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Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/17 12:20 am Title: Chapter 13

I'm totally imagining 2008 Bill with the chubby cheeks when he was sick. Cute little chipmunk :3

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/17/17 12:04 am Title: Chapter 11

Love the best friend duo of Bill and Natalie. And yay he's finally admitting his feelings. Btw how old is Tom here?? I can't work it out

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/17 11:45 pm Title: Chapter 10

Damn that was so close... i wish Bill had still been awake when Tom had come on. Or maybe he was and just pretending not to be. The virus cracking bit reminded me of Mr. Robot-sounds so intense and scary to think that those type of hackings are possible

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/17 10:15 pm Title: Chapter 9

aww theyre gonna be grandparents

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Date: 04/16/17 10:07 pm Title: Chapter 8

Aw i can see the feelings developing already between them.. it can't be long.

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/17 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 7

I like the bitchiness of Andreija. Reminds me of Mean Girls when they are bitching at each other and Bill asks if she's gained weight. I'm glad Bill stood up for himself though.

Reviewer: wastedgermanyouth Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/16/17 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm kinda late to the boat here haha but been reading through the chapters and liking it so far. I am hoping Tom and Bill will end up together and then they will keep the baby, but let's see how the story progresses... :)

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/21/17 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 20

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: heleng Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/13/17 04:07 am Title: Chapter 20

Oh, this is just too cute. I'm just hoping nothing is going to drop on them to ruin their happy little family plans. No last minute interference from Bill's family, or the baby's shit of a father suddenly deciding he wants custody. Happy ending please, but not yet...a few more chapters first xx

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/09/17 05:07 am Title: Chapter 20

The caveman beard gives him a look I think. Rawr!!!

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/17 10:55 am Title: Chapter 20

They are amazing together, a perfect couple! I´m smiling like an idiot right now!

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/17 09:21 am Title: Chapter 20

"...and preferably very pregnant". I laughed so damn hard at that!! They're so perfect for each other.

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/08/17 09:15 am Title: Chapter 19

So sweet!!! I can't wait to hear their daughter's name!

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/17 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 20

Love the chapter. It's nice that Tom's parents are so open to Tom an Bill.

Reviewer: LennaWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/17 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 20

Why the chapters seems so short when they actually arent that short? Ugh, I really feel like the story is slowly going to the end, but I dont want it to end! At the other hand, Im way too curious... how will they call her? 😱😍

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/07/17 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 20

Great chapter :D

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/17 01:30 pm Title: Chapter 19

this was a good chapter~!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/06/17 03:11 am Title: Chapter 19

I just love this story all over the place!

Reviewer: MonsoonTwc Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/17 10:22 pm Title: Chapter 19

You're back thank goddddd

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03/05/17 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 19

Love the chapter. Tom is so sweet with Bill.

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