Date: 03/19/16 12:01 am Title: Chapter 4
Dammit!!! Ok. So Tom knows. And I know from the first chapter that he proceeds to freak out and be absolutely ridiculous. Please tell me you can make this better with your magical author skills! And I feel relieved that Bill didn't actually try to reel him in and trick him. He just really went along with Tom's mistake for a few hours and then tried to let it be. Also, what the fuck was he doing in Vegas?
Andreas is such a lovable dickwad :P
Author's Response: lol gosh I feel like I want to explain stuff but I'll spoil it. I think you'll find the answers to what's going on in the next chapters, though. :)
Date: 03/16/16 01:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
Hahahaha OMG Bill you didn't! XD Poor Tom waiting for her and she just... sneaked out to grab a cab after all she ate XD Eh eh eh Tom, the game just begun! I'm on Bill's side, for now. I love his attitude towards Tom :P
Author's Response: hahha yeah. Thanks. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. I think you'll want to chhange sides later lol, but we'll see. XD
Date: 03/16/16 10:12 am Title: Chapter 3
My dear, I loved the way Bill behaved, just as Tom. But I didn’t expect that he would run away after eating. That was really funny. Poor Tom ended with his pride broken jajaja. And once again Bill warned him but Tom didn’t understand the hints. Now I’m really curious about the next encounter. This is so exciting. Thank you for this fic.
Author's Response: hahaha yeah! Must be a nightmare, getting ditched on a date, specially for someone as vain as Tom XD. I think you'll enjoy what's coming next muahaha. Thanks for reading and reviewing :D
Date: 03/16/16 12:35 am Title: Chapter 3
"He saw her, I'm mean him, again?! Wait. Duh, stupid me. That's what the story's about!"
That was me at the end :P
Author's Response: lol yeah, he still sees a "her", but wait for next chapter hehe :D
Date: 03/15/16 05:42 pm Title: Chapter 3
great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you *^_^*
Date: 03/15/16 03:16 am Title: Chapter 3
Sooo exciting....
I don't know if I missed something or not, but... Tom didn't ask 'her' for a name, yet?
Author's Response: :D Thanks. Yeah, he did ask for her name when he first met "her" in the club, but Bill didn't answer, as he was too startled to see Tom. XD
Date: 03/15/16 03:08 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh hey, I think a sentence got deleted. Remember when I suggested you write a couple sentences about Tom waiting for his date to get out of the bathroom? (I believe you added something about him waiting a while, tapping his fingers, before getting up to see what was going on?)
Also, there's an s missing in She’ different
The super expensive dessert is just as funny the second time around! XD Thousands of dollars, dear Lord...
Author's Response: Hi!rnrnoops fixed!rnrnHehe, thanks. That dessert is based on the Frozzen Haute Chocolate. $25,000 lol. Has not only 24k gold, but the dish is decorated with diamonds lmao.rnrnfor the waiting I put the thing about the legs --- 'my legs had started to shake restlessly as they usually do when I’m sitting for too long and I’m anxious to leave.'rnrnTom does that a lot in interviews, I've noticed, lol, so I figured it would go well. :)
Date: 03/14/16 09:56 am Title: Chapter 2
Heheheeeee so, Bill did recognize Tom but Tom had no idea who Bill was... Tom Tom, you had your chance to run away, face the consecuences now XD
Author's Response: lol yes!! It's kind of hard to let the reader know what Bill is thinking, solely by Tom's thoughts and descriptions of Bill' reactions, but yeah, Bill was all like 'oh shit' and then when he realized Tom didn't recognize him was ...'soooo, he has no idea who I am'. XD
Date: 03/13/16 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
I loved the second chapter. Tom, Bill warned you, it was your fault that you got in this situation. But I want to see if they did another thing. Why Tom is so troubled knowing that Bill was not a woman? Were they about to have sex or something? How did Tom find out? I love your fic, thank you for updating soon.
Author's Response: Hi! Thank you!! Glad you're enjoying it. All answers coming up in next chapters!!! :D
Date: 03/13/16 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter again :) I love it :)
Author's Response: Thank you! Hoping that every chapter brings little bit of enjoyment :D
Date: 03/13/16 04:27 am Title: Chapter 2
Haha, I like it more and more! :)
Author's Response: Yay!!! Thanks. Hope to keep you entertained :D
Date: 03/13/16 01:04 am Title: Chapter 2
"I’ve to go" should be "I have to go"
Hehe, fun reading all this again! ^^
Author's Response: Thanks!! Fixed :D It's been so long it's like reading a new one huh lol XD
Date: 03/13/16 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2
ohhh Tom is calling for trouble :3 I'm really curious how's it gonna turn out!! can't wait till monday!!!!!
Author's Response: hehe, hope this story brings out a smile to your face as you read next chapter :D
Date: 03/12/16 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Damn. Bill did kinda try to warn him. I'm really curious as to why Tom feels like its the end of the world when he finds out Bill's a guy. I've always had that problem. Since I'm bi, I really don't understand when people are turned off from other people just because of their gender. Also, I'm really awkward with girls since they all seem to be straight and I don't know how the hell to act around straight girls :P
Author's Response: Hi!! Can't say much without spoiling but you'll see why Tom reacts the way he does as the story goes. It's sad that even in this day there's lots of prejudice but I suppose it's the result of cultural and social aspects. Tom's character is subject to that as you'll see in his bias thoughts and comments. Anyway, you make a good point, and that's the sort of message I always try to send in my stories. :D
Date: 03/11/16 03:24 pm Title: Chapter 1
you are finally writing another story ^_^ I've read all of your fics!! It sounds great,a bit different from your other stories still m really looking forward to reading it!! :))
Author's Response: Hi!! Thank you! Yes, can't help but keep writing. This one is done, and there's another one in the works. Hopefully I won't take as long as this one to post lol. I'm trying out new things, see how it turns out. Hope you like it. Don't know if I'll write first-person again, though, kinda complicated, lol.
Date: 03/10/16 05:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I already like this story :)
Author's Response: hehe Thanks!!! Hope you enjoy it :D
Date: 03/10/16 12:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
OMG I just loved the first chapter, I will be here every chapter. I guess the "girl" is the dreadlocks version of Bill, right? Aahh, I'm so happy to read another of your stories. Thank you, my dear
Author's Response: Helloooo. Yes, femme Bill will always be my muse. You'll see how he looks like as you read. You already know how I love to describe Bill's otherworldly beauty in my fics XD Thank you for reading!! Kisses :*
Date: 03/10/16 11:35 am Title: Chapter 1
You're back! How cool is that? I'm really looking forward to read what's going to happen. I'll be happily waiting for the next chapter :D
Author's Response: Hi! Back to posting stories, yup! Thanks for reading. I hope you like what's coming next. :D
Date: 03/10/16 09:17 am Title: Chapter 1
So excited to be reading something new from you! I can't wait to read more of this one and see where you are going to take this!
Author's Response: Hi!!! Thanks! I'm hoping you're as entertained as I was while I wrote it :D
Date: 03/10/16 06:43 am Title: Chapter 1
I was just thinking about you this morning, was wondering if yo are still on THF! It's so great to see you back! Love your stories, but I'm worried that first person maybe too big challenge for me. But even if I won't read this story just seeing your name in updates will brighten my day
Author's Response: Hi!! Really? Thank you!!! :) I never left the fandom, actually, been here all the time, just took a little longer to post something. Life and all. Oh, I know what you mean. I don't like first-person stories because they're usually mary-sueish. But I suppose never say never. Except for Het. That's just...no. XD I hope your curiosity wins that challenge and that you still come and read :D