Date: 04/14/16 05:22 pm Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks again!! :D
Date: 04/14/16 02:53 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh, that was an interesting end. I was so engrossed in reading that I couldnīt understand for a while that it is already over and I have to wait until the next chapter... I want mooore!!! :)
Author's Response: heheh thanks! I'm glad the chapter was engrossing. I tend to end chapters in cliffies hehe. More tomorrow :D
Date: 04/14/16 07:11 am Title: Chapter 11
OMG why did his dad show up😨 I can't wait for more lol. I hope Bill didn't trick his dad before 😫
Author's Response: heheh I'll be posting Saturday :D
Date: 04/14/16 01:44 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit!
Author's Response: XD
Date: 04/14/16 12:14 am Title: Chapter 11
Oh shit. Tell me what happens neeeeeeeeexxxxt!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: lol hehehehehe well...Tom's dad is gonna....dun dun dun! XD
Date: 04/13/16 09:43 am Title: Chapter 10
I hope Tom will be more for Bill than the boy in the beginning. I love the story so so much. Can't wait for the next, I'm sooo curious!! Please update soon :))
Author's Response: Thank you!! I'm truly happy to know you like it. I'm about to post the next chapter in min :D
Date: 04/09/16 05:33 pm Title: Chapter 10
The irony of that last part! It's actually painful. I wish Bill would give some indication of how he really feels. Also, I'm so proud of Tom for both being such a devious darling and tracking Bill down and for kissing Bill while he's a dude. Did I mention that the G's are asses? They are. Lovable, but still asses.
Author's Response: hehe yeah, Tom would never figure he'd end up just like the guy in the first chapter hehe. You'll see what Tom does, driven by love hehe. Fool! XD
Date: 04/09/16 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 10
Awh, poor Tom :( hopefully Bill will come around and give a relationship the chance :) Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! It won't be easy for Tom, but let's see :D
Date: 04/09/16 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 10
Yay! I thought the pacing in this chapter was great. And I appreciate the symmetry of Tom's being in that first guy's position from the first chapter.
Oh, I spotted a tiny typo: where it says "what's best for my son" (or something like that) the 's' in "what's" is missing.
Author's Response: hehehe thanks!! Hmmm I'm beginning to think I lose characters when I copy-paste the chapter into THF. I have no idea how to keep the format, so everything copies all together into one huge paragraph. I have to add italics again, break paragraphs, add spaces and such. :/
Date: 04/09/16 02:30 am Title: Chapter 10
Bill is as much of a teaser as you are lol
As much as I like to see Tom suffer... And I leave you hanging with that.
Thanks for uploading, when you said
"All things must come to an end...lol kidding. " I thought this might be the last chapter lol, so I totally had to double check the status,.phew, I'm glad it isn't. Yay for the fast pdate, keep them coming sister lol.
I'll be gay for Bill too, Tom is not alone xD. I think I said this before, probably in anothe chapi
Author's Response: hehe yeah, it's easy to update when the fic is already finished. Bill the 'gaymaker' lol. I laugh at the many "I'm gay for Bill" comments I've seen from straight guys on the net, back in the day when Bill used makeup. XD Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/09/16 01:44 am Title: Chapter 10
You may won't believe me but during the whole story I was epecting that, in the end, Tom will be in the same position like that guy in the beggining of this story...and there he is...
But I hope that he is going to try more and that Bill finally give in!
Author's Response: I know that when you write/read Bill/Tom fics, you just know they'll somehow end together, eventually, but it's fun to write/read about the ordeals until it gets there hehe :) Thanks for the review!
Date: 04/05/16 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 9
I loved this again, a lot :)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
Date: 04/05/16 09:59 am Title: Chapter 9
Oooookay, I fell for Bill officially XD Oww poor baby, he was an orphaned kid. Well what can I say, I loved this chapter too. Tom finally accepted his feelings and just gave in, and I think Bill too but!, we well see, he's so unpredictable sometimes.
Ohhh this is so exciting! I want to know if it's true what Bill said at the end of the chapter loool, ok no XD
See you next time! :D
Author's Response: Yeah, Bill has a more important, underlying reason for his 'job' :) hahaha don't we all want to know?? Specially since they constantly talk about it in rl, well Tom at least lol. Let's see what happens next :D
Date: 04/05/16 09:15 am Title: Chapter 9
Take. Breaths. Don't. Hyperventi... AAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!! ITSTOOLATEIVEGONEOFFTHEDEEPEND!!!!!!! THEYFRIGGINKIIIIIIIISSED!!!!!
Shit. At the beginning I was dying of secondhand embarrassment for Tom when he found out what FUK ME BB actually meant but damn!!! Now I'm kinda glad he did. Does Bill actually like him?!?!
Author's Response: Heheh yeah, of course Tom would instantly get the wrong idea to that message. Bill's reaction? You'll have to wait for next chapter to find out XD
Date: 04/05/16 06:05 am Title: Chapter 1
OMG Last chapter was sooooo great, I love this *.*
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it :D
Date: 04/05/16 04:02 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh my god you can't stop it now! I need to know the rest! I love how Tom is always looking for him and how Bill wants him to know he doesn't care when in fact he loves to be followed ! And I love the way you write it!
Because of you I watched the crying game, and damn it was a bad movie..... lol but a good idea for sure! Anyway can't wait to read more of the story and I can't wait to know how you'll write it, because Tom is falling in the game!!!
Author's Response: heheh thanks! I'm glad you liked it. lol yeah, that's why Tom said 'I fell for it bad' haha. The Crying Game is 97% on rottentomatoes lol, but it's okay, I guess. The theme of the movie is what got me. Anyway, you could watch "Ma Vie en Rose" now. It's sad, but lovely :3
Date: 04/05/16 02:27 am Title: Chapter 9
I'm so in love with these last sentences. I read it so many times and I still don't have enough! I wonder what Bill is going to do when his last try didn't work. I hope he won't mind the kiss :)
Can I ask how many chapters there will be?
Author's Response: aww thank you!! You'll see Bill's response in next chapter. XD Unfortunately this fic is not as long as my other fics, but I don't want to say how many chapters, cause then you'll know the end is coming. I like to keep the suspense a little heh :D
Date: 04/05/16 02:21 am Title: Chapter 9
Nooooo, it ended too soon, but I'll give it to you. It was a longer chapi
Thanks foruploading,.xD.I laugh so much with the FUK ME BB thing, seriously xD hahahaha
Tom's subconscience is speaking to him, loud and clear.
Author's Response: haha yeah!!! he wanted it to say that, subconsciously XD Next chapter is another long chapter too :D
Date: 04/05/16 02:15 am Title: Chapter 9
"he forgot about his break-up for days" sounds funny. It makes the reader think Gus forgot about it *for* the duration of multiple days at that point. Maybe change it to "he forgot about his break-up for the first time in days"?
And I laughed at Bill's sudden dick comment XD That probably would have turned off anyone else but Tom.
Author's Response: hi! lol, hmmm yeah, think it sound better. fixed :D Hehehe, yeah, of course it wouldn't work with Tom, but at least he tried lol.
Date: 04/05/16 12:53 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh my Lord, this story is too much...Lol! I freaking love it!
Author's Response: hehe thank you!!! Hope you keep enjoying it :D