Date: 04/01/16 06:05 pm Title: The Night Before
So new reader here. Hey!
Definitely loving the story so far. I like how there are mini story dynamics within a bigger plot but you can still tell what the main situation is. Idk if that made sense. Anyways I can't wait to read what else you come up with for this!
Author's Response:
I am very glad you like this story and are a new reader. I really hope you will stick with this story to it's end. I understand what you mean about the little plots inside the bigger one. This story definitely means alot to me and I am having a ball writing it. It makes me laugh, cry and smile same as I hope it does to my readers. Thank you for taking the time to read my story and review. I hope you enjoy the new chapter.
Date: 03/30/16 12:59 am Title: The Night Before
Great chapter, thanks! I really questioned if Bill would go all the way or not. Enjoyed the sexy business between them. Looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I wanted it to kind of be in doubt until the very end just to see where it would go. I am glad it worked. Thank you for the review.
Date: 03/28/16 05:30 pm Title: The Night Before
I loved the flashbacks of Bill's and Tom's sexy time in between their sexy time of that moment, I know it wasn't sex yet, but sexy time was enough for now :) and poor Andreas, it's always hard when someone you love, someone you're in love with breaks up with you :( great chapter :)
Author's Response:
This was a fun chapter to write. I wanted to show that even through everything Bill is still nervous about his first time. I felt so bad for Andreas. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/28/16 12:44 am Title: Homecoming
Aww, so happy Tom surprised Bill by showing up! Great chapter, thanks.
Can't wait to see how their 'talk' goes.
Author's Response:
That was a fun scene to write. I am very glad you liked it. Thank you for the review and the rest of their talk should be up later today.
Date: 03/27/16 02:24 am Title: Fight
Cora is like a disease.
Not sure what I think about Tom right now other than selfish.
Can't wait for next chapter!
Author's Response:
Cora is persitent I will give her that. Tom is being incredibly selfish. I posted the next chapter and I hope you enjoy it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/26/16 09:41 pm Title: Homecoming
“I do know the difference between a salad fork and an entrée fork I just don’t care,” I feel the same way as Tom xD lol
Aww they made up, so cute. Thank you for updating.
Author's Response:
I had a boyfriend teach me a while back and I still know the difference I just never use it anymore. So I get how Tom feels here too believe you me. I am glad you liked it and thank you for reviewing. Reviews really make my day.
Date: 03/26/16 07:09 pm Title: Homecoming
Awh, I'm so glad Tom showed up, and that they danced. And I'm very happy that they made up :) I'm also happy that you didn't go through with that other plan xD Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. I always liked the idea of Tom just showing up and sweeping Bill off his feet. I don't know I'm kind of a romantic that way I guess. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/26/16 07:27 am Title: Fight
why i havent started reading this before i have no idea but now im hooked and cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it and have started reading. Thanks for the review and I will get the next chapter up soon.
Date: 03/25/16 10:17 pm Title: Fight
This story is growing on me. I think that the fight was kinda of cute, teens love. I wanna know how Tom is going to react when he finds out Bill is going with Cora to homecoming
Author's Response:
I am glad the story is growing on you. The fight was different and I had a hard time writing it. Tom's reaction will definitely be a defining point in their relationship. Thanks for the review I really appreciate it.
Date: 03/25/16 07:44 pm Title: Fight
Really Tom? I'm sorry but all this storm because of a dance???
Well, at least I didn't read here Bill asking him to change or stuff like that... X.X
These two are confusing sometimes...
Author's Response:
I have noticed that people who doubt their relationship or their place in it tend to overreact to the smallest thing. It is more a reflection of their self doubt than the other person's actual attutides or actions. I didn't see it as Tom wanting to change him or anything like that either. Teenagers are confusing.
Date: 03/25/16 07:20 pm Title: Fight
Oh no, I don't want Bill to go to homecoming with Cora, even as just friends :( Tom, Bill, please make it up now. Great chapter
Author's Response:
I don't either but we always do stupid stuff especially when we're angry at someone we care about. I want them to make up too. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/25/16 06:30 pm Title: Fight
I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I am glad you like it. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/25/16 02:38 am Title: Cora?
Wow, I really didn't know it was that bad in the US :( It's so sad. I wish they would see the light there too like the Dutch people did. I guess it's also helping that the children here gets teached about it. It makes the future generations more and more accepting. When I was walking hand in hand with my girlfriend no one looked weird at us and when my best friend came out as gay in high school, he got even more populair. I really hope the future of the US will be like this too, or even better, the future of the whole world, how beautiful would that be.
