Date: 08/02/16 01:24 am Title: No Relation
O___O
Omg, so did not see that coming!
Author's Response: :D
Date: 07/28/16 03:31 am Title: It was Premeditated
Oh
My
God
Author's Response: :D I hope that's a good oh my god !
Date: 07/04/16 07:34 am Title: Does Everyone Know?
Already loving the story!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 07/02/16 01:27 am Title: Please Pick Up
Thank you thank you thank you for updating! I love this story, LOVE the twists!
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for reviewing and loving it! [:
Date: 04/26/16 02:05 pm Title: Slipping
Noooooooooo Bill nooo!!! I don't want him to screw up his life. Although, I kinda like the slutty and slightly badass Bill, and in my fic he's almost like that as well... I do hope that Tom comes to his senses and brings Bill home. All of this must've put his mind in some other perspective, right? I hope so :(
Author's Response: I always write Bill as that sweet, innocent guy, so I figured 'hey, why not change it up for once!" and I too am slightly liking it, it makes him edgier (is that a word? lol) Tom is...well we'll just have to see I guess!
Date: 04/24/16 01:24 am Title: Slipping
Oh no no no... not good st all :/
Author's Response: D:
Date: 04/22/16 06:38 pm Title: The Orange Jumpsuit
Oh exciting!! A secret witness... Who could it be?? More please
Author's Response: I'm updating tonight! [:
Date: 04/12/16 02:15 am Title: The Orange Jumpsuit
Maybe her mom?! Can't wait to find out!
Author's Response: Maybe! [:
Date: 04/10/16 05:33 am Title: The Orange Jumpsuit
I hope I'm not a retard and remember things wrong now but could it be her mom? Idk
Author's Response: It could be!
Date: 04/04/16 05:02 pm Title: I Failed Her
:o finally tom sees his faults with jade... Now if only he could see them with bill too.... And speaking of bill.. My my he's a bit cheeky hihi
Love the story! Keep up the goodwork :D
Author's Response: He gets "cheekier "! ( I don't know if thats a word lol) thank you!! (:
Date: 04/04/16 01:16 am Title: I Failed Her
God,poor Jade. A lot of rage she had pent up finally exploded.
NOW Tom sees how selfish be was....look what it took. I hope this will be a turning point for him with her as well as how he treats Bill from here on.
Great chapter, thank you!
Author's Response: Its about time he saw it right? And you're welcome! Thank you for always reviewing! (:
Date: 04/04/16 01:09 am Title: Jade's Father
Not sure what happened but I'd left a 're view last time you updated but didn't see it, so here goes...
Ok, surely this has to be a case for self defense. Seems she has some witnesses. I'm curious to know how Tom will react toward Bill because he was there when it happened. I bet he's thinking Bill should've done something.
Now I have to catch up.
Author's Response: I didn't see it either! How weird!
Date: 04/02/16 05:21 pm Title: Jade's Father
:o!!! Ohmygosh what a story! Poor Jade and poor Bill! Tom is such a dick! Please continue!! The suspence is kiling me
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll be updating soon!
Date: 03/27/16 06:29 pm Title: Jade's Father
The police must realize it was self defense?! If it was... I would classify it as that. It's not like she walked up to him and stabbed him. He did some pretty nasty shit, just look at her. Ugh :(
Author's Response: Exactly !
Date: 03/25/16 10:43 pm Title: '911 What's Your Emergency?"
OMG. OMG. SUCH a cliffhanger! I think she killed him oh my God. Can't wait for the update!
Author's Response: [:
Date: 03/25/16 10:43 pm Title: I'm Officer Rolan
How ironic that they let them illegally drink. And I love Jade as each chapter progresses!
Author's Response: Right? And me too!
Date: 03/22/16 03:38 pm Title: '911 What's Your Emergency?"
First of all: I'm so glad to see another Bill/OMC fic here and it makes it super interesting that it's got so many twists. Tom and Bill not being all lovey dovey, their parents being super conservative, and Jade. I LOVE JADE! And this chapter is scary, I don't want her to get in trouble.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like it! I like to have twists in stories, it makes it more interesting and I feel like it keeps the readers hooked! Plus, there are so many stories that are similar to each other (not saying the authors are bad writers) but there's always room for a change up! [:
Date: 03/21/16 02:30 am Title: '911 What's Your Emergency?"
Omg! Poor Jade having to go through that but hopefully her dad is dead or going to prison if not. And Bill watching all of that, he might need therapy. Tom's mom was going to investigate her family, well she's about to find out what is|has been going on. Wonder if this will open Tom's eyes about anything? Wonder if he'll really be hard on Bill because he didn't try to help Jade by trying to stop her dad? Sorry it's a longer review but you have my mind in overdrive! Thanks for the update!
Author's Response: No need to apologize I'm glad you left a long review! Things definitely get interesting! Thank you for reviewing!(:
Date: 03/18/16 01:47 am Title: I'm Officer Rolan
=To me surviving is so much more important than going to some dumb dance and walking for a piece of paper=
Tom better catch on to that!
Thank you so much for the regular updates, so appreciated.
Author's Response: You're welcome! Thank you for continuously reviewing and reading! I appreciate it so much! (:
Date: 03/17/16 07:53 am Title: I'm Officer Rolan
Oh no Bill what are you doing?! :( Its more interesting every time. Thanks for update fast :) Good job ;)
Author's Response: You're welcome! And thank you! I'm trying to keep it as interesting as possible ! (: