Date: 08/16/16 06:17 pm Title: dusk
WHAT?!
I've been so impatiently waiting for someone to write this prompt, and here you are with the most perfect first chapter ever and now I need more. I NEED IT. I know I shouldn't have read it before it was completed but it was this prompt and I needed to know how you would handle it! Ugh. Please give me more. Soon. Not TH soon. We don't like that kind of soon.
(sorry for the lame review, typing on my phone and it's a bitch to review from so it gotta do)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! Don't worry, I don't like TH soon either, so I'm going to do my very best to update quickly! And your review made me very happy, thank you! <3
Date: 08/16/16 05:26 pm Title: dusk
Great start! That prompt was interesting and I'm glad you decided to take it. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I thought it was interesting as well, my brain started to work on it immediately. I hope you'll like my take on it :) Thank you for this sweet review!
Date: 08/16/16 03:29 pm Title: dusk
Oh you write very well, I like the dark and gloomy atmosphere you created ! And how does Tom know Bill, was he one of his child patients or something? This is a really good and intriguing beginning !!
Author's Response: Thank you, I definitely tried to make it gloomy, so I'm happy to hear it worked! You'll get some answers in the next chapter, as soon as I've written it :)rnrnThanks for leaving such a lovely review!