Date: 04/07/17 05:17 am Title: dawn
WHY DIDN'T YOU TELL ME YOU POSTED THIS?!!! How dare you.
But oh my god, finally! This was such a perfect ending. Not happy sappy but at least hopeful, like it should be in a story like this.
Also, can I tell you that when they talked about borders closing and countries working on a cure, I only thought about playing Plague Inc and how to watch everyone die while I laugh at closed borders that won't ever save them. I'm evil. I know.
LOVED THIS! Thank you so much for finally finishing it and I so can't wait for your next one! (And witch Bill. Gimme!)
Author's Response: I'M SORRY, I DIDN'T WANT TO BOTHER YOU :o Hopeful was definitely what I was aiming for so thank you for mentioning that!! And yes you're evil, but I kind of love it, haha. Thank YOU for giving me the final push to finish this and I promise I'm moving on to witch!Bill right now!!! Thank you <333
Date: 04/07/17 03:33 am Title: dawn
Love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 04/06/17 03:29 pm Title: dusk
oh my godoh my god oh my god you write SOOOOO GOOD you have crazy amounts of talent. So excited to read the rest of this! What an amazing idea and so perfectly executed.
Author's Response: omfg thank you?? I'm like twenty shades of tomato right now, and I hope you won't find the next chapters disappointing :) THANK YOU!
Date: 04/06/17 03:14 pm Title: dawn
Bittersweet because I love it but at the same time I'm sad that it's over! I would love to see more of this world, these characters. It was the perfect ending though, with the kiss. Their future seems so bleak but there is hope and happiness in both of them when they are together 😭
Author's Response: Thank you, I'm so relieved you liked the ending! That was one of the hardest parts for me to write. And bleak but with hope is 100% what I was going for, so I'm really happy that it came across! :) Thank you so much for all your lovely reviews <33
Date: 10/27/16 12:35 pm Title: night
Damn I can't believe I missed this ! I remember reading the first chapter (and I thought it was awesome) (I still do) but I didn't knew you had posted the seconde one. So I'm happy I finally stumbled on it !
Bill's situation is awfully sad. Loosing a kid is... One of the worst thing I can imagine of. This with the money deprivation, the starving... He doesn't seems like a bad guy, despite the robberies. Just a desperate person that would do anything to fed his family.
I'm eager to know more about the context. The ickness the children seem to get, the financial crisis, Bill also mentioned the closed borders... This is really interesting, I wonder what's going on.
I really like this, I hope to see more of you very soon, your ideas, characters and writing are awesome ! Keep up the good work ! :)
Author's Response: Oh, thank you for this!! I'm so happy you found it again! And yes, Bill's definitely more desperate than a bad guy, I'm glad you see it that way :) The third (which is also the last) chapter is going to have some of that context you want, I promise. I just have to write it, which is ... not going as fast as I'd hoped. But it's definitely coming!! And more stories are in the works, too, thank you very much for the encouragement!!! :D
Date: 08/27/16 12:07 am Title: night
Soooo beautiful. Your writing is just amazing. Very interesting to get deeper into Bill and Tom's relationship. I want to know so much more about Bill and his backstory especially. I love your super caring and compassionate Tom and reluctant Bill, I can't wait to see how this resolves! Thanks for updating!!
Oh and the ketchup.........noooooooo
(edited bc i forgot it was only 3 chapters ;o; YOU BETTER HAVE MORE FIC UP YOUR SLEEVE....)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I've always admired your writing so to hear that you like mine is such a HUGE compliment to me, thank you!! And... I have tons of ideas for fic, a couple of first chapters, one or two things outlined... I just need to figure out what I want to focus on, ahem. Again, thank you so much for your review, it made me super happy! <3
Date: 08/26/16 06:46 pm Title: night
Ewwwww, ketchup spaghetti. I think I really felt Bill's pain when I imagined eating that xD. Curious to see how this goes. Wouldn't a doctor have more money? This Tom is sush a slob it makes me uncomfortable, lol. Maybe Bill can be his maid.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm sorry to say Bill enjoyed his spaghetti tremendously xD And Tom's a very dedicated doctor in very desperate times, so you can't blame him for being a little less organized than usual, really :p Thank you so much for your lovely review, I hope the last chapter will be able to satisfy your curiosity!
Date: 08/26/16 06:21 pm Title: night
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: 08/26/16 02:25 pm Title: night
Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/26/16 07:04 am Title: night
I am loving this so much, I love the world you've created, and Tom is just divine - oh my review cut off because I made a heart LOL. Anyway the rest of my review talked about how I just feel so much for Bill and wanna take him home, feed him and snuggle him forever. And that this is one of my favourite fics of the moment!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I'm so happy you like the worldbuilding, it's kind of an experiment for me so to hear that it works for you honestly made my day! :D And thank you for that amazing compliment! <3
Date: 08/26/16 05:06 am Title: night
I'm laughing so hard at the ketchup on pasta part. This is the best ever!
Also I'm so curious about this whole thing! I don't even know what to say! I feel so sorry for Bill, he seems to be such a sweet person and he's just trying to help the people he's got at home. And Tom is so kind. I hope they can somehow work something out, I mean, Tom's not just gonna leave Bill to starve, right?
I need more!!!
Thank you so much for this! This is waaaaay better than all ideas I had for this prompt.
Author's Response: I have to admit I was laughing myself when I wrote that, haha :p I feel sorry for Bill too, but well, it had to be done. We've all been there (*glares at BP*). Working on more! Let's hope the last chapter doesn't take forever, too. Thank you so much for your lovely words! <33
Date: 08/26/16 12:27 am Title: night
Cool story! Are you going to explain more about this diseases? What happened!?
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be the last, so I guess you'll have to read it to find out ;)
Date: 08/25/16 10:54 pm Title: night
This hit really close to home. It's beautiful though. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm sorry it hit close to home, that doesn't sound so great :( But thank you very much for your kind words!
Date: 08/19/16 12:54 am Title: dusk
I'm so drawn in already, looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm working on more :)
Date: 08/18/16 03:43 am Title: dusk
This is brilliant. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope I won't have to keep you waiting for long :)
Date: 08/17/16 09:33 am Title: dusk
Fantastic!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 08/17/16 03:32 am Title: dusk
Very promising beginning!
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope the rest will live up to it :)
Date: 08/16/16 10:30 pm Title: dusk
WOAH I WANNA KNOW MORE.....!!! I'm so happy you're posting more fic!!!!!!! I've been waiting for this ever since your FIA story. :'D Super beautiful writing, can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I've been wanting to post more since the challenge, but I'm a super slow writer and tend to throw things away because I don't like them... but I promise to finish this one and I'll do my best to update quickly! Thank you so much! <3
Date: 08/16/16 09:40 pm Title: dusk
Just like the FIA challenge fic this was written so beautifully, I am totally drawn in and can't wait for more!
Author's Response: It makes me so happy to hear that, thank you for these lovely words! :D
Date: 08/16/16 07:46 pm Title: dusk
Woah, this first chapter is awesome ! I have seen that prompt too, and I really like what you're doing with it, it's very interesting, I can't wait to see more !
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm glad you like it! I'm working on more :)