Date: 07/12/17 05:47 am Title: Chapter 46
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: See ya next one. :)
Date: 07/07/17 04:58 am Title: Chapter 45
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: I like the enthusiasm in all those exclamation points. :D
Date: 07/06/17 09:52 pm Title: Chapter 45
Oh my little baby's actually feeling better, I'm so happy for both of them
Author's Response: Slow but sure. ;)
Date: 07/06/17 08:41 pm Title: Chapter 45
I just noticed my review has wandered off to be posted elsewhere, ugh. Will fix tomorrow.
Author's Response: You'll just have to leave a buttload of reviews everywhere and hope one sticks. ;)
Date: 07/06/17 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, I could do with a cabin like that tbh. Though I'd settle for just a hot tub.
It has just occurred to me how exceedingly well Tom is doing. Being so comfortable with Bill being that close and touchy, not being stuck inside his own head constantly. He is amazing. So proud. < 3
I remembered this was a short chapter, but the ending still caught me off guard. I was too lost in those two :)
I'm practically quivering with anticipation for the next few chapters, I don't think I've ever been this excited xD What have you done to me :O
Author's Response: A hot tub would be awesome, ngl.
Tom is doing SO well rn. I think it helps that he kinda sorta likes Bill a little. ;)
It's easy to get lost in them. :P
Yessssss, quiverrrrrrrr. :D :D
Date: 07/05/17 08:23 pm Title: Chapter 45
i just found this fic and it's SO GOOD !! Please keep on updating i can't wait to read the rest !!
Author's Response: Woot, new reader! Hi. :)
Right now there's probably another four or five chapters waiting to be posted (something like that), and we're still trying to finish this beast, so you've got at least a bit more left to read. :) Something to look forward to, I hope.
Date: 07/05/17 07:46 pm Title: Chapter 45
Yayy such a cute little chapter... Things are getting much more /intense/ between them. I love it. And Tom is doing better every day, still tentative, but we'll get there. I love how gentle Bill is with him every time. It's so satisfying to read after knowing what's been done to him in the circus, kinda makes my heart melt. I'm looking forward to the next chapter (and hopefully more drama soon)
Author's Response: I like the emphasis on 'intense'. :D
The last couple chapters really have been a lot of flowers and candy happy, haven't they? Maybe it's time to get burgled or something. ;)
Date: 07/05/17 05:02 am Title: Chapter 45
This little trip seem so good for them! Tom feel relaxed already, same for Bill. And seriously, can I go with them ?? This place seem awesome !
Author's Response: The middle of nowhere might be the best place for them. No scary people wandering about, no mysterious vans, a swank hot tub. It's the life. :D
Date: 06/30/17 04:33 pm Title: Chapter 44
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks much!
Date: 06/28/17 10:04 pm Title: Chapter 44
Annndddd.....I'm finally caught up! I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop but maybe that's just me. Happy boys and progress is good! But I keep expecting something horrible to happen.
Author's Response: And while out camping, everyone is horribly mauled by a bear. The end!
Well, okay, that might be a BIT too much of a shoe to drop. Maybe be can just maul one of them.... ;)
Date: 06/28/17 11:07 am Title: Chapter 44
Woop, trial finished! Now they can get to relaxing :)
I love how shy Tom was about cake (': I'm exactly the same when someone offers me something. Carrot cake is a good choice though < 3
He definitely deserves a treat like this, spending a whole day and night in a cabin with Bill, what more could you want :3
Heck, I was looking forward to this chapter, and you ended it prematurely! It was a good place to end it though, so I forgive you :P And now I get to look forward to the rest of it :D
Author's Response: Well, their part of the trial finished, at least. ;)
Tom doesn't want to be pushy. What if everyone else hates carrot cake and now they've got a giant carrot sheet cake and everyone's like 'ugh, Bill, your bf likes gross cake, why do you tolerate this sin of cake in your house?' Then everyone's grumpy because what they ACTUALLY wanted was chocolate with buttercream, and instead they've got this (delicious) mess. Ew. So yay individual cuppincakes!
Cabin fun time! Hopefully they remember to pack some bug spray, too. Coming home all mosquito itchy wouldn't be a fun way to end a vacay.
If I had posted the WHOLE section, it would have been over 6300 words, and that's a honker of a chapter. O_O So, instead, it's getting broken into three parts and everyone has to WAIT. :P
Date: 06/28/17 06:24 am Title: Chapter 44
Aww Tom is a lot less reluctant to touches now it's such a nice change to read him like that :') A trip sounds so nice and is definitely needed. They need to unload all the negative energy from the past weeks and just relax. Things seem so peaceful and harmonic between them. I hope it stays like that. Great chapter!
Author's Response: He's gotten comfortable with Bill. :)
Trip time! Get out in the woods, look at a tree, have some fun for a change.
Date: 06/28/17 12:41 am Title: Chapter 44
I love Tom is more to hug & kissing Bill than ever. Thank God. Love it!!
