Date: 06/26/16 08:57 am Title: Paint
Bill finally noticed that Andy is not right. It's a shame that they can not do anything. But the threat might be enough to Andy could be the calm before the end of the school year.
Thank you for the chapter.
Author's Response:
I wanted to show that Bill really will do anything for Andreas. I also wanted to show that Tom has also become quiet fond of Andreas. I hope Andreas will start feeling better. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the continued support.
Date: 06/26/16 08:40 am Title: Finals
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. Next chapter should be up in a little while.
Date: 06/25/16 07:03 pm Title: Finals
Great chapter :) I honestly wish that we had a prom here in The Netherlands too, or, I don't know, probably nobody would've asked me, so maybe it's better that we don't have it xD
Author's Response:
I thoroughly enjoyed my senior year even as I was going through my own coming out and I wanted to show that even through everything Bill was happy to be finishing up school and a little sad too. Prom is like the last hurrah as a kid before you have to be all responsible and adult. If I could go back to high school even with all the bullies and bull shit I would in a heartbeat. I think someone probably would've asked you. I didn't go with my crush I went with a group of friends and had alot of fun. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/25/16 02:57 pm Title: Finals
Aaah, sorry. I'm german, not an english native speaker. I meant this part: “Love you,” Bill repeated and kissed Tom again. He hugged Tom after that and hoped he meant it. He also hoped for the best for Tom even as he knew it would be bad for Georg and Nathalie. How could he choose a side when each side had something at stake?
Obviously I missunderstood it a little. I thought Bill isn't sure if his own words (I love you) are true, not just for his own sake, but toms too :D
Author's Response:
I meant that Bill was hoping Tom meant the never letting go part. It is a bit of creative foreshadowing on my part but I am not going to give away a major plot point before it happens so I hope you will stick around for it. Writing about two boys poses some problems with personal pronouns and I usually try to clean it up. I appreciate you pointing this out to me. I definitely understand the issues going between lanaguages. Whenever I try to add German to my stories or read an english translation of a german phrase put in the story the grammar and spelling is sometimes off. Thanks for clarifying. I hope you continue to read and enjoy the story.
Date: 06/23/16 05:49 pm Title: Study
Great chapter again :) I hope they'll make their exam well :)
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/23/16 02:53 pm Title: Study
The finals :O I remember when I sat in the classroom with all the sheets ... what a time :O I kind of miss the time short before finishing school. 10 Years ago :O
I'm a bit afraid ... seems like bill is not alway sure about his feelings for tom :(
Author's Response:
Finals were the worst part of school when I was in school but the best part once I finished. I am not sure what you mean about Bill doubting his feelings for Tom but I will look over the chapter again see if I find it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate the support.
Date: 06/23/16 10:26 am Title: Study
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. I appreciate the continued support.
Date: 06/22/16 11:22 pm Title: Study
Graduation is getting so close. This was a pretty mellow chapter compared to previous. It's kind of nice having a change of pace for a minute. Especially with all the trial drama and me being worried about Andreas and the mr. chase situation. Which by the way I really hope that bastard gets what he deserves! Not to mention can't he at least lose his job for sleeping with a student!?! We could start there and work our way up to jail time!
Anyways good luck with the moving! I know how crazy that can be since we just moved 3 weeks ago. Nice thing about being pregnant while moving is that I didn't have to do any heavy lifting lol. Mostly just driving and holding doors open
Author's Response:
Graduation is close. I have a seperate document where I keep track of dates and stuff and when I noticed graduation right after exams I was like "ahhh." I needed a change of pace for this chapter so I wrote it the way I was feeling. Mr. Chase and Andreas still remain a mystery to me but I hope they will reveal what is going to happen soon. I do hope he gets what he deserves in terms of termination and maybe jail time.
rnThank you for the well wishing with moving. I wish I had a way to get out of all the packing and heavy but as I am neither pregnant, on my period or sick I have to help out. It sucks but is good at the same time. Glad to hear you and the little one are doing well. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/19/16 09:52 am Title: Paint
nice chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate the continous support.
