This story is getting more and more sweet witch each chapter d84;d84;d84;d84; I simply lpve it d84;

soooooo sweeeet.... almost toothaching :DDD But I love it!

I would like this review to be worth a few, not only one. I am used to comment with my other account here, aathaa but today i wanted to do this with this one so you know "who" i am...

I have noticed slower updates, hiatus something that since i have been over here never happened, you always updated every saturday even on weekly days... and now it´s not happening.

I believe this might have a lot to do with getting less comments and motivation being damaged...

How can i make that change? i can´t. But i should do something about it, and here is what i would do...

Your stories are AMAZING. That´s a fact that you should know. But you don´t know how do they make me feel, how i can get a couple of hours to read this new book someone gave me and right before going to sleep I prefer to read one of your stories once again, because some of your stories i even know the dialogues by heart.

I am sure that i bought books with fewer quality than yours and i find extremely caring that you give your art to us FOR FREE and using some characters we know and can totally picture...

I don´t know how to change a situation that does not depend on me (or yes because i am guilty of reading stories tired at night and not giving a review to them). but that does not mean i don´t love them.

Or sometimes i read 4-5 even a full story at once, and i don´t stop to review... I think i don´t realize how important those are... but again that does not mean i don´t absolutely love them.

I think that the number of reviews would not have to mean how motivated you feel, i think of Tokio hotel themselves, they might not have so many people like in the past, yet they seem to be happier than ever.
I would like you to think about the art you create, and not the amount of people buying it because as the band themselves, the fact that less people buy their records does not mean they are worse... in fact they are better than ever.

I want to think that i hold this treasure and not many people are aware of it, and that happens to your stories too.

So please don´t lose your motivation, your power and your creativity, don´t let anyone ruin what you have in your mind and in your heart, let it flow and let us enjoy it...

And please take this as a comment coming straight from the heart of someone that ADORES What you do and is very thankful for what you share FOR FREE with us.

;)

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! The ending was adorable! *wipes away tears* same with the beginning, tom's dream or whatever melted me!! especially how she said daddy tom and daddy bill! i loove it!

Yes! So cute, they'll really be an amazing family!!

i think a pregnant bill crying is adorable! daddy Tom would be the best!

Happy tears. So sweet, and exactly what I'd hoped for. Thank you 😊 xx

Yeesssssss!!!!!!!! Fucking YYYAAASSSSS!!!!! *does a crazy ridiculous victory dance* Tom and Bill would be so friggin unspeakably adorable as dads and ....husbands? Huh? Huh? Wadda ya think?

Well, of course he's thinking about keeping her!!! And Bill's the one being silly here, so there. He sooooo loves The Brat.

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!