Author's Response: Bill is safe, Bill is lovely, Bill is his love. :)
Date: 06/21/17 09:28 pm Title: Chapter 43
Charming and cozy sweet chapter. Well done. Thanks
Author's Response: And thanks to you for the review. :)
Date: 06/21/17 08:47 pm Title: Chapter 43
Apparently people keep glasses in the bathroom :P
I think they'll be more careful next time, after that fiasco (':
Bubbles are the best. I don't really understand bath bombs tbh. Would you not just have to wash again after to get the glitter off? (':
Tom certainly likes his sweets, and Bill seems to enjoy giving them to him :) That's nice < 3
Gah, cute chapters. Far too many. I demand drama! ;)
No, but this was lovely, I enjoyed it :)
Author's Response: ...we have two glasses in the bathroom right now.
Yep! No more wine and ice cream nights without either dropping Tom's pills to a normal level, or having Bill drink up the lion's share. Or both.
Bubbles are pretty great, but I don't think that bubbles and bath oils are good friends. So you can be bubbly, or you can be super moisturized (and glittery). And you can just hop in the shower and rinse off real quick. Then make sure to rinse the tub before the kitties get into it. ;)
Tom's gone awhile without cinnamon rolls and cakes and cookies. He's earned MOUNTAINS of them and Bill would pack him full of nothing but sweets if that's what Tom wanted (though he might sneak a broccoli brownie in there at some point to keep him from getting scurvy).
*sets apartment on fire, makes them break up* :P
Date: 06/21/17 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 43
So sweet. Tom is more or less okay with the little touches he received last night and I think that's a big accomplishment! I wonder how much he's gonna let Bill touch him now after what happened though. Great chapter, can't wait for moooore
Author's Response: He trusts Bill. :) Bill's never done anything to him to break that trust and he's pretty sure, at this point, that he's not going to. Bill is good and Bill is safe. *loves*
Date: 06/21/17 05:11 pm Title: Chapter 43
this was a really good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you much and see you next week!
Date: 06/21/17 04:53 am Title: Chapter 43
I love the intimacy that come slowly between them. Tom is more ok with nudity, even if he seem still far away from ok ok. (That makes sense ? Haha not sure). Tom is not mad with Bill for touching him and this is better than I had expected ! I tought maybe Tom will be pissed off or pushing Bill again. I'm glad he didn't and he don't really "care".
I hope one day they'll finally make love, not now because it dosn't fit right but one day. And the comment Tom made gave me hope too.
Tom is full of surprises because when I think he's gonna react in one way he don't and react in a better way. I don't know how you do that but I love it. I love your story so much. I will never get tired of reading this.
The little small talk in the bathroom was cute, I can imagine a bubble Bill too.
Author's Response: He's still a little 50/50 on nudity, but it's easier when there's a glitter buffer to keep him from seeing the whole business. But, hey, baby steps. :)
Right NOW would be a little out of left field for boning. I don't think just making Bill cinnamon scented is quite enough to get Tom to the right place mentally for that.
I like that the story isn't being predictable, but also isn't doing things that make no sense at all. That's def good.
Bill really does seem like a bubble man, doesn't he? It's SO EASY to imagine him in bubbles up to his chin.
Date: 06/16/17 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 42
I have to say, as much as I have a special place in my heart for when Tom gets set off and is upset, I absolutely loved this part, drunk Tom made me smile, not so much what he was doing but the fact he was a bit floaty, and dumb, and actually happy for once.
I love how gently Bill handled the situation, taking charge, taking care of him,and making sure he was safe. He truly does love him, Bill is the best!
Oh and I have to mention I loved the part where he started falling asleep in the bed, my heart, I almost wish I could have cuddled him instead, he's just so very adorable. I've said it before but I love your version of Tom so much, he's my favourite thing to read *finger-heart*
All that said, I could have done without the awkward mental-image of Bill going in his box at the end though haha *shudders*
Another awesome chapter for one of my fave stories, I get so sucked into this its unbelievable. Already looking forward to more.
Author's Response: Dumb, happy Tom is a glorious unicorn.
Bill loves his boy. :) He's not messing this one up.
This Tom's quite the romantic at heart.
Awww, but Billy-boy has needs! Neeeeeeds.
I'm so so glad that you're enjoying the story as much as you re. :) It's nice to hear that people are. :)
Date: 06/16/17 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 42
Tommy got frisky once he got a little something something in his system I see lol. I'm glad that Bill didn't try to take advantage of Tom's state because I would've been a little disappointed in him. He's better than that and he knows that Tom isn't really ready for that. Dear Tommy, he was so dead set on getting with Bill that he was willing to sacrifice their trust and comfort with each other. He really does feel like he let Bill down in a sense and it's a little sad. I wish they met differently and maybe they'd be closer but at the same time, I'm glad they have each other because this relationship is just beautiful
Author's Response: Lower those inhibitions and he's still got a libido. Who knew! And Bill's a good boy. Roofied up Tom was all about jumping on the chance, because it may not come again, but Bill noped right out of that.
Things would have been very, very different had they met under different circumstances. But that would be a whole other story. ;)