Date: 03/05/17 10:25 pm Title: Chapter 24
Finally they are backkkkk together 😍
Author's Response: Well, almost! Thanks for reading :)
Date: 03/05/17 05:17 pm Title: Chapter 24
great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you, sylvia1000!
Date: 03/05/17 11:40 am Title: Chapter 24
Yeay, Tom is back! But why is he in coma? And didn't had the bodyguards contact to him? Wheren't there a few times when they said that Tom said something or where Bill let them tell Tom something?
And why didnt he want Bill a few years back?
How is he so rich(or vincent ...) that he can buy anything he wants?
I dont trust Vincent, he is weird ... But I hope Tom will really wake up now.
Author's Response: Vampires are rich simply because they've lived so long and have been able to invest and save money over a lengthy period of time. Plus, they don't need to buy food or have normal human expenses. As for the bodyguards, they have not actually had any contact with Tom while he's been asleep. They haven't seen or heard from Tom since the night he left. Bill just assumed that the bodyguards told Tom stuff about him, when in reality, they hadn't. They didn't know how to contact Tom and were not left a phone number or an address. Anything they mentioned that Tom said previously would have been said earlier on, while Tom was meeting with them and going over their employment contracts. Hope that makes sense! Why Tom's been in a coma is explained in the new update I've just posted, as well as how Tom is awakened. Thank you so much for your comments and if you have any other questions, please let me know :)
Date: 03/05/17 09:44 am Title: Chapter 24
and i sorta have an idea of how bill can wake tom up. just saying. if you're interested.
Author's Response: Haha, I can think of a few ideas myself but I already wrote one that I hope is suitable ;)
Date: 03/05/17 09:39 am Title: Chapter 24
okay this made me tear up a little and i'm not even sure why. heartbroken bill thinking tom forgot about him, plus i think i'm gonna miss runar a little and what the fuck is up with corpse tom?!?!?! i'm guessing he hasn't fed during his extended nap but still. ew. oh and i'm trying to picture vincent in my mind and...well...will there be more vincent in the story, after tom and bill go off together?
Author's Response: Yeah, poor Bill has been through the wringer, emotionally. And I'll miss Runar too but hey, he's still alive so it's extremely possible that Bill will see him again! Maybe when Bill's a vampire himself, he and Runar can hang out and kill people together LOL Vincent will be around too but the story isn't about him, although he could definitely have his own story written since he's so damn old. Corpse Tom's condition is explained in the new update I just posted so I hope you enjoy that. Thank you for your comments :)
Date: 03/05/17 08:34 am Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter!I can't wait for Tom to be awake.
Author's Response: Thanks! He'll awaken in the next chapter :)
Date: 03/05/17 06:54 am Title: Chapter 24
Hallelujah, Tom is back! Almost. Bill prepares for life, about which he knows so few. He still has a lot to learn before he decides finally. Although ... He decided long ago. I am curious about the way Tom will be awakened.
Thanks, I look forward to the next piece.
Author's Response: Yes, Bill decided long ago that he wanted to be a vampire. It was Tom who made him wait. And in the new update, you'll see how Tom gets woken up! Hope you enjoy :)
Date: 03/04/17 10:49 pm Title: Chapter 24
Omg, that must be a horrible sight... :0
Author's Response: It is for Bill! But Tom doesn't stay ugly for long ;)
Date: 03/04/17 10:39 pm Title: Chapter 24
this was a good chapter!!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you, jesseforever69!
Date: 02/27/17 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 23
I'm glad they solved it like a gentlemans after all. Jin actually rescued Bill from a bad relationship, even if it was painful. I believe that Tommi will regret sometime in the future, maybe, but it will be too late.
I wonder when Tom returns.
Thanks for the chapter and look forward to more.
Author's Response: Thank you, Nade! You'll finally see Tom in the next chapter :)
Date: 02/24/17 05:40 pm Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/24/17 01:52 pm Title: Chapter 23
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thank you again!
Date: 02/20/17 03:57 am Title: Chapter 22
I'm shocked !!!! I didn't expect this at all. Tommi and Jin ??? They both are bastard. And this is such a betrayal to Bill.
I'm not a big fan of Bill either, I mean, he sleep with Georg and now he break his heart because he don't love him. Why did he hurt Georg on purpose ? He knew Georg loves him.
The only good persons are Runar and Tom.
I hope we will know more about Tommi and Jin, like how and when this shit happened between them. And I can't wait for Tom to come back.
Author's Response: Yeah, everyone has screwed up and are equally to blame for this mess. Haha, it's saying something when you believe the killer vampires are the only good characters in the story! XD And Tom will be back soon, so I hope you stick around :) Thanks for your comments.
Date: 02/19/17 08:04 am Title: Chapter 22
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
i cant wait to see what happens to tommi an jin!
Author's Response: Thank you! Well, you can see what happens to them in the new update I just posted :)
Date: 02/19/17 05:37 am Title: Chapter 22
WHAT?! I am totally in shock! Jin? Seriously Jin? Oh, poor Bill. So this must have been a huge disappointment. Right now I openly wonder what Bill would do with him. Anyways, Bill then remain only one bodyguard, that's for sure.
I feel sorry for Georg, but I guessed that Bill was leaving him, and the band also. It's time to go...
Thank you for a chapter and I wait impatiently for the next.
Author's Response: Yes, unfortunately Jin cannot stay as Bill's bodyguard any longer but will Bill have the heart to hurt him... or worse? Read the new update and find out! Thank you for your review.
Date: 02/18/17 08:05 pm Title: Chapter 22
O.O
the fuck?!?!?!
tommi's been fucking jin?!?!?!
that fucking douchebag craptastic bastard!!!
and omg i just want to hug geo! he's so heartbroken now, but i can't say i was surprised bill shot him down. geo's not the one bill wants, he was just what bill needed at that moment.
bill should totally let runar tear jin's throat out, btw.
Author's Response: I know, I feel bad for Georg too, even being the writer of this story! (Love your descriptions of Tommi, btw XD) But as much as Bill is mad at both Jin and Tommi, I'm not so sure he'd want either of them dead. Maybe he can hurt them, just a little ;) Thanks for your review.
Date: 02/18/17 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 02/18/17 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 22
That was.......totally unexpected :O
Author's Response: I know! ;) Thanks for reading.
Date: 02/12/17 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 21
This chapter !!!!
That makes me sad to see how the relationship between Bill and Tommi isn't good anymore. But I don't know what to say after that, maybe Tommi cheated on Bill but at the end, he don't know because he never asked him, he haven't talk to him. That was a bad move Bill just made because you can't cheat on your boyfriend just because you're in a bad time. This is why I'm disapointed by Bill and also by Georg, you don't do that to a friend.
Bill and Tommi needed to talk and now maybe it's too late.
Anyway, I can't wait to see Tommi's reaction.
Author's Response: Yeah, some bad decisions have been made by everyone involved. Thank you for reading!
Date: 02/12/17 12:48 pm Title: Chapter 21
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks!