Date: 08/17/16 04:57 am Title: Chapter 11
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!rnNext chapters are on the way, I'm busy writing ;)
Date: 08/17/16 12:53 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh Bill i dont if Its good or bad for him to know if Tom is dead or a vampire? :( but i hope Tom dont kill to his friends and twin:)
Author's Response: Yeah, I know what you mean, sometimes it's less painfull to remain oblivious to things....Tom will eventuelly meet them, but what happens..well, you'll see ;)rn
Date: 08/16/16 06:30 pm Title: Chapter 11
I really enjoyed reading again :)
Author's Response: Great! I still enjoy writing ,too. I already have a bunch of chapters prepared^^
Date: 08/13/16 06:55 am Title: Chapter 10
this was a nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!rnI posted it just 2 minutes ago, have fun^^
Date: 08/12/16 06:30 am Title: Chapter 10
I was craving some angst recently, so this chapter really suit my needs. Honestly, I wasn't a big fan of Bill in this fic, I just didn't feel his character before. But now I like this heartbroken, sad and helpless version of him. Guess that's my sadistic side showing :).
I like your original characters, especially George. I feel like he might play an important role in future chapters... If you're not gonna kill him too soon, like poor Nathalie :).
Anyway, I still enjoy this a lot. See you next time!
Author's Response: Haha oh great xD Don't worry, you'll like some of the next chapters then xD I find it a bit harder to write Bill, so I'm actually gald that you like him a bit more now, then before. Without a small hint of a sadistic side, this FF could be hard to read ^^rnrnYou like George? Well, he'll have some "screentime" soon, I can reveal so much ;) Killing off characters is necessary to show, how hard survival there is, so Nathalie won't be the only one.rnrnSee you next time and thanks for the nice review^^
Date: 08/10/16 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 10
I enjoyed reading this chapter again a lot :) Really amazing story! :)
Author's Response: Thank you and I'm glad you liked it :) I try my best^^
Date: 08/10/16 10:08 am Title: Chapter 10
Yes! It was a great chapter! Finally Bill is here! And he is alone without Tom. If only he knows that Tom is alive... Or dead but walking ;) Is so interesant. I cant wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thank you^^ Yeah is alive and kickin, more or less. rnTom was the most important person for him, so he's missing him dearly, especially in this situation. Maybe he'll find out soon? rn
Date: 08/06/16 03:59 am Title: Chapter 9
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! It's out now, have fun reading^^
Date: 08/05/16 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for new chapter! That part when Tom remembers the word "mother" but doesn't understand its meaning was heartbreaking. Right now he seems to be driven purely by instinct and thirst for blood. I wonder when this will change (well, at least I hope this will change :)).
I liked the fight scene and every little information about those vampire creatures. After every chapter I have a head full of questions. I love the way you create this atmosphere in your story.
Good luck with the college situation! I hope things will go the way you like, after all. Take care!
Author's Response: Yeah, it's sad, even if he doesn't understand that something is missing in his mind. It will be a long road for him, I can tell so much. rnrnI like writing fight scenes xD They are challenging in their own way, differently to emotional scenes. Thanks for the compliment, I am glad you like it so much^^ I hope I can answer all your questions in the story with the plot, but if there's something urgent that you desperately want to know, you can ask me^^ There's no promise that I can reveal too much to not spoil you, but questions can be vast ;)rnrnThanks for that, I'm desperatly waiting for the answers, since there are still a few colleges left.....rnrnTake care, too!
Date: 08/05/16 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you, I hope you enjoy the next one as well ;)
Date: 08/01/16 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 8
Amazing chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks! It's nice to always see a review from you ^^rnI don't know why my answer for your last review wasn't saved by the way, sorry for that!
Date: 08/01/16 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
Looks like there's still a spark of Tom inside of the newborn vampire :). I enjoyed reading about his new senses and abilities. I love his point of view! Seeing everything through his eyes makes this story really exciting. But of course I also want to know what's happening to Bill... I hope you'll update soon!
Author's Response: A little bit yeah ^^ I actually love to write his point of view, so it's great that you enjoy it as well! Tom's POV will be the major one, but Bill's will come up soon as well. rnBill's POV is also very important for the story, so I can't hide him behind a rock forever and I also don't want to xDrnThank you for your reviews, I enjoy them a lot!
Date: 08/01/16 02:46 pm Title: Chapter 8
Still a great story :) I'm wondering what Bill is doing? and when Tom will come to his senses again. At least I hope the human in him isn't dead :O
Author's Response: Thanks for your comment! Bill is doing...something xD He'll be back soon, don't worry, I just wanted some chapters to establish Tom as a vampire. Bill's POV will also be important soon ;)rnMaybe Tom's human character is dead, maybe not, I'll be mean now and not say anything^^
Date: 08/01/16 01:43 pm Title: Chapter 8
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you, and sorry that I somehow didn't reply to the last comment. Somehowrnmy answer wasn't saved... weird thing xDrnAnyway thank you for your ongoing support^^
Date: 07/28/16 06:55 am Title: Chapter 7
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Date: 07/27/16 05:31 pm Title: Chapter 7
I enjoyed reading this chapter :) It really is an amazing story :)
Date: 07/27/16 12:08 pm Title: Chapter 7
Thanks for new chapter! I liked the way you discribed the connection between Tom and his master. Your vision of vampires seems to be very original. I've never read something like this before. Can't wait to find out what happens next :).
Author's Response: Thank you very much^^ I'm glad you think so, I was wondering how to explain their connection. At first I thought I'd make it a bit sexual, but somehow..it didn't fit xD rnI tried to orientate myself on some older vampire myths and a bit of own imagination. And also..I'm quite a fan of more animalistic ones as you can see. rnNext chapter is up, so enjoy ^^
Date: 07/27/16 09:10 am Title: Chapter 7
Of course! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you x3 I enjoy writing it ;)
Date: 07/24/16 05:53 am Title: Chapter 6
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you, I'll post the next one shortly^^ rnRead you again next time !rn
Date: 07/22/16 05:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
Wow, this was so intense! Amazing chapter, I love this story. Hope to see more of this soon!
Author's Response: There is more to come, I'm currently in a good writing mood and got some time on my hands^^ rnI'm glad you enjoy it and hope, it will stay that way :) Thanks for the review!rn