Date: 03/07/16 03:40 am Title: Patience
Yeah, I was cringing the whole time I was reading that sex scene... Now I'm going to believe it's really the last time when I had to handle something like that and it will be just Tom and Bill now... :D
Author's Response:
I'm sorry that it was tragic for you. You should believe that this is the last time you have to read something like this because I was cringing writing it. I won't write it again. Cora might make a few more appearances but they will be very brief.
Date: 03/06/16 06:13 pm Title: Patience
Hahah, you're right I did hate the sex scene between Bill and Cora, I just can't stand to read het sex, so I only read small parts of it :$ I'm curious how it's going to destroy them though, I guess that will be the only thing I like about that they had sex :$
Author's Response:
That's alright. I know what my readers like and I'm ok with this. It will be very interesting for the next few chapters I hope you keep reading.
Date: 03/06/16 04:24 pm Title: Patience
You're right. I hated the whole sex scene, but just because it just didn't feel right and not because it wasn't Bill with Tom having sex. I don't have problems with twins having sex with other people in the stories, but this particular scene just make my stomach weak. I don't know if it was your intension to write it this way, but I felt horrible about it. I'm really curious, what Tom is gonna say about the fact, that Bill is no longer a virgin or at least no longer a straight virgin. I hope that from now we are gonna work on Bill-Tom relationship rather than Bill-Cora.
Thanks for the chapter and hopefully see you soon. Have fun at work, while I'm off to bed. One hour and it's midnight for us over here. :)
Author's Response:
It actually was my intention to write it in a way that made it feel awful. I wanted Bill to be aroused like most teenage boys would be but I also wanted to show that while his body was into it his brain wasn't. I also wanted to show that Cora didn't really care to talk to Bill or find out what he was feeling on the whole situation. We will have to wait and see what Tom says about Bill and Cora having sex and what he has to say about what Bill feels in regards to that.
rnThanks for the fun at work and you have a good sleep.
Date: 03/01/16 05:45 pm Title: Cheater, Cheater
I don't really feel well, so I keep it with saying that this was a great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I appreciate you reviewing when you don't feel well. I am glad you enjoyed this chapter. I hope you get to feeling better. Thank you for the review.
Date: 03/01/16 04:40 pm Title: Cheater, Cheater
I know that Tom probably knows what he's gotten himself into, but I honestly feel sad for him. He obviously has feelings for Bill and for Bill he's just a test, because of his struggles. I hope Bill is gonna realize, what he really wants rather sooner than later, because now Tom is just his dirty little secret and I don't like that at all.
Anyway thanks for the chapter!
Can't wait for the next one.
Author's Response:
I feel bad for Tom too. I hope Bill comes to his senses to.
rnI am glad you like it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/01/16 04:00 pm Title: Cheater, Cheater
I don't understand why Bill is with Cora when he admited to himself that he wants Tom...
Author's Response:
People do stupid stuff.
Date: 03/01/16 03:06 am Title: Church
I'm so loving this right now, I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 02/29/16 06:03 pm Title: Church
I honestly don't like HET pairings, I don't even know why, but I see how it's important for this story to show Bill's confussion, but I was glad when Tom turned up in this chapter :D
And about my own experiences when I found out I was bi, I don't think those experience were really similar. I only wanted to be sure that I really liked girls that way before I told people about it, but yeah, my best gay friend saw it already before I knew. And another friend of mine was bi too, so it wasn't hard to talk to them about it. And now I've a bi sexual girl and a lesbian girl in my German class, and everyone is so accepting about it that I don't even label it on myself anymore. It's nice to live where I live, it makes accepting it so much easier :)
Author's Response:
I like het pairings for my sideline characters just because it easier. I always without fail make Andi gay. He is fun to write that way. Georg and Gustav are kind fo a wild card that can go either way. I'm trying to balance Tom with everything else. How else is poor Bill going to get over his confusion if there is no one there to help him.
rnThanks for telling me about your experience and I am glad that you have reached a place where you don't have to have those labels anymore that is awsome. See you soon.
Date: 02/29/16 04:34 pm Title: Church
Stubborn Tom is amazing. Keep going, Tom!
I feel like Cora is going to do something bad... I don't know, I just don't like her. Bill should trust his heart!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like stubborn Tom. We shall have to see about Cora. She is different to write. Bill should definitely listen to his heart.
Date: 02/29/16 02:13 pm Title: Church
I hope Cora is gonna mess up big time as soon as possible. Thumbs up for stubborn Tom and a little kick for Bill's ass for forcing himself into something he's not sure about.
Author's Response:
We'll have to see what happens. I am glad you like stubborn Tom and Bill is stubborn as well. Maybe he'll give into temptation soon.
Date: 02/29/16 02:11 am Title: Party Anyone...
Poor Bill, what a strong inner battle for him. I can't wait to read more. "she smiled at him and Bill wished his heart would contract the same way it did when Tom smiled at him." That speaks volumes no matter how Bill wants to fight it.
Author's Response:
It is a strong battle one that I think many people are familiar. I know I am. I remember my first crush when I was still refusing to admit I was bi and how terrifying it was for me to be attracted to a female when I had a boyfriend. It is one of those things, I knew I was bi but resolutely refused to admit it even to myself. I am glad people seem to find this realistic means I'm not the only one who fought so hard. Thanks for the review. Chapter three is nearly finished so it should be posted soon.
Date: 02/28/16 07:49 pm Title: Cora?
I really enjoyed this first chapter! I really wish Bill wasn't such a jerk to Tom though :( Maybe it's just his confusion causing him to be that way but still he should be nicer to him lol
I am looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
Bill is a big jerk but it could be his confusion causing him to lash out. He should be nicer. I am glad you enjoyed it, keep writing.
Date: 02/28/16 05:40 pm Title: Party Anyone...
I honestly think that Cora saying she's changed is an act to try and get a virgin like Bill in bed, but I can be wrong of course. I loved the kiss between Tom and Bill, even though it's confusing Bill more. I understand that it's hard to admit it to yourself when you're attracted to the same sex, but it's still better to admit it to yourself, I guess. And Bill did say that he doesn't want to betray Cora and so, but he actually is betraying her by not being honest with himself. Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
It could be an act but you'll have to wait and see. I loved writing that kiss too. It was very hard for me to accept that I was bi and I come from an accepting family. It was better for me when I admited it to myself. I found someone I love who loves me for me. I wanted to show that even with everyhting Bill believes in being faithful to someone. I am glad you liked it.
Date: 02/28/16 03:40 am Title: Party Anyone...
Ahhh, damn phone when it distract them!!! I hope that Tom won't stop trying because I believe, that Bill won't be able to resist for too long :)
Author's Response:
I know it is so horrible but there it is. When has Tom ever given up on something easily. Still he is decent trying not to confuse poor Billy. Thanks for the review. See you soon.
Date: 02/24/16 06:02 pm Title: Cora?
I like it :) I wish I would be able to write a Longer comment, but I have to get up early in the morning :( But I promise you that I will give you a longer review on the next chapter :)
Author's Response:
It's not the length it is the content. I was in a very grumpy mood when I wrote that little mini rant. I appreciate all readers even those that don't review. I am glad you liked the chapter and I appreciate you taking the time to comment when you have to get up early in the morning. Thank you very much.
Date: 02/24/16 05:31 pm Title: Cora?
Great story! I like confused Bill :)
Author's Response:
He is definitely fun to write. Thank you for the review.
Date: 02/24/16 12:14 pm Title: Cora?
I really look forward to this story ^^
Author's Response:
Thanks I am not sure when the next chapter will be up but I will try to make it soon. Thank you very much for reviewing.