Date: 05/29/17 07:58 am Title: Chapter 30
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you, next one is ready for you to read ;)
Date: 05/28/17 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 30
Tomi's talking again! He's not just using a word at a time or fragments, but full sentences and I'm so excited. The stuff he says is kind of savage and it's great. 😸
Author's Response: It was about time!^^ I loved to read that you like his "savageness" xD I've always been a sucker for vampires who got some attitude in them...so of course Tom gets permission to say rough things from time to time. Thanks for your review!!!
Date: 05/28/17 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh fu€&!!! George is a vampire as well?! Hell noooo. He hates Tom. I can see a war coming. Yes!! I love it. And love the image from Bill naked in the forest & Tom knowing it ;)
Author's Response: Hell yes and jap there's kinda bad blood between them, but who knows if George remembers any particular circumstances? The irony in this is that George became what he wanted to kill in nearly every sense. He's the new progeny on his masters side and driven by only his instinct, something he wanted to murder Tom for. And well.......who wouldn't love the image of a naked Bill in a forest xD Thank you so much for leaving me a review ^^
Date: 05/22/17 11:45 am Title: Chapter 29
I can not even imagine how much Tom must be confused with all memories, feelings, vampire instincts. His mind must be a terrible mess.
But now, Tom needs to hunt at night because he's still a vampire. Bill will be alone and in danger, without protection from other vampires. I'm curious how they'll solve it.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: I always pictured it really messy and hard when suddenly everything comes back at you like a tsunami, so I tried to describe Tom#s inner trouble as good as I could. He is also still a vampire yes, so to Bill this whole situation isn't safe. Especially since Tom has to get his blood consume on a regular basis to stay sane. Bill has a little bit of luck though, since most of the other vampires are at the beach, what gives him and tom at leats a chance. Thank you for reviewing, next chapter will be on very soon!
Date: 05/22/17 12:53 am Title: Chapter 29
Beautiful. Tom savage is such a cutie & animal. I love it.
Author's Response: Thank you^^ Haha I love his rough side, too xD
Date: 05/22/17 12:38 am Title: Chapter 29
this was such a good chapter!!
i can not wait for the next chapter!!
an i am happy that tom is starting to remember things.
Author's Response: Thanks! Tom will soon remember quiet a bit, but its often two steps forward and one back ;)
Date: 05/20/17 03:14 am Title: Chapter 28
So Tom decided that Bill was him. It's not so unexpected, but two people died again, although I do not regret Jared. It's his fault, he did not keep his promise, and now he's a vampire lure. And Elliot ... :( really a pity.
Fortunately, Georg and Gustav are safe, so far. It's good that Tom does not feel bound to his master, because that would be a big fight for Bill. Maybe this will happen anyway.
Thanks, I'm looking forward to continuing and what will happen.
Author's Response: Jared was really stupid to think Bill would let his twin's fate rest in the hands of the other survivors, it wasn't an easy decision for jared, but he betrayed the twins nonetheless. Elliot...he was hard to kill for me, but I had a feeling that there's no way I can keep him alive. Tom is not really bound to his master because she, like Jared, betrayed him in not fighting more for him. She did so one time, but after that never returned his cries for help, so yeah her influence is getting smaller. Thank you for reviweing as always, that really keeps me motivated to post my work!
Date: 05/19/17 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 28
Amazing!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!!!
Date: 05/19/17 03:47 pm Title: Prolog
Warum mache ich mir dann die Mühe in englisch zu schreiben? Haha :D
Ja, ich bin halt immer noch gebranntmarkt, besonders von früher von FF.de, dass man sich in ne Story verliebt und dann, bäm, kommt nichts mehr. Daher lese ich oftmals nur wenn eine Story abgeschlossen ist oder der Autor zumindest fast alle seiner storys abgeschlossen hat. Wenn ich wen sehe, mit zb 10 storys und keine abgeschlossen, lasse ich es meist ganz sein. Aber wenn ich mal nichts zum lesen habe aber unbedingt lesen will, dann schaue ich in aktuelle storys rein und meist kann ich es dann nicht lassen und schaue jedes mal rein. Bei manchen Storys geht das, auch wenn ma sich meist ein stück festliest, bei deiner Story hab ichs versucht möglichst knapp zu halten (Zumindest ab kapitel 15 oder so), weil ich denke dass bei der story zu viel spoilern auch viel lesespaß wegnimmt, was ich natürlich nicht will. Die letzten Kapitel ists wieder zu sehr eingerissen, aber ich hab mich beim letzten bemüht es zu lassen, haha.
Tatsächlich kenne ich dich von ff.de von 2 stimmen 1 mörder (lese nur slash) - gott, dass das schon wieder 5 Jahre her ist ... wo ist die Zeit hin?
