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Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/16 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 6

this sounds like a really good story!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks very much! new chapter will be up on saturday!

Reviewer: Lulaxth Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/03/16 03:31 am Title: Chapter 6

aw that was a cute chapter. i love reading dialogues

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: Zarlina Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/16 08:18 am Title: Chapter 6

I want a hacker Tom, too! And ugh, I love this. It's not fair how amazing this story is already. I'm jealous!

Author's Response: pfft! whatevs!

Reviewer: elixirsix Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/02/16 01:04 am Title: Chapter 6

Love it!

Author's Response: thanks!

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 6

I'm telling you!!!! They're freaking adorable together!!!!!

Author's Response: i know right???

Reviewer: MonsoonTwc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 6

I just love pregnant bill he's so adorable

Author's Response: i know right???

Reviewer: NeonPink89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 6

Totally loving this story :)

Author's Response: thanks very much! i am too!

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 6

Great chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for reading!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 06:00 pm Title: Chapter 6

Haha, the end cracked me up. They're adorable ;*

Author's Response: tom is putty in bill's hands!

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 05:38 pm Title: Chapter 6

I totally loved their conversation, hihi. Great chapter :)

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 12:24 pm Title: Chapter 6

Lindoooos

Author's Response: not sure what that means...but thanks for reading!

Reviewer: MissAnna Signed [Report This]
Date: 10/01/16 11:27 am Title: Chapter 6

The ending of this chapter was just adorable. I can picture Tom being at his beck and call for real.

Author's Response: cuz bill is just too irresistible!

Reviewer: sacredtom Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/16 05:49 pm Title: Chapter 1

OMG I love this Tom!!
when can we see more interaction between these two? ^^

Author's Response: pretty much in every chapter lol thanks very much!

Reviewer: Kaulalii Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/26/16 10:35 am Title: Chapter 5

“Well, one of us had to say it.” :DD
I love this story more and more!

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: username bi Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/16 05:52 pm Title: Chapter 5

Ooo!!! Hell yeah Tom is gorgeous!!
I think Bill's still kinda in shock and a bit of denial about the whole situation though. Which is totally understandable. I don't get why Tom isn't.

Author's Response: hell yeah he's gorgeous!

Reviewer: Absinthe Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/16 04:54 pm Title: Chapter 5

It's logical that Bill doesn't want to keep the baby, even if it's sad. He's alone, doesn't work, and is all but prepared to raise a child... I hope his mindset will change, but I liked this realism. :) Also, he's not already loving the baby to death, more scared and not knowing what to do - and I loved that, too ! It's not fun for him, but it's realistic. Aaaaand realism is important to me as you can see. XD

I'm eager to see what's next. Thanks you for writing this story, it's awesome ! :)

Author's Response: i'm big on realism too...but then other times i write a happily ever after. thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Zuzu21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/16 12:58 pm Title: Chapter 5

Oh, I canīt imagine that I would gave my child away to some strangers to raise it.... :( I love my two little girls too much!
But I understand that Bill is very young. Maybe....Tom could change his mind...?

Author's Response: but tom's not even "involved," with bill or the baby....thanks for reading!

Reviewer: The_poltergeist Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/16 10:09 am Title: Chapter 5

Man. You really made me hate Andreja! ugh. But Natalie is awesome! And so are Bill and Tom, of course. Love this!

Author's Response: and we haven't even seen the last of andreja! that bitch!

Reviewer: Ninel Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/25/16 12:46 am Title: Chapter 5

😆😆😆.

Author's Response: thanks very much!

Reviewer: Haylz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/24/16 11:48 pm Title: Chapter 5

Tom is so perfect in this! lol the last line made me laugh. Yes, one of us did have to say it!!

Bill's parents are such douches, my god.

Author's Response: quite douchetastic, aren't they? and hell yeah tom is fucking gorgeous! thanks for reading!

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