craftsman's heart has grown three sizes since getting in that house. All that wood. So much beautiful wood.
Date: 09/25/16 08:29 am Title: Chapter 2
Twins are so cute and carless, that I almost expected one of them to be killed already in this chapter, haha.
Very interesting, can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Awww, you can't start killing people before it even gets dark! You need atmosphere for that kinda thing. ;)
Date: 09/25/16 08:26 am Title: Chapter 1
Great to something new from you!
Seems like very interesting story, will definitely read it!
Author's Response: It's nice ot have something to post. :) Happy reading!
Date: 09/23/16 01:51 am Title: Chapter 1
BAHAHAHAHA No one does dialog for the guys better than you do. Hurry up and post the bit where grown men wander around in the dark scaring themselves. That's my favorite part of every ghost hunter show. When the dudes get scared, threaten thin air like they've come to kick the ghost's ass and then scream like a little girl and faint when the wind blows. XD AWESOME first chapter. *bounces*
Author's Response: I think that might be chapter three. ;) *loves on*
Date: 09/23/16 01:01 am Title: Chapter 1
I absolutely love THF around Halloween time and enjoy all the new horror-themed stories that come out.. I'm looking forward to seeing where you take this one :)
Author's Response: Hopefully this one will be spooky enough to warrant that 'horror' tag I put on there. Gotta earn those spooky points.
Date: 09/22/16 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 1
Excited to see something new from you, lady! It's great so far.
Author's Response: *courtly bow* :D
Date: 09/22/16 03:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha that's funny...so far, though. I believe that later it will be more scary...
Author's Response: Hey now, can't throw the horror at ya all at once. You gotta save the monsters for the right time. ;)
Date: 09/22/16 08:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Great start! I love horrors and this seems like an exciting story. Can't wait to read more :).
Author's Response: Thank you much! Hopefully it'll all be worth it. :)