:O
Author's Response: Das habe ich mir auch gedacht xD Manchmal stehe ich auch echt auf dem Schlauch, sorry dafür!Ich versteh dich sehr gut, bei FF.de sind wirklich sehr viele Autoren gewesen, die so 1-3 Kapitel posten und dann kam gar nichts mehr. Ich muss zugeben ich hab auch eine meiner Stories nicht vollendet, weil ich mich zu dem Zeitpunkt bei FF.de nicht mehr wohlgefühlt hab. Viele tolle Autoren waren nicht mehr da und irgendwie...meh xD Bin ich nciht stolz drauf. Also ja, ich kann deine vorgehensweise echt verstehen. Auf dieser Seite fühle ich mich etwas wohler jetzt. An Bloody island schreibe ich jetzt auch schon knapp 2 Jahre und hatte ja auch erst kürzlich ne sehr lange Pause gemacht. Ich schreib aber gerade am Epilog, der auch schon zu Hälfte fertig ist, also kannst du beruhigt die Story richtig lesen, dann musst du keine Angst mehr haben dich selbst zu spoilern ;)Morgen oder übermorgen werde ich fertig sein, dann kriegts meine beta Leserin und dann muss ich nur noch posten^^ Ich freu mich auch echt, dass dir die Geschichte so gut gefällt, dass du auch nochmal mir was da lässt. Das motiviert echt super! Oh und 2 Stimmen, ein Mörder ist echt schon sooo lange her o.o Ich glaube mittlerweile würde ich die FF auch nochmal überarbeiten müssen xD Die Zeit hängt einem echt im Nacken....
Date: 05/19/17 03:10 pm Title: Chapter 28
You know ... I still didnt read that story, just take a look in every chapter ( soon, I will read it, so I dont have to read too much when it's finished - by the way, you have a cloue how many chapter this story will have?) and I love it so far. I just took a look of your profile and have 2 questions:
1 you say you try to write in english now, what language did you write before?
2. Can I get a link to your other storys? :D
Author's Response: So you look over them to have an overview right? The story will have around 45 to 46 chapters. I'm close to the finish line with writing (It took me long enough xD). Thank you so much for showing interest in the story and reviewing a few times !rnrnI'm german, so I wrote in my mother tongue. From your nickname I figure you're german as well? Here's the link https://www.fanfiktion.de/u/RynnMoonFighter . I have to warn you though if you want to read them. Most of them are really old and I was still practicing ;)
Date: 05/19/17 05:47 am Title: Chapter 28
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
i am glad that tom got away an that he took bill with him. an it is ok that u got my name wrong. my nikename is from befor i new of tokio hotel.
Author's Response: Thank you^^rnI guess the time was right for Tom to get free and yeah, at least he didn't kill Bill^^ See you next time!
Date: 05/16/17 10:42 am Title: Chapter 27
God, God, God! What happens now? But I believe in Tom, I believe he will not hurt Bill.
Quickly, the next chapter, or I'm going crazy :-D
Author's Response: There will be some tough stuff happening! Good of you to believe in our grumpy vampire, you also might be right about believing in him ;) Thank you for reviewing, chapter will be up very very soon !
Date: 05/15/17 05:56 am Title: Chapter 25
hey AryaStark my name is Natasha not jesse. i thought i would let you know
Date: 05/15/17 05:48 am Title: Chapter 27
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
i am happy that they are not killing tom an i am happy tom is starting to remember some things, i hope he will not try an kill bill or Georg or gustav or david, please add a new chapter sonner
Author's Response: Thank you Natasha, sorry for calling you Jesse before (Your nickname made me guess, but I guessed wrong xD). I'm happy too that I didn't kill Tom again....even if it doesn't look like it, but I like him ^^ He will start to change in personality soon!
Date: 05/15/17 01:25 am Title: Chapter 27
Yay I love this series keep up the good work
Author's Response: I'll try as good as I can^^
Date: 05/15/17 12:49 am Title: Chapter 27
Tom is free!!! Yesss!!! But how is gonna be now? So interesting!!! I love it!
Author's Response: Yup, he finally is free again ;) Was about time wasn't it? Thanks for reviewing!!
Date: 05/07/17 09:37 pm Title: Chapter 26
this was a really good chapter!!
i hope tom will be alright
i dont wont them to kill tom
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! Bill has a plan, don't worry, a bad one but at least it's a plan ^^ Next chapter is already waiting for you to read it. Thank you so much by the way for always leaving me something since the beginning :)
Date: 05/07/17 01:28 pm Title: Chapter 26
I'm so scared!!! What is Bill has in mind? So intense! And Tom finally remember!!! I'm dying for the next chapter. Love this fic!!
Author's Response: It will all be good, at least for some charas ^^ Tom is getting better, he finally comes by. I guess I tortured everyone enough with his pure animal side. rnNext chapter is online and thank you for hanging in there with everyone ;)
Date: 05/07/17 12:30 pm Title: Chapter 26
Oh, God, Georg really surprised me. I did not expect this from him, but he really loves Tom, that's obvious. And Tom slowly recalls. But now I do not know what Bill is planning. There is only one night and then they will face the crowd because I do not believe he would give them Tom. There will be a miracle, I hope.
Thanks, I look forward to the next one.
Author's Response: He really is torn and I guess that really killing your best friend or even something that resembles him is so hard that not everyone can odo it. Georg is no killer. Tom is some kidn of brother to him, so yeah. But he got rewarded for his mercy. Bill knows Tom isn't ready, so yeah, there can only be one action in this case. I hope you like the latest chapter as well^^ Thank you so much for your review!
Date: 05/01/17 01:05 am Title: Chapter 25
I can't believe that Georg dares to finish the "live" of Tom!! I'm dying here! :) Billlll where ar you to save your twinnn !!! And Tom just thinking about full belly jijijijiji. I love it. This chapter was so intense. Greattt!!!! Please don't kill Tom again ;)
Author's Response: He sees no other way to truly help his friend, but wanting to kill somebody and actually be able to are two different things. Bill is strong, but will he be strong enough? And well Tom, his emotional range is a little short right now T.T The chapter was intense to write as well, but the next was even worse....I hope you like the next chapter ;) Thank you so much for your cute review!