Date: 11/29/25 01:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such a beautiful story! I laughed out loud and really enjoyed this journey. I read that you already left the fandom, but I hope you know there are still people who truly enjoy reading what you brought to it!! d84;a039;
Author's Response: Hi Thank you! So glad you liked it. I still follow the guys on instagram just to see what they’re up to. I’m always pleased to read new reviews and to know that the stories are being enjoyed. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 02/16/24 11:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
Ahhh this one pulled on my heart strings so much! The epilogue was so eventful I really thought everything was done happily ever after by chapter 14 and then bam just twists and turns every where. I love love love how I’m always surprised by the switch in events on your work. This one was amazing as well! I also just finished your other story “cuddles” and loved it too! Now I’m onto read the last one I haven’t read I think the title was Foes. I actually read a few chapters of that story months ago but then accidentally lost the page and couldn’t find it again for so long I’m so happy I found your account again! I’m sure you’re probably out of this fandom now but if you ever decided to write for it again I would literally be jumping for joy!
Author's Response: Awww thank you so much for leaving such nice reviews on my stories. I have indeed moved on from the fandom and even from writing. Life got so busy I just couldn’t find time to indulge in writing anything. There is actually another story that I never got to finish, just wrote several chapters and then stopped. It was so long ago I don’t even remember why I stopped. But it’s so much fun remembering the days I used to write for hours. Your reviews take me back in time so I’m really happy to know what you think and that you’re enjoying it. Hope you enjoy FOE too 🙂
Date: 03/12/23 06:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
I have left a review on some other fics of yours, but wanted to say that I enjoyed this one too! Bill is such a LITTLE SHIT! LOL
Author's Response: Hehee yeah. After Bill drastically changed his look I still wanted to write about his old androgynous look and came up with this story. Again thanks so much for your reviews :D
Date: 01/16/17 09:53 pm Title: Chapter 16
this was a good story!
u should do a sequel to this!
Date: 05/24/16 04:59 am Title: Chapter 16
This story had me shaking with anger in the beginning, laughing and being tortured with Tom in the middle, feeling a little dead when Tom was getting married and crying when Bill was in a coma. This story had me smiling like a fool in the end.
My boyfriend is trans and I helped him pack up his female things when he fully transitioned so I definitely undersatdn how Bill was feeling. It is a difficult thing to turn your back on someone you were because it almost feels like someone died. Still it's a sweet story and I loved it. Thank you for this story. I really loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I'm glad you liked it. It was a little daring for me to write this one, but if I made readers laugh a little then I know I did something right. :) The 'end of an era' line was somehow a reference to rl Bill letting go of his 'femme look'. I once saw a fanart from Monica, where manly Bill with the short blond hair holds a knife and he just killed 'femme' Bill, with the long black hair and who is lying dead on the ground, over a pool of blood. It kinda left an impact on me, but I imagine that's how it must have been like for rl Bill when he let go of that image.
Date: 05/10/16 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 16
I love this story so very very much!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for telling me. I'm really happy that it made you happy :)
Date: 05/10/16 05:59 pm Title: Chapter 16
It's done! What?! I realized while reading that it was sounding pretty final so I checked and it's finished!! Not that you didn't know that already. It was wonderful! The ending was every bit as dramatic as the rest of the story and I love that :D Next on my list of things to read is Nexus btw
Author's Response: Thank you!! So happy that you liked it. Hope it brought a smile to your face. Ahh hope you like Nexus too :D Never mind the bad grammar heheh my English was worse way back then.
Date: 05/10/16 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 16
Whaaaaaa, it's over already??? Awww. Well, this was fun and it was my honor to beta for you ^^ *heart*
Author's Response: It's a short story compared to my other ones. I'm truly grateful for your help, I feel my stories are so much better thanks to you. *kiss* Hope you're in for the next one, 'cause you know I'll ask you to beta hehe. I'll ask for a banner too, you know, to inspire me to keep writing XD
Date: 05/10/16 02:34 am Title: Chapter 16
That was fun thanks!
