Date: 08/15/16 02:46 am Title: One
I do. When Bill said "no, no I can't do this" & " please stop, it hurts"...Tom should've stopped right then! He was seeking his own pleasure while hurting someone else.
Author's Response: I think so, too. It's difficult to understand why someone would do stuff like this to others. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: 08/14/16 03:23 pm Title: One
Poor Bill...
It is a bit strange that Tom was so rough and inconsiderent with Bill. They dated for a while and Tom was willing to wait before. How could he be so unaware of pain and misery he was putting Bill through? I guess that night was the end of their relationships.
Author's Response: I know people who have been in pretty much the exact same situation, but it doesn't make it any easier to understand. Some people are just selfish and inconsiderate of other people's feelings. The sad part is that it doesn't necessarily mean the end of the relationship. Thanks for reading and reviewing! (:
Date: 08/14/16 12:22 pm Title: One
That is most definitely rape, because Bill changed his mind. Yes, Bill consented at the beginning, but he felt pressured because all Tom seemed to want was sex. Not saying that Tom probably didn't love him in some way, but if he truly felt something for Bill, he would've stopped the moment Bill said "no, I cant". Or in the beginning, he could've at least had gone slow enough and been really attentive to Bill and how he was responding. Or even better, he could've waited until Bill approached him and said, "I'd like to start with the butt-stuff".
I feel like, even if you're getting pleasure from sex and you tell whoever to stop and that you can't, they are to get off of you. Because no matter what, no means no and if someone thinks it's okay to keep on after someone says "no, stop" then I assume that it's okay for me to throat punch them.
It was a good story though to show what an asshole some people are.
Author's Response: Haha, I wonder if anyone's ever said "I'd like to start with the butt--stuff". That would be interesting. I'm glad that I'm not the only one who considers this rape, though. Thank you so much for reading and leaving a review! :)
Date: 08/13/16 02:25 pm Title: One
I do consider this rape, he changed his mind and that means no. Ugh. This makes me so angry. Not at you, obviously but that so many people actually think like this. That if you say yes once it means you can't change your mind. That's a horrible way of thinking.
Great story, though! It was well written and I enjoy reading it.
I think I would change rating to NC17 or R, though. It doesn't feel like a PG-13 story to me, and rather safe than sorry, don't you think?
Great job!
Author's Response: It's good to hear that I'm not the only one who considers this rape... I believe that you're allowed to change your mind at any time. Thank you for the kind review, I really appreciate it. :) rnAnd I'll definitely change the rating, thanks for pointing that out! :)