Date: 06/18/16 06:13 pm Title: Paint
Amazing chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review. I really appreciate the continous support.
Date: 06/18/16 12:56 am Title: Paint
I love this fic still reading ;) and always waiting for more updates
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I added an edit to the beginning chapter notes. I hope you will go read them because I feel very strongly about what I said. I hope you will continue to look forward to the updates. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/15/16 06:07 pm Title: Plead Out
Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/15/16 02:36 pm Title: Plead Out
Trial passed very well, especially for Bill. They are terribly offended, so they must pay. There is time for a new beginning.
Thank you for the chapter and look forward to more.
Author's Response:
I was feeling unmotivated to write the trial and it was bringing down the tone of the whole story. I decided to make it shorter and write around it a little bit. I am glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/12/16 07:29 am Title: Distance
Oh, Monica did well that kicked out the old witch. It was a devilish bitch.
When everyone involved in the preparation of a children's room, it was a nice moment for a long time. Even Andreas was hilarious.
But now that the worst is over, they should notice that something is wrong with Andreas -with his friend, exactly.
Thank you for the nice chapter.
Author's Response:
I really enjoyed writing Monica standing up for herself against the family that never really accepted her in the first place. I loved the baby room scene it was a lot of fun and the barbie girl moment with Andreas was like classical. It's the kind of stuff I have been neglecting for far too long. Andreas will have his moment in the future. I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/11/16 04:28 am Title: Distance
this was a good chapter!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/10/16 08:14 pm Title: Distance
This was great as always.
I can really see where Jorg got his attitude from because his mother was horrible. Glad Monica put her in her place.
It's pretty nice to see how civil Adam and Monica are being together considering how she found out about him.
I'm kind of not surprised Bill doesn't want to move back in with his mom. Like he said, he's a changed person since living with Tom. So I'm sure it's still even wierd just being in the old house let a lone living there...
Side note:
I hope you boyfriend and your dad are alright! I get really anxious and nervous when people say they're in the hospital or have to go to a hospital! But I hope all is well!
Author's Response:
I am very glad you liked it. I liked writing this chapter because it does definitely show where Jorg comes from and Monica getting sick of all the abuse to her family over the years. I wanted to show that Monica habor no anmosity towards Adam and he respects that Jorg was first and foremost her husband and the father of her children. If I had made it so Bill moved bac in with his mom it wouldn't have felt right. It's like once the question is asked the answer could never be anything else. When I went back home to visit after moving out for school it was definitely strange, it wouldn't have felt right moving back in.
rnBoyfriend is fine, his toe should be all better today. My dad will be out and about in a few days and on the mend. Thanks for the well wishes. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/10/16 06:16 pm Title: Distance
Great chapter again :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/07/16 01:02 pm Title: Trials
this is a really good story!
i cant wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thanks for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/06/16 02:17 am Title: Trials
I cannot get enough of this story, LOVE it!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Date: 06/05/16 04:31 pm Title: Trials
Well this was a lot I had to read the last chapter and this one at once.
Tom's plan was beautiful and I just cannot get enough of that.
Of course the hearing had to be brought up right after but I knew it was coming soon. I feel bad about Jorg only because he's dead and because Bill seemed more bothered than he was expecting but I guess you really can't know how you'll feel about something until it actually happens.
As for the attackers, I really hope none of them try anything stupid. I just cannot see that going well for anyone involved especially with a case going on.
Simone always finds the best ways into Bill and Tom's private life together, it's hilarious. And Tom should probably learn to clean up better lol...
Either way it was a great chapter and I can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked Tom's plan. I had a lot of fun writing that. Life is usually a combination of good and bad so I felt the need to add a little drama. Jorg being dead is definitely a thing that I saw coming a few chapters again but was still something I did not see happening in the beginning. I wanted Bill to at least be a little upset about his dad dying. The case starting could be the trigger that some of these people need to go after Bill. Even though it would hurt their case it happens. I love Simone she is a lot of fun to write. Tom really should clean up better you are right. I am glad you liked the last two chapters. Thank you for your in depth comment and also for taking the time to read and review.