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Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/16 02:52 am Title: Chapter 3

I'm not good with words so I'll just say thank you for a great chapter! Tom's character is growing on me, he is genuinely kind to Bill. Looking forward to more!

Author's Response: he's just a genuinely nice guy. sadly, there aren't many of those left in the world. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TragicStateofAffairs Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/12/16 02:21 am Title: Chapter 3

Thank you for this story. I don't know where it's going or what I am going to read, but it's been a minute since I've been on here...and I'm glad this was my first adventure back. I can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: good to have you back, and i'm flattered my little ol' story is what drew your attention! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: TomsCanadianGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/16 08:22 pm Title: Chapter 3

I have no idea how I missed that you posted a new story but I am now caught up and am really enjoying this. Way to go Tom for being the sweetie he is and helping Bill out!
It's great that Bill will have a safe place to stay now and wont be living on the streets, especially since he is pregnant! I do feel like his mother would like him to be home but it's all his father keeping him from being there. I hope his mother takes up Tom's offer and will visit him.
I love this and can't wait for more! :)

Author's Response: i'm still rather torn about whether or not we'll see simone again. stay tuned!

Reviewer: Liss92 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/16 06:55 pm Title: Chapter 3

Bill's dad seems like a real piece of work...great chapter as always and can't wait for next Saturday!

Author's Response: yeah he's a bit of a shit. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/16 05:35 pm Title: Chapter 3

I hope Jost steps on a lego. I hate that guy. Loving this though! ;) You know I do!

Author's Response: ow! damn!

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/11/16 01:31 pm Title: Chapter 3

Great update!

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: ura_hd Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 11:28 pm Title: Chapter 3

Is it a universe where men can get pregnant? Or usbitvsomethj v special about Bill?

Ton is a great guy! This is quite a deed to take in an unfamiliar pregnant teenager. Bill is surely lucky. Bill's parents however is an abdomination.

Author's Response: men can get pregnant, but it's not really common. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 05:58 pm Title: Chapter 3

Awh, poor Bill :( But Tom really is an amazing guy :) And it seems like Bill's mother isn't that bad. Great chapter :)

Author's Response: i'm undecided about simone. we may see more of her...maybe not. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: NeonPink89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 3

The cliffhanger is gonna kill me lol

Author's Response: *evil laugh*

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 03:11 pm Title: Chapter 3

Hm, it goes better than I thought.... so far...

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

Reviewer: bmccray Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 01:20 pm Title: Chapter 3

I felt like Simone kinda misses her son. KINDA! Tom is so nice to let a stranger stay with him. Ca t wait for the next update!

Author's Response: isn't he just disgustingly sweet???

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 12:38 pm Title: Chapter 3

What is it with our Tom's and taking in confused Bill's with crappy parents? God bless our Tom's, what would we do without them?

Author's Response: have really lame stories!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/10/16 11:07 am Title: Chapter 3

Oh he is already pregnant. Poor little cutie :( Tom is a hero. I like this Tom so much. And this little Bill. I love this history. Thanks. Please update soon ;)

Author's Response: *imagines tom in a cape* hmm, nope, can't really see it. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Kaulalii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/08/16 06:11 am Title: Chapter 1

Yaaaay! Love it already! Can't wait for the next chapter :))

Author's Response: it's up now! thanks for reading!

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/07/16 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 2

Nice, I like!

Author's Response: new chapter is up!

Reviewer: sacredtom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/06/16 10:52 am Title: Chapter 2

Aaw i really love this :D

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/16 11:57 am Title: Chapter 2

I'm loving this! Hope Toms niceness doesn't bite him in the ass later.

Author's Response: lol skeptical much? thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/16 11:48 am Title: Chapter 1

Intriguing! Off to catch up...

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/04/16 02:24 am Title: Chapter 2

I love it! I'm looking forward new chapter. Thanks.

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Lizard Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/16 10:00 pm Title: Chapter 2

Tom'so such a good guy. I'm surprised he doesn't have like 4 stray dogs he's taken in... just a human stray, hehe. ^_^

Author's Response: yeah one human stray is more than enough. thanks for reading!

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