Date: 02/02/17 11:08 am Title: Chapter 23
Awwh, i'm just so proud of Tom!!!! I seriously can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response: And he thought he wasn't strong. :)
Date: 02/01/17 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/01/17 11:24 am Title: Chapter 23
Hey!
I just read the first two chapters. Then I knew that this story is so awesome, that I have to wait with reading, till it's finished. (Because I'm always afraid, that a story will not be finished, and I cant wait for the next chapter ;) )
So, two questions ...
1. Do you already know how many chapter this story will have? you wrote at the beginning, that this story was already uploadet a few years back ...
2. (As I said I just read the first 2-3 chapters...) What are they doing to them? Tom said they will not do anything that you will see on the body, so they dont fight them. So they rape them, or what are they doing? :O
Author's Response: Answer 1: No idea! Right now there's about...10 more chapters waiting to be posted, but it's still not quite done being written. It could be 12 more, or 20 more. It just keeps going. O_O
2: It's a mystery! It's left ambiguous so the reader can kinda fill it in for themselves, because those monsters are always scarier.
Date: 02/01/17 06:42 am Title: Chapter 23
Oh god, I love them both !
I've the feeling that Tom evolved chapter after chapter and he's so cute in his way. And now we can see how much he loves Bill.
I can't even put words on what I feel!
And Delphine aaaaah *heart eyes* ! Dogs are the best !
Author's Response: Having safety and a strong support systems is doing good things for Tom. :)
And he absolutely loves his boy! To bits and bits. *loves*
Date: 01/29/17 11:45 am Title: Chapter 22
Ahh I love this so much :D Can't wait for more ^_^
Author's Response: ...SOON.
Date: 01/28/17 03:50 am Title: Chapter 3
I was on the verge of tears when Bill came back and now I'm like... que???? Bill, come back!!! Right now, this isn't funny anymore. It's breaking me heart!!
Author's Response: *quietly shreds hearts. Might make a casserole later*
Date: 01/26/17 02:58 pm Title: Chapter 22
Ahhhhh the suspense!!!!!! Tom's reaction made me kinda happy. He is making some amazing progress here, i'm so proud of him. And once he overcomes that obstacle, the rest comes naturally. *hits invisible next button* ._.
Author's Response: Tom is trying so so hard. Baby steps. :) And maybe a small leap here and there.
Date: 01/25/17 10:11 pm Title: Chapter 22
Freaking finally Bill! I expected that Tom would want to testify but he may be in over his head - I've had to testify as a witness a few times and cross examination is a bitch! It gives me anxiety just thinking about it.
Author's Response: Bill certainly took his sweet time. It only took, what, 22 chapters? Slacker.
I've only had to testify once, but it was kind of joke, so it wasn't too bad.
Date: 01/25/17 11:05 am Title: Chapter 22
I'm so so happy with Tom reaction ! Of course it must be hard for him, and it's gonna be even harder but he's stronger than he think. Because I don't think he'd got this reaction if he wasn't "that good" with Bill.
Maybe without Bill he would not be able to go to the trial.
And of course, I'm so glad Bill finally said it ! But I'm curious about his story before he met Tom.
I must say that I love your story even more chapter after chapter !
Author's Response: Tom's gonna make em pay. *fist clench*
There will be more Bill history in later chapters, so you don't have to worry about being left in the dark forever there. ;)
Date: 01/22/17 10:24 am Title: Chapter 21
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this the last few days. I've only just got around to reviewing because I was too eager to read the rest.
It's very well written, and it's also one of the few stories where I can relate to a character. Tom's thoughts and feelings are so much like my own, and it has helped me put a lot of things in perspective.
Can't wait to read more ^_^
Author's Response: Anxiety is a rat bastard son of a bitch. :(
It's sort of unexpected to me to have someone related to Tom so much (mostly because I'd never considered that of course there would be, somewhere, at some point), but I'm glad that I could help(?) give some perspective. Hopefully help, at least.
There's still, just, like...so much more coming. I assume there's an ending somewhere, but even I can't quite see it yet. :)
Date: 01/21/17 05:12 pm Title: Chapter 2
Omg. I am in tears!!! In tears I tell you!! I love it, but I'm gonna need lots of kleenex while reading this!
Author's Response: *sends bulk bin of tissues*
Date: 01/21/17 03:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
Omg! This is... I am just... I'm just gonna... Go read the next chapter cause I am fascinated as well as speechless!
Author's Response:
Date: 01/19/17 11:20 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh, how I love these adorable, damaged boys.
Author's Response: They need the love. :)
Date: 01/19/17 10:16 pm Title: Chapter 21
The visit wasn't such a disaster after all. Now at least Tom knows he can get through something like that if he really has to. Go Tom!
Author's Response: Successful (if mildly truncated) visit achieved! And the parents seem to like him, so that's a bonus.
Date: 01/19/17 07:49 pm Title: Chapter 21
Bill's speech was absolutely heart-wrenching and beautiful. Loved the chapter and can't wait for the next one
Author's Response: Tom def needed to hear that he was good enough. BETTER than good enough. :)
Date: 01/18/17 06:10 pm Title: Chapter 21
Oh this chapter almost had me in tears. Bill's little love declaration was so beautiful, it warmed my belly when i read it
Author's Response: Bill loves the crap out of that boy, and someday Tom will actually accept it as a fact, broken edges be damned. :)
Date: 01/18/17 05:24 pm Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: 01/18/17 05:06 am Title: Chapter 21
I truly loved this chapter ! I mean, now Bill know why Tom was acting like that. But I really hope Bill's gonna tell Tom about the trial, even if Tom was all about touching him, maybe that was the good time to told him.
I believe Tom is strong enough to hear about the trial, even with everything he's been through he's a grown man, a man. Maybe not going to the trial but at least talk about it.
Like every week, I can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response: Sometimes you just need to talk. And maybe smooch a little. But mostly talk.
We shall have to see what later chapters bring! Will Bill fess up? Will Tom get all sneaky and find out on his own? Will they just make out for like 2k words? Who knows!
Date: 01/12/17 02:26 pm Title: Chapter 20
That was such a great chapter !!
The end was so intense ! Now Tom know he can be himself again and it must be a relief. I also hope that Bill will talk to Tom and ask him what he want about the trial. It can be good for him to see the people who hurts him being punished for what they done, maybe he can help him to move on.
I can't wait for the next chapter !
Author's Response: Tom really does need to accept that he can be the him that he is instead of trying to be the him that he thinks that he should be. Things would be so much smoother.
Closure would totally be a nice thing for them both, or at least as much closure as they can get.
Date: 01/12/17 08:25 am Title: Chapter 20
Aww the last part was so adorable, Bill is so sweet! Poor Tom though, he is still so very at war with himself, it's heartbreaking. He is gonna have to talk to Bill about it, tell him when he's able to move on, or still needs time for processing. I hope Bill will listen to his dad and lets Tom decide whether or not to come with him. And i'm excited for Tom's decision. Very good chapter, keep it up.
Author's Response: Bill knows what his boy needs, even if Tom doesn't want to admit it to himself. He's observant like that. ;)
Tom really, really does need to be more open. It keeps coming up in therapy, and he keeps going '...nah' and just kinda screwing himself over.