Date: 08/01/16 08:05 am Title: Chapter 13
I don't want this story to be over *sob* like...I'm going to miss these characters so much :'(
The chapter was cute and perfect, I just loved it! now I have one chapter left to read, sigh.
Author's Response: All good things must come to an end. :(
Date: 08/01/16 02:25 am Title: Chapter 12
tom is doing it wel, step by step!! ...and I'm proud of bill's willpower tbh hahaha he just needs to wait a little longer, tom will be ready sooner than expected! n_n
Author's Response: *shifty eyes*
Date: 08/01/16 02:09 am Title: Chapter 11
...and that's what I call a nice progress!! see, Lilian? it wasn't that hard! :) ...any way, tom is heading home now and bill is with him ofc!
bill is Tom's everything and i couldn't help my stupid smile after reading that part!!! :')
this story is so beautiful!
Author's Response: It's nice to have all the facts. :)
Date: 08/01/16 01:50 am Title: Chapter 10
geez, i feel so bad for tom, really :( ...those kidnapers fucked up his life and now he's a total mess. I need bill to go for him and makes him feel good again. I still don't like Lilian.
Author's Response: Tom isn't in a good way. :( He needs support and just refuses to ask for it. Everything is fine, everything will be fine, but, nope, no it isn't.
Date: 08/01/16 01:37 am Title: Chapter 9
nope
nope
nope
a big nope.
what the hell? i don't like Lilian at all. Ok, she just reunited with her son but i think that wasn't the right way to act. She wasn't even nice to bill (Tom's """"roommate""""...) the worst part is that tom thinks bill just left him and it's not like that ;-; jssgfshs I'm going to keep reading because things cannot stay like that.
nope.
Author's Response: You know, pretty much everyone hates Lilian, but, man, she doesn't know what's going on. She just knows her baby has been missing for YEARS and now he's back and she just wants her son back. She doesn't know that this guy that he's calling a roommate is his stability, and he sure as hell isn't being forthcoming about it. Poor babies and their lack of communication making everything shitty.
Date: 08/01/16 01:13 am Title: Chapter 8
OOOOOOOOOHHHHMYYYGOOOD 😱 Tom has a family out there! well, it was about time! ....and that officer had the worst timing ever :-))) ...anyway, I like this story so mucj, did I say that already? :)
Author's Response: Family! It's nice to know that he isn't as adrift in the world as everyone thought, eh?
Date: 08/01/16 12:58 am Title: Chapter 7
my poor baby!! tom thought bill would kick him away if he didn't obey what bill said...the little kisses and touches between those two are so sweet :')
oooh bill said the L word!!! i can't they're too cute!!!
Author's Response: Poor thing got used to having to do what he was told or suffering for it. Conditioning is a bitch, yo. BUT huzzah to love and snuggles instead of horror! It's a nice change of pace.
Date: 08/01/16 12:46 am Title: Chapter 6
aaaahh this was so cute, i wanna cry!!! ...i'm so happy about Tom's confidence now and how comfortable he is with bill, just look at them, they're a lovely couple. This chapter was beautiful!!!
Author's Response: *hearts!*
Date: 08/01/16 12:36 am Title: Chapter 5
omg *cries cries* if this would have been the last chapter, it would have been so beautiful!!!! ...so apparently they DID scape and they're safe now (at least for now, idk...I'm scared to read the next chapters) ...i like this story very much so far! n_n
Author's Response: Precious freedom! And tissues, too. *sends tissues*
Date: 08/01/16 12:20 am Title: Chapter 4
please, don't be evil and don't let this be a nice dream of tom ;-; ...I want them to be safe!!! omg
Author's Response: But...but...the EVIL!
Date: 08/01/16 12:07 am Title: Chapter 3
*me reading the beginning of the chapter*
yay bill is back!
*me reading the last part*
...aaaand bill disappeared again.
omg I'm so curious, did bill run away? what happened? oh jesus
Author's Response: The world giveth and then the world taketh away. *suspense!*
Date: 07/31/16 11:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
omg...what??? nooo, where is bill? what did they do to him? :'''(
besides that, the story is really intriguing, I like it!
