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Reviewer: MidnightsRose Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/20/12 09:12 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

rabies really lol

Reviewer: Nynne3400 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02/13/11 05:44 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

write more!!! much more!!!!!

Reviewer: larabiagoti Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/27/09 10:52 am Title: Chapter Seven;; In your arms I am safe.

AMAIZING SIMPLY AMAIZING !!! KEEP ON

Reviewer: Jea Signed [Report This]
Date: 05/12/09 01:14 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

I just read the whole story, which should tell you that it's pretty darn good ;) But I'm sure you know that already.

Normally the whole "main character's true love helps nurse her back to health" plot is rather mary-sue-ish, but this story is very good and it works well. And the scene with Lee and Bill in the last chapter was just so sweet and sooo cute! I love this story and I hope you post more soon!

Reviewer: SampledScream Signed [Report This]
Date: 04/19/09 10:56 am Title: Chapter Six;; On the edge

i think youre a really good writer beczuse the last two chapters made me cry my eyes out!
how could they leave her?
i know what it feels like, and i think this is the first time someones wrote somethng i can relate to about my only friends leaving me and our sandwich hugs :(

i think you should write a story or a novel lol, youd be a brilliant writer - you can pass of the sad bit really well and make peolee cry..

dude, you have a gift.

Reviewer: TokioHotel1018 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/23/08 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

wow!
more

Reviewer: paintedponylover Signed [Report This]
Date: 12/03/08 06:52 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

Ha I LOVe the story!!! :)

PLEASE< PLEASE < PLEASE Write more soon!!!

Reviewer: paintedponylover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/25/08 11:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

I give this story 5 starz def! I love this story sooo much its my fav :) Keep on writing

Reviewer: paintedponylover Signed [Report This]
Date: 11/02/08 07:51 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

AHH! I love it, really good story line :) Can't wait to read next chapter !!!!

Reviewer: ambirdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/20/08 01:04 am Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

I can't believe tom woke up to that!! hahahahahaha!!!
i love this story!! more soon!! :)

Reviewer: maliciousintent69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/17/08 07:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

nooo you've gotta continue the story people love it. oooh they did IT. can't believe they forgot tom was there lol. please update your story soon.

Reviewer: Kiri Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/14/08 12:09 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

Love the last paragraph and a bit - Tom crackes me up. You have a real flair for writing so it'd be a shame for you to give up now - not to mention a big disappointment for those who read this!

Reviewer: iWrite Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/09/08 08:28 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

Haha. Loved it! It's really awesome. :)

Reviewer: Shadow19900812 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/05/08 06:58 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

This is a great story!! Keep updating!! I love it!!

Reviewer: JessyRAWR Signed [Report This]
Date: 09/03/08 09:21 pm Title: Chapter Twenty-Three;; Embarrassment and Toilet Offices.

Lol, Rabies.

Reviewer: mmmkaykay Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/26/08 10:22 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Two;; Hotels and Passion.

GAHHHH! this story will end me! xD i love it, please make tons more chapters!

Reviewer: billismiiiine Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/25/08 02:42 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two;; Hotels and Passion.

I woke my mom up I was laughing so hard lmao
This story rocks my socks : )

Reviewer: sakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 04:03 pm Title: Chapter Twenty Two;; Hotels and Passion.

woooow sexy sexy
lol not when your bro catches you tho shame

i lvoed this so glad you updateed

cant wai till you upate next i will so read faster next time*shameful*

ly
xxxxxxx

Reviewer: sakaulitz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 03:54 pm Title: Chapter Twenty One;; Concerts and Anger Management.

very good im bad i forgot to review slap me plz it helps me feel no so shitty

ly off to read next chapter

xxx

Reviewer: DJ_Music_Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08/24/08 03:38 am Title: Chapter Twenty Two;; Hotels and Passion.

LOL! This was hysterical! I loved it! xDDDDD LMFAO!

Author's Response: Glad you found it funny. :3 It's actually something that happened to my best friend. Except no twins involved, just me and my two best friends who got involved. Traumitising!

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