Date: 04/21/23 12:17 am Title: Get your great balls off me
I have left a review on other stories of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! Bill is such a goofball lol
Date: 03/07/17 01:28 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
OH...MY GOD. How did I not read this already?! I couldn't sleep last night because I'm an insomniac and this was like, the best bedtime story ever. It was equal parts funny/angsty/romantic/sexy. I didn't think I could ever care about anything to do with Pokemon but now I'm just sorta squeeing and hugging myself over it because these twins are so fucking perfect. I hope you can find some time to write more because this fandom neeeeds more of your twins. I know I do. *happy sigh*
Date: 11/26/16 03:37 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
Oh my god this was so good! The dialogue was absolutely hilarious! Great job!! :D
Date: 10/26/16 07:42 am Title: Get your great balls off me
Oh my god HAYLEY. That was SO good I am left with that amazing swirly feeling in my belly (probs much like when Tom looks at Bill) and ohhhhh my god I'm weak at the knees I swear. That was one of the BEST stories I have read in so long, it was the perfect pace and humour and that little bit of angst, oh my god oh my god all I can do right now is try not o fangirl too hard so my colleagues dont notice.
Can't believe I missed this onE, it's SO FUCKING GOOD JFC.
I'm probs just gonna read it about 43 more times now....
YAY U R AMAZING 🌻
Author's Response: ^_^ Thank yooooooooooou!
Date: 10/15/16 08:14 am Title: Get your great balls off me
It was one of the most hilarious one shot and at the same time it was sooo cute !
I'm pretty sure, Bill would be exactly like you described him while playing Pokemon Go xD
It was great !
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I'd love to see him play it LOL
Date: 09/29/16 06:54 am Title: Get your great balls off me
Gahhh. Guhh. Unghh.
Okay actual words now...
I've never played Pokémon, but
I love love loved the story!
The perfect mixture of angst, scorching hot smut, and a bit of fluff.
Author's Response: Thank you very much! :)
Date: 08/17/16 10:32 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
Oh my gosh I can't tell you how many times I've re-read this story; all while having my own Pokemon Go happy open! I like how the addiction shifted from Bill to Tom and all of the pokemon puns strewn throughout. Now I feel like I have to rename my squirtle Bill. The tension throughout was also well done and I liked how it all turned out. And more stories from you I could bounce!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it. Bill is totally like a Pokemon, I wish I could catch him XD
Date: 08/17/16 08:58 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
I freaking loved this so much!! I love the subtly of the build-up, and you have a great balance between funny moments and some that nearly made me cry. I just love their relationship here, it's perfect, and it feels so real. Really really well done. How you turned a fic about Pokemon Go called "Balls" into something so good is crazy! lol. And it made me re-read your Sims fic too. haha. Awesome job. :) :)
Author's Response: Aw thanks! lol I was kinda thinking I should have called it something else but it just seemed fitting.
Date: 08/17/16 04:12 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
This was once again absolutely best! I don´t know how you do it but you do it well, so, go on! It was funny and I love your twins, you can write them so beautifully and so believable... Sometimes I wonder if you actually aren´t one of them :D
Author's Response: Shhhhhhhh >.> lol thank you so much :D
Date: 08/17/16 03:56 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
Absolutely loved it!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! :)
Date: 08/17/16 03:55 am Title: Get your great balls off me
This is fantastic. Such a well-written cute story. I smiled like an idiot the whole time.
Author's Response: Thanks! It was really fun to write so I'm glad it could make you smile :)
Date: 08/16/16 10:34 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
SO AMAZING. Such a delightful read with a perfect angsty twist. Loved it. And of course, the Poke-theme was so clever and well tied-in. Haylz you're a genius.
Author's Response: Aw thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed :D rnrnP.S you need to write more!
Date: 08/16/16 06:23 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
I HAVE NEVER LOVED POKEMON SO MUCH!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: THANK YOU!
Date: 08/16/16 04:52 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
This made my day, my week, my entire damn month *__*
Your stories are the best, I love the way you describe perfectly the twins' relationship... I've loved every single joke on this story, I was completely gone for Pokemon GO but I didn't have someone like Tom to save me :P
I hope to read even more stories from you in the near future, I'm glad you're back and PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE stay *__*
Author's Response: Aw thank you! I am glad you enjoyed. I wish I had Tom to save me while I play it too XD rnrnI don't plan on going anywhere ♥
Date: 08/16/16 12:43 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
That was so fun!
Author's Response: Yay I'm glad you thought so ^_^ Thanks!
Date: 08/16/16 03:54 am Title: Get your great balls off me
this was a good story!
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 08/16/16 01:09 am Title: Get your great balls off me
I have never needed anything in my life like I needed this fic tonight.
Author's Response: ♥ Thank you, I am happy to have been able to provide you with some twinsex! And one more off the list.
Date: 08/15/16 09:57 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
Man, you honestly do the best twinly relationships cum sexual tension cum twinsex. The squirtle pun was necessary and perfect. I loved this.
Author's Response: Thank you *squishes* LOL it was necessary. FINALLY FOUND A SQUIRTER
Date: 08/15/16 08:56 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
Hahaha, oh my. There were so many things I loved about this XD I play pokemon go myself and thanks to you, I will now be thinking about Tom's balls when I get greatballs XD XD hahaha. anyway, this was brilliant and I enjoyed every part of it!! i always love your stories. thank you for writing it!
Author's Response: lol thank you! I too will be thinking about Tom's great balls, though I often am regardless :x
Date: 08/15/16 01:07 pm Title: Get your great balls off me
I!! love!! you!!!!
i don't even know where to start! First things first, i can't believe you wrote something that started with Bill almost killing himself off a cliff to play Pokemon, got to some drama, then got to fluff, then sexyness, and then got fluffy again - and you nailed every single part of it! It really made me laugh a lot because i found it super relatable, i did EVERYTHING Bill & Tom did with the app game (well except catching Pikachu, that fucker fled on me) and even giggled like an idiot at the same silly jokes :P
I loved you mentioned Tom being with other guys, I loved the reference to Bill's sexy ig pic at the end, and i was going CRAZY about the shower still running during their sexy time!! Seriously, i almost couldn't focus on the smut *moon emoji*, i was thinking about all that water getting wasted! i related to Tom about that, too :P
What more can i say, i really loved it, that was everything i was hoping for :) and it was a First Time!! i usually have a love-hate relationship with FT when they're one shots because it's hard to not make it feel rushed when there's only one chapter, but you managed it perfectly and it all felt very natural to me, so kudos!
long story short, THANK YOU FOR THIS GIFT!! this 86 years old lady couldn't appreciate it more b29;b29;b29;
Author's Response: ♥ I am so glad you liked it, I hope it was what you were looking for :D I am just glad I got it done and posted before pink hairgate because it just wouldn't have been the same haha. The very first egg I ever hatched was Pikachu! That's the only time I've ever seen one lol.