Author's Response: Dun dun DUUUNNNNNNNN. ;)
Date: 07/31/16 11:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm curious about this story!!!! you already have a reader over here!!! n_n
Author's Response: Awwwww yeah, new readers! Hi!
Date: 07/17/16 09:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just finished reading this and i gotta say this was amazing!! i love the way you write, it just felt so vivid and even uncomfortable at times! Also I truly fell in love with your Tom in this one, he was so adorable and fragile that it made me want to jump into the story and feed him with cookies and love. I'd be more than delighted if you wrote a sequel to this???
Author's Response: Aw, thank you much. :D (I bet Tom wouldn't mind more cookies)
Date: 07/02/16 07:27 am Title: Chapter 3
It's funny how I, even though I knew the last chapter I read wasn't the end, spent time being angry with you for how you were planning to end it haha! Well, not actually angry at YOU, but the writer in you, if that makes sense :P I knew it wasn't the actual end, but I was angry at the last chapter's ending that it took me some time to take a deep breath and actually keep reading. I'm a passionate reader, when I like something there are so many feelings going on in me that most of it doesn't even make sense lol.
Anyway! Some hope! Well, the ending of this wasn't very hopeful at all.. but there was some for a short bit. I totally understand why Bill isn't giving up quite yet, but of course I also understand Tom, who's been there for long enough to know that no one gets out.
I wanna know more about Tom, too. He said in the first chapter, I think, that they wouldn't been taken there if they had someone who would miss them? But how can they both he so alone that no one would miss them at all? Poor things.
Anyway, still love this! And I'll see you on the next one :3
Author's Response: You most def are not/were not the only person who didn't like the original ending. It was a suuuuper downer. But there had been a warning for it and everything! Oh well. At least things got better, yeah? rnrnBill is a tenacious little bulldog. He's not gonna give up until he HAS to, whatever that entails.
Date: 06/19/16 03:06 pm Title: Chapter 14
PUPPY! Damn it I'm such a brat, I want an epilogue to this so badly. Like, a flash-forward five years to Bill and Tom and grown-up Delphine just being happy healthy grown up people.Or maybe Tom and Bill finally having sex for the first time. See? Total brat :p
Seriously though, I'm so glad you reposted this fic, becuase I'd forgotten most of it and I didn't even realize. Just perfect, really. Absolutely perfect.
Author's Response: Man, no one ever wants stories to end, and that's a nice thing to hear. :) *love love love*
Date: 06/18/16 09:53 am Title: Chapter 2
So this was supposed to be the end to begin with? Wow. People must've been so frustrated with you, huh? :D I know for sure that if this had been the end now I would probably have broken something, but instead I now know that whenever I feel like it I can keep on reading and hopefully not hate you ;) I must say that's such a relief haha!
'till next time ~
Author's Response: People were NOTHING DOING on letting Bill die off screen, never to be seen again. No super sad endings for us. SIIIIIGH. ;)
Date: 06/17/16 09:33 pm Title: Chapter 14
wait! what? completed? nooooo! lmao! you're joking, right?
right?
*sobs*
so this was quite possibly the best christmas ever, what with delphine and cookies and santa pants, and that kiss at the end that made my toes curl!
omg i'm gonna miss this story!
Author's Response: *sends more tissues* Alas, yep, that's all there is. But at least it ended well, yeah? No one is dead, things are looking bright, there's 9 million cookies to eat, and there's a snuggly ball of fluff to love! Everyone wins! *loves*
Date: 06/17/16 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Great finale?
Date: 06/17/16 04:14 pm Title: Chapter 14
I love all the Christmassy details and I especially loved the 'To Bill, From Tom, From Bill' pressie. And the puppy makes them a family of their own now. And the hugs and kisses are giving me hope for their future, that Tom might one day be able to have some kind of physical relationship with Bill. Lovely chapter.
Author's Response: Puppy! Pets make every house a home.And they give ample excuse for walkies. :)