Date: 04/29/16 04:25 am Title: Chapter 14
That's a disastrous end! Oh my god !!! You can't stop now!
Author's Response: lol! I had to stop the chapter there, out of pure meanness, but I wouldn't leave the story there. That would be meaner. :P
Date: 04/28/16 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 14
I'm very curious of what's going to happen next :)
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad the story keeps you entertained :D
Date: 04/28/16 01:42 pm Title: Chapter 14
I was not expecting this type of chapter AT ALL but I loves it!!!!!!! I was crushed on Tom's behalf at the beginning, cried with joy when Bill came around, had the inevitable reaction to the smexiness ;), melted at Bill's tender side showing through, and then you left me suspended with terror right at the end!!!!!
Author's Response: hahah I was hoping to bring out all the emotions in this chapter. So glad you liked it, even with the bad ending lol :D
Date: 04/28/16 09:49 am Title: Chapter 14
I love it!!! I love it I love it I love it n.n but what I loved the most was the last part, OMG maybe Tom's dad is back to make his son miserable? Or someone Bill tricked? Maybe Tom's dad found out about Bill's "work" and started to hunting him down... Oh! Bill run away again!... Mmmm no, erhm... Ok I don't know, you always find the way to surprise me hehehe.
Author's Response: hehe I was really wicked when I ended the chapter there, I know. I suppose Bill and Tom's relationship was jinxed by the 'too good to be true' phrase.
Date: 04/28/16 12:59 am Title: Chapter 14
Omg what could happen to ruin all of this?
Author's Response: Hi! I think you may have a theory, right? Let's see what happens then hehe
Date: 04/28/16 12:50 am Title: Chapter 14
because of this Fic. I'm now addicted to "The Crying Game" movie. lol
Author's Response: aww really? I'm glad you watched it. It's a good movie and the theme is gorgeous. :)
Date: 04/28/16 12:41 am Title: Chapter 14
What?! Are you kidding me? Omg, how am I going to survive waiting for next chapter???
Author's Response: lol It's just that I have a thing for cliffies. I'll post next chapter on Sunday :D
Date: 04/26/16 06:09 am Title: Chapter 13
Lol I bet Bill had a lights out moment for a while lol.
Author's Response: Heheh yeah, took a second to realize who he'd been talking to lol.
Date: 04/26/16 04:24 am Title: Chapter 13
Hmm, for this section: “Yeah, I bet bartending can be rather tricky, but not at all like your other job.”
My words did take the effect I wanted. I think it would be good if you removed the "but" from the first part and changed the second sentence to "My words had the effect I'd wanted." It reads smoother that way.
And yay! This was one of the more amusing parts, I thought XD Also, I feel that it's realistic that Bill would have a more... uh... normal job occasionally, lol.
Author's Response: Hi!! Fixed. It does read smoother. Thanks :D Hehe, it was fun imagining the guys in drag. I've seen some makeup tutorials on youtube, of guys and they're amazing. LOL.
Date: 04/25/16 05:03 pm Title: Chapter 13
That Tom really dressed up as a girl just to be able to talk to Bill xD What you all do when you love someone :) great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thanks. Yes exactly, he'll do whatever it takes, even dressing up as a girl lol
Date: 04/25/16 04:04 pm Title: Chapter 13
This has got to be my favorite chapter yet!!!! OMG, I am OBSESSED with drag!!!! It's like a dream come true for me. Finally getting Tom Kaulitz into full on drag!!! He'd be such a gorgeous queen 💜💜💜💜💜
Author's Response: lol so glad you enjoyed it. Oh I know!! His ponytail hairstyle is a reference to his dreadlock ponytail XD Seriously with just a little makeup he'd look as pretty as Bill hehehe
Date: 04/25/16 09:42 am Title: Chapter 13
I just laughed so hard, Tom & G's dressing like girls hahahaha, poor Gus XDDDD The guard is so funny too hehe.
Ok, Bill is so shocked now uuuuuhhhhh but can't blame him XD
Author's Response: heheh glad you enjoyed the chapter! :D Yeah, Bill certainly didn't expect that. XD
Date: 04/25/16 04:54 am Title: Chapter 13
Hahaha, that was so hilarious! I would kill to see them all! :DDD Now Bill just has to give in!
Author's Response: heh thanks. Yeah me too!!! lol I think I've seen some manips out there, there was one with all the guys as girls. Really funny XD
Date: 04/22/16 01:39 pm Title: Chapter 12
I know tomorrow is Saturday, but I can't wait :( Love all the chapters :))
Author's Response: Hi!! Thanks so much. Sorry for the wait but I'm back now. About to post next chapter :D
Date: 04/19/16 10:07 am Title: Chapter 12
Ay nooooooo, Tom's dad is eviiiiil but really, we can't expect something else from him. Georg's right though, I was thinking the same, but the heart wants what it wants, right? And that's Bill, not money XD
"See you" next week! :D
Author's Response: hehe thanks. Yeah, that was the case for Tom. Keep Bill, lose the money. :/
Date: 04/18/16 03:36 am Title: Chapter 12
Good God what a rush decision for Tom, surprised me with that. Can't wait until Tom finds Bill again and see what happens when Tom tells him what be done.
Author's Response: Yeah, sometimes rash decisions are made in a moment of anger, but then, Tom's dad wasn't giving him another choice. I'm about to post next chapter so let's see :D
Date: 04/18/16 12:38 am Title: Chapter 12
I'm starting to feel anxious for Tom. I don't know how he's going to manage. Also, is he relating the story as it happens or is he reminiscing on something long past?
Author's Response: Hi!!! Like I said, I don't make things easy for Tom hehe. Tom is narrating the story as something that happened in the past, yup. :)
Date: 04/17/16 05:28 pm Title: Chapter 12
Awh :( but amazing chapter again :)
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
Date: 04/17/16 09:19 am Title: Chapter 12
Sure he made a tough choice. But I love him for it lol. Bill can swindler enough rich guys to take care of the two of them lol.
Also how did his dad figure out Bill was a guy so fast. I would say Gustav should have noticed faster, but he was distracted by food? 😫
Author's Response: Hi! Well, like Tom expected, not everyone can be fooled, even Bill knows so, that's why he only waits for the gullible ones. Bill's victims are initially blinded by their attraction. Tom's dad is not affected by Bill's looks, specially since he doesn't want the 'unworthy' girl with Tom. Every girl who hangs with Tom, he scrutinizes carefully, and of course once he figured it out, he meant to tell Tom.
Date: 04/17/16 01:49 am Title: Chapter 12
Tom is so brave. Now is the time for Bill to realize that and give him a chance...
Author's Response: Yes, he is, and eve more so. lol you'll see what I mean. :D