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Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/10/16 01:59 pm Title: Split

Naa, I'm from germany - and didn't know that(what you told me, not that I'm from germany xD). Wow, thats pretty hard ._. Then I hope there are reasons that they can kick you out and that tom will be kicked out and can go back to bill ._. I kind of understand Tom, but I also think he is overreacting.
I mean Tom sees his friends in a high status, but just because they are studing something, doesn't mean that they will become something pretty big. There is more than just to learn this or this. And also he still could do something else. Sign up something that will tie you for at least 4 years is pretty hard - even more when you are in a relationship. I understand bill 100% :(
I smell much drama coming :O

Author's Response:

Yeah the military thing here is pretty intense. There are reasons but they are difficult to get done. Tom is definitely overreacting but I also think he is looking out for his future. Tom definitely does his friends in high esteem and this is kind of the way I thought when I gradauted. I am currently in college but I didn't have my life planned out and when all my friends did it felt pretty hoepless. This whole thing was very hard for me to write. There is drama coming. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/16 06:13 pm Title: Split

I would be just as upset as Bill was, but I don't want them to break up :'( Great chapter :)

Author's Response:

I would be upset too. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/16 11:41 am Title: Split

._____. Nooo! I knew, there would come something like that :( I hope Tom and Bill will be soon together again. And that Tom wont go to the airforce ...

Author's Response:

I'm not sure if you're from the states or not but when you enlist and get called into basic training aka boot camp you are signed up for the next four years minimum. If you fail to meet these requirements the military can have you arrested and thrown in prison. I have many thoughts about all of this but for now Tom is in the military. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/16 10:36 am Title: Split

Oh shit! Tom enlisted in the Army? I'm not surprised that Bill is unhappy. Tom will be long gone, he will be far away from Bill and moreover, it is a dangerous profession.
On the other hand, they were all so sweet around the baby. Andy shone again.
Thank you.

Author's Response:

If my boyfriend enlisted in the airforce I would be vastly unhappy as well. It is a very demanding job that requires you to be away from your family. I liked writing about the baby and Andi's joy in him. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/09/16 04:40 am Title: Split

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the continued support.

Reviewer: mcr1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 11:04 pm Title: Graduation

Great chapter!

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Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 05:55 pm Title: Graduation

Andreas' speech was amazing! Someone defenitly had to speak the truth about that school :) great chapter :)

Author's Response:

I spent so long on that speech. At first I was going to have it be something optomistic like it usually is at these types of events but it just didn't fit with what I wanted Andreas to say as sort of his last fuck you to the school. I also wanted the silence to be broken so I finally came up with this. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/05/16 02:59 am Title: Graduation

So that amused me a lot. While everyone expected a congratulatory optimistic crap, Andreas threw an atomic bomb among all. The entire staff - male part - should be dismissed from work. After all, Andreas slept with most of them. :-D It itself is a scandal. Public accusations of rape can no longer be hushed up.
I'm curious to continue the story. Thanks.

Author's Response:

I wanted to show that while Andreas is a character I add in a lot of stories for the comedic relief he can be serious. I wanted to show that he defies expectations in the best way. I wanted him also to own up to his victimization and say this is no longer ok. Make the public aware of the stuff going on in this school. I am glad you liked the chapter thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/04/16 10:16 am Title: Graduation

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the continued support.

Reviewer: inlovewithTom Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/02/16 05:58 pm Title: Disappointment

Im not surprised at how awful I feel for Tom. I would've felt equally as awful if Georg wouldn't have gotten the position but still it sucks! It's a good thing both guys have really good support systems and glad Bill is helping Tom pull himself together. Great chapter!!!

Author's Response:

I felt really bad for Tom while writing this chapter but I definitely would have felt just as bad for Georg if he hadn't gotten it. I liked Bill finally having the oppurtunity to support Tom through something since it seems Tom is always helping him out with things. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 07/01/16 02:35 am Title: Disappointment

I feel sorry for Tom, but I believe he will soon find some use for themselves. He is smart and handy. Not as smart as Bill, but enough. I also believe that friendship with Georg will be OK.
Thanks for the chapter.

Author's Response:

I felt really bad for Tom during this chapter but I have a feeling he will fin his bliss somewhere else. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/16 07:22 pm Title: Disappointment

I had to write with a fountain pen since I was 6, till I was 13, it was the only kind of pen we used in school xD Reading some kind of things, even just a word can bring back so many memories xD great chapter :)

Author's Response:

I have a really nice fountain pen that I got when I turned eighteen because I have always been such a prolific writer and I know how to use it but I was never forced to learn in like school or anything. I just like how it looks in my journals. I am glad you liked the chapter and the memories it brought up. Thank you for reading and reviewing. I appreciate the continued support.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/16 08:59 am Title: Disappointment

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the continued support.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/16 01:02 am Title: Disappointment

No no no, this story does not suck! I love it and always check for updates.
This chapter was very realistic with searching for schools & filling out forms, great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you for telling me that. I just have massive insecurities about alot of my writing so I get discouraged easily. It helps that people review and tell me that. I am glad it was very realistic. I remember doing something similar before I graduated from high school. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate the continued suport.

Reviewer: Jazmyne Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/30/16 12:49 am Title: Report Cards

Oh Nooooo....now what for Tom?
Off to catch up.....

Author's Response:

I felt so bad writing this chapter but it was nessecary. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: GermanOoOGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/16 02:04 pm Title: Report Cards

Poor tom :( I hope he'll do it, even georg being better than him.

Author's Response:

I felt so bad for Tom during this chapter. We will have to see what becomes of him. Thanks for takin the time to read and review.

Reviewer: jesseforever69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/28/16 06:49 am Title: Report Cards

this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the continued support.

Reviewer: GeeWay23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/16 10:42 pm Title: Report Cards

I really can't believe that Georg got enough grade for AAS =/
I realy was hoping tat Tom would make it, I'm so sad now ='/ but congrats to Geo!!!
And Tom was thinking so hard about their frienship, what's gonna be of Tom now? - like he wanted it so bad @________@

Author's Response:

I was not really surprised by the AAS grade I mean yes I wrote it which negates some of the surprise factor but it seemed to me like the logical grade he would have worked for in this class. I wanted so badly to write that both of them got it but the real world doesn't always work like that. I hated myself for this chapter. I was very happy for Geo at the same time so I understand how Bill is probably feeling at the moment. We'll have to wait and see what happens with Tom and Geo. Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the continued support.

Reviewer: sylvia1000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/27/16 06:17 pm Title: Report Cards

Awh, I feel sorry for Tom :( But amazing chapter :)

Author's Response:

I felt so bad for Tom while writing this but it was where the story told me it needed to go. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

Reviewer: Nade Signed [Report This]
Date: 06/26/16 10:27 am Title: Finals

Bill was pretty bad last year, it amused me. Such a marauder. But High school is over and a new life begins. Yay! I wonder how they will continue.
Thanks for the chapter.

Author's Response:

Bill was a terrible deviant. I think he would have been this year too if not for Tom. We shall have to wait and see how they do in the adult world. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.

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