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Date: 05/09/16 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 16
Awh, I'm so glad that Tom's dad changed his mind, and that Bill survived. And also that they're now happy together :) It was a really great story :)
Author's Response: I'm really happy to know you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 05/09/16 03:29 am Title: Chapter 16
It was a very nice story to read. With strong feelings and unusual theme. I really enjoyed it. I loved your writting. Hope you'll write another soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! And thanks for telling me you liked this story. Yes, I am currently writing a new one, hopefully I won't take too long to post it :D
Date: 05/08/16 09:44 pm Title: Chapter 16
Really good story :)
Author's Response: Thank you!!! :D I hope you had a good time reading it.
Date: 05/05/16 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 15
Aaaaaah, everything crumbles like a house of cards XD
Though grammatically speaking, everything here looks pretty perfect! I only strongly suggest you put a scene change linebreak between Tom apologizing to the guy and showing up at the Detention Center
Author's Response: Hi!!! Fixed!! Thanks :D
Date: 05/05/16 11:39 am Title: Chapter 15
mothershit😊
Author's Response: oh...I have no idea if that's good or bad....ummmm...thanks?
Date: 05/05/16 08:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay so. I've looked at this fic every time you've updated and I've tried to read this first chapter like a billion times but always got stuck because first person is for some reason really hard for me to read when it comes to fanfic. Which is strange because I've read tons of first person books and never had problems with it.
Anyway. I'm here once again because a friend of mine have told me about ten times that I should read it, and last night I asked her to tell me a bit more about since the summary doesn't give a lot away (which I don't mind, I'm not complaining, it's just that since I can't make myself to start reading l needed to know a bit more about what it's about) and well, I have to say that she made me interested enough to once again try to ignore the first person thing and give it a read. After all, I love your writing and I'm sure we both remember how crazy I was about your last story.
I'll be reading from my phone most of the time, so my reviews will most likely not be very interesting because I hate typing on this thing, and if there are weird random words or mistakes let's blame the stupid auto correct that always seems to add words I sometimes don't even notice. We have such amazing weather in Sweden right now but I get bored if I sit in the sun and do nothing so I need something to read, but I can't just read and not review because that's awfully rude and I think writers deserve some recognition. Also I'll probably be super slow with catching up and I'm not even sure I'll make it through the whole story, but I'm here! Giving it a chance! Let's start with that.
And look at that, I'm already rambling about everything but the story.. Sorry.
First chapter was.. Well it didn't tell me much, but I feel like it could be interesting. Tom's got some issues to work with and yeah, I'm curious enough to keep reading. So even though I don't have much to say about this one I'll be back with something smarter later! See you on the next one ^-^
Author's Response: Hi!!! oh lol, I feel exactly the same way about first-person. I like it in books, not so much in fics. Not fair of me since I wrote one and I don't know why I did, guess I wanted to see if I could? Anyway, thanks for giving it a chance :) I hope you like or are entertained at least, but I can understand if it's not your cup of tea XD
Date: 05/02/16 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 15
Oh no :( I hate Tom's dad so much, he should want Tom to be happy, but no :( I hope everything will be alright in the end. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Every parent should want their kids to be happy, no matter what. It's a rule!!
Date: 05/02/16 01:06 pm Title: Chapter 15
:'(
Author's Response: u__u
Date: 05/02/16 07:05 am Title: Chapter 15
I bet I can get a tomato bigger that your shield 😁😜
How is life for them even fair lol
Author's Response: hahah it'd had to be a watermelon. Yes, exactly, life's not fair sometimes :/
Date: 05/02/16 01:47 am Title: Chapter 15
The only reason I'm sticking to tomatoes and not bringing on the "mushroom bombs" is because YOU NEED TO MAKE IT BETTER!!!!! This is terrible!!! Why?!?! WHHHYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!!???
Author's Response: well sometimes bad things happen to good people and it's not fair. It's life. Don't kill me yet though :)
Date: 05/02/16 01:44 am Title: Chapter 15
Damn damn damn... well, that sucks. Hate Tom's "father"!
Author's Response: Yeah, he's being ludicrous, but he's convinced that he's doing a good thing for Tom. :/