Reviews For Out of control
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Reviewer: liulibai Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/12/25 12:13 am Title: In charge

Oh my god, why isn't there any follow-up!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/30/16 08:51 am Title: In charge

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/16 08:29 pm Title: In charge

Great chapter!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/16 05:44 pm Title: In charge

Great chapter :)

Reviewer: bill-and-tom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/29/16 04:15 pm Title: Strange encounters

That story is interesting!!! Well done for now!!! I can't wait for more!!! And i can't wait to learn why Tom is so crazyyyyy!!!

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/16 07:46 am Title: Captive

this sounds like a really good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter~!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/23/16 10:38 am Title: Captive

Great chapter!

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/16 05:26 pm Title: Captive

Wow, Tom's crazy xD Great chapter :)

Author's Response: Super crazy! He gets a backstory though! So you'll find out why he's such a weirdo.

Reviewer: Loveluv67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/22/16 03:49 pm Title: Captive

Oh wow wasn't expecting that!! Really lookin forward to the next update :)

Author's Response: Yeah, Tom's a little bit odd! I wanted to make him a little crazy though!

Reviewer: Absinthe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/16 04:05 pm Title: Strange encounters

Seems like a good start ! I'm eager to see more, this first chapter seems interesting. Bill's personality as you described it in the summary is something I can't wait to see more of, as I'm basically a control freak too. And this mysterious stranger...

Thank you for writing this story, I hope to see more soon !

Author's Response: We're definitely going to be seeing more of that in the upcoming chapters! I'm a bit of a control freak as well, so I'm trying to channel that into Bill!

Reviewer: KureSdentS Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/16 04:42 am Title: Strange encounters

What a start ! I really want to know how Tom will get in touch with Bill again and the way he will find to take control. Please update soon.

Reviewer: Lulaxth Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/21/16 01:50 am Title: Strange encounters

omg continue please

Author's Response: Will do! I'm glad you like it so far!

Reviewer: TomsParkingOnly Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/16 03:43 pm Title: Strange encounters

Great start!

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