Date: 03/27/16 07:33 am Title: Chapter 6
This is soo thrilling and exciting! I like stories that are different from everything I have ever read and this is for sure one of them! I love it!
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm really happy to know it keeps you interested. Hope you enjoy what's coming :D
Date: 03/27/16 03:04 am Title: Chapter 6
I was on vacation but now I'm back! :)
Tom is in the crusade to save all the rich man from the trickster, well now Tom know that the trickster and Bill from the thirty-fifth floor are the same person, but I think this is going to be the start of a "friendship" between Tom and Bill maybe? Bill will stop running from Tom and Tom is going to get more confused on Bill and his feelings for him and... Well, I like to say what I think is going to happen in the story so hehehe. I'll be here!! Happily waiting for updates ;)
Author's Response: Hi! Hope you had a nice vacation! Hehe, yeah, it's a Tom/Bill story heh, but I like the characters, mainly Tom lol, to suffer a little first heheheheheheh
Date: 03/27/16 02:27 am Title: Chapter 6
So short T-T
Author's Response: I know :/ but maybe the quick updates compensate? :D
Date: 03/27/16 01:33 am Title: Chapter 6
Lol...Omg, That's funny to me!
Author's Response: XD Thanks. Glad you liked it hehe
Date: 03/24/16 06:44 am Title: Chapter 5
Tom, now you have an excuse to go after Bill XD My God, I had a good laugh with Tom running after Bill and the pie in the face thing. In Chile we call it “el tortazo” XD I really love your work and now I’m really looking forward to the next chapter. Kisses, my dear.
Author's Response: hehehe glad you enjoyed it!! Posting next chapter in a min :D
Date: 03/23/16 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter, again :)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Date: 03/23/16 04:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
Oooh, Tom is still hung up on Bill even after knowing !! :3 Now m just gonna wait for the romance to start!! :P great chapter btw!! :D And i love that you update so quickly!! :))
Author's Response: Thank you!!! So happy you're enjoying it :D Yeah, I finished this story before I started posting so that I didn't leave readers waiting too long for updates. :)
Date: 03/23/16 09:24 am Title: Chapter 5
Now, that I'm all caught up on this, I will review :D
I am loving this story so much so far! This is so fun and entertaining!
I am wondering when Tom is going to recognize his infatuation as Bill, the guy from the hotel lol I am thinking Bill recognized Tom, though, and that could be why he keeps running? He knows how Tom really is?
Anyways, I really cannot wait to see what else you have in store for us! I really am enjoying this!
Author's Response: Hi!! Thanks so much for the review. So happy you think it's entertaining, 'cause that's my main goal when I write :D Hheheheheh you should stay tuned for next chapter!!! XD
Date: 03/23/16 03:44 am Title: Chapter 5
Haha, excellent excuse for looking for Bill again :D I believe, that Tom will protect everyone from Bill and, at the end, he will chase away everyone from Bill, because he will want to have him for himself :D
Author's Response: Hi! lol Tom's too hardheaded, but even he can't win against someone like Bill XD
Date: 03/23/16 02:07 am Title: Chapter 5
Hmm, I strongly suggest breaking up the first paragraph into two or three paragraphs. Kind of a wall of text as it is now...
And in How could I had been so stupid? "had" should be "have".
Hooray! I was waiting to "see" this chase scene again. The pie part is my favorite :D
And I like it that now Tom feels he has to protect EVERYONE from Bill, lol.
Author's Response: Hi!! Fixed!! Thanks. Heheh such a waste of good pie lol :D Yeah, in rl it's the other way around, right? Protect Bill from everyone XD
Date: 03/23/16 12:12 am Title: Chapter 5
Well, the story is not going at all like I would have imagined which I probably should have expected since I'm NOT the author. Not saying that I don't like it though. I really do! It's good to have an author I trust push me out of my comfort zone. Damn. It seems Bill really is a trickster. Unless he's just playing some sort of trick now and he's not trying to trick all those guys in which case he'd still be a trickster since he's tricking you into thinking that he's tricking them when he's not. And I will leave you with that deep insight.
Author's Response: Hi!! I always try to keep the surprise factor, and not let the plot be too predictable. Thankfully I have an awesome beta-reader who proof-read this and made me make several changes, just to make sure I avoided certain sensibilities, but at the same time keeping the heart of the story. In this story readers may have a difficult time choosing who to root for hehe. Let's see if you have it right about Bill :D Glad you like the story. Thanks so much for reviewing.
Date: 03/20/16 08:24 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Tom. He had to follow Bill to Las Vegas like a stalker to meet “the girl”, but it was worse. He found out the truth hardest way. Now I want to know what he will do. Besides calling for help to that line from chapter one. Aaahhh I’m really exciting about this story. Thank you.
Author's Response: Hi! Glad you're enjoying this story too :D Tom's life is about to change, for obvious reasons muahah. XD
Date: 03/20/16 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 4
OMG!!!!! lol
Author's Response: lol XD
Date: 03/20/16 04:15 pm Title: Chapter 4
Hahaha, poor Tom :D I feel sorry for him, but it was funny so I liked it :D
So, what Tom is going to do, now???
Author's Response: XD Poor Tom is right, and just wait. I was a little evil to him in this story too. hehe. Glad you liked the chapter :D
Date: 03/20/16 03:36 am Title: Chapter 1
Hahaha poor Tom!
Author's Response: XD yeah, I'm always evil to poor Tom.
Date: 03/19/16 09:35 pm Title: Chapter 4
I can just picture his face. Uncomfortable as hell Lol.
Andi didn't have to do bill like that lol but that was funny.
Author's Response: hehe XD I'm so mean to poor Tom in my stories. Thanks for the review. Glad you liked it. :)
Date: 03/19/16 06:56 pm Title: Chapter 4
Loved it :)
Author's Response: Thanks :D
Date: 03/19/16 09:39 am Title: Chapter 4
Jajajajajaja poor Tom. Surprise! Surprise! ;) great chapter
Author's Response: lol thank you!! Glad you liked it. :)
Date: 03/19/16 07:11 am Title: Chapter 4
woah!! Tom still stuck around though right?!! ._.
Author's Response: heheh can't say, but you'll see what happens in the next few chapters :)
Date: 03/19/16 03:25 am Title: Chapter 4
I love your story so much! :-) This is exactly what I needed for making my perfect Saturday morning. I look forward to the next part as a little kid at Christmas. :-)
Author's Response: aww thank you!! So glad you enjoyed it. :D Won't keep you waiting long for the next one :)