Author's Response:
Yeah I worry about any kids I have in the future because I don;t want them exposed to this kind of ahte. If our schools embraced homesexuality and taught children about ti I think the states would be a lot more accepting. I pray for the future of this world to be a calm and accepting one. It would be very beautiful.
Date: 03/24/16 06:55 pm Title: Questions
Is it really that bad with people bullying other people because they're gay? Here in the Netherlands I don't really see that anymore, the only people I see doing it are people who moved here from other countries, and most of the time don't know our language yet, but when they bully someone because of their sexuality, they will end up being the one left out, maybe it's a little harsh, but it seems to be the right way to make them realize that we accept people who are gay here, and that if they want to live here they should accept it to, or if they don't that they just should keep their mouths shut. I'm sure Tom will say yes to Bill's question :) Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
In the states it is really bad. Teenagers especially the jocks are likely to tear into anyone they don't like. Boys who are slight or femmenite in anyway are usually called gay even if they don't like boys. Any girl who won't sleep with them or their friends is a slut or a lesbian. One girl who came out when we were seniors was raped by two boys on the football team to 'make her straight.' The religous groups of adults boycott the pride days we have and are really cruel about it. Bashing is very prevelant especially in the bigger cities. Being gay in the states means facing alot of hate.
rnI am glad it is different in the Netherlands that gives me hope for the future. It is a harsh way of doing things by leaving people out but that is the only way to deal with ignorance and hate. I think Tom will say yes too. I am glad you liked the chapter and took the time to review. I'll see how fast I can write up the next chapter and get it posted.
Date: 03/14/16 06:36 pm Title: Pull Away
That was so romantic, with the rose but that stupid bully ruined that moment :$ Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I wrote fron an experience that I had at school when I was just figuring out who I was and everything else. Kids can definitely be mean.
Date: 03/14/16 04:14 am Title: Pull Away
Hearing that awful statement I'm surprised Bill didn't run away from the scene. Sadly that's what people deal with on a daily basis. Tom is amazing, just love his character.
So looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
I wanted to show what really goes on in high schools these days. It can't all be flowers and stuff. I love Tom he is so wonderful. I will post a new chapter soon. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/12/16 05:46 pm Title: Jelly Bracelets
Hahah, I love the fact that Tom caught Bill doing sexy stuff with himself xD great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. It was interesting to write. Intially Tom wasn't supposed to catch him but it just kind of worked. Thanks for the review.
Date: 03/10/16 08:51 am Title: Mono
I've just got caught up on all the chapters and I have to say I knew Cora was using Bill in some way. I never ever liked her at all and knew her intentions were not good. I wish Bill could have found that out before he lost his virginity to her. I'm glad he found out now though and I'm glad he did tell her about Tom. Sucks that he's sick. It's sweet how Tom is taking care of him :)
I would love to see this story continue for a bit longer. It is wonderful!
Author's Response:
I am glad that you got caught up on all the chapters. I tried to write Cora so you could see in many ways she was genuine but she was also a creature of habit. I have kind fo a love/hate relationship with her. Bill made choices and so did she. Maybe he'll make better ones in the future. I thought the best way for these two to get over the past was to have complete honesty between the two of them from now on. Bill just suddenly got sick as I was writing it I was so worried for him. I thought it might be mono but even I was unsure about what the doctor was going to say. Mono sucks, the only thing that got me through it was my mom taking care of me. I will be adding more chapters. Thank you for taking the time to review and read the story. See you soon.
Date: 03/09/16 08:34 pm Title: Mono
Really good story. I would like to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I will be writing more chapters than.
Date: 03/09/16 06:34 pm Title: Mono
Even though Cora did react nice, I think that it was mean of her to take Bill's first time, I mean, he deserverd a more special first time than that, but I'm sure that at least his first time with a guy will be special :) but for now poor Bill is sick :( The last time I was that sick is years ago, I mean, there are times on which I don't feel well, but only a few times in my life it actually included a fever, I still think the word fever is weird in Dutch, I mean we call it koorts, it just sounds too weird, hahah, fever sounds much better xD and I would like it when you make more chapters of this story ;) Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I did the best I could with a bad situation. I wanted her to be a tiny bit redeemable. He did deserve a more special first time than that but sex doesn't seem all that important Cora. She treats it very lightly. Bill being sick was just another means to an end. It just kind of came up when I was writing. Oh by the way I have mono. I hate it when my characters do this to me. I got swine flu a few years back and I've had mono twice. They both suck. The dutch word for fever is odd but kind of cool to me an american. I will add more chapters. Thanks for the feedback and the lovely review. See you soon.