Date: 05/08/20 07:36 am Title: 23
Oh you already know how much I love this, but I'm going to tell you again, 'kay? I LOVE THIS SO FREAKING MUCH! Like, I look forward to you updating this so much, and I'm always SO excited when I see you have. Also, I am so darn excited to have been able to talk through the ending with you and again, I can't tell you how excited I am to see how you get there, and how you write it. I know it's going to be amazing, you talented human, you! SO MUCH LOVE for you and this story!
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU!
Date: 05/07/20 09:43 pm Title: 22
Last night at 3am I wrote waist instead of waste lol, it's your fault I was up so late reading heh
Author's Response: I noticed, but blah, who cares?? ? Thank you so much and I take full responsibility for blame. Love you < 3
Date: 05/07/20 09:38 pm Title: 22
Tom is killing me here. It is a love hate relationship I'm having with your character
Author's Response: He's killing me, too. I can assure you! But that's the fun part. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/07/20 02:51 am Title: 20
Your writing is never a waist
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I hope you enjoy the rest of the story < 3
Date: 05/07/20 02:34 am Title: 19
Oh, no, more Grandma Jo!! Loving this
Author's Response: (!!!) THANK YOU < 3
Date: 05/07/20 02:02 am Title: 16
Perfection. I missed you
Author's Response: I've missed you, too! Thank you < 3
Date: 05/06/20 07:23 pm Title: 22
I finally caught up. I've read a few of the new chapters earlier, but mostly when I was in bed and as the shit I am, I forgot to review. I'm wide awake and I'm here now.
I can almost taste Bill's anxiety, it's a little scary. The boy has gotten himself into more than he can handle, but I feel so sorry for him. I hope things work out and that Tom won't chastise him too hard.
I have no idea what to expect for the next chapter, but I'm excited. This story is really, really good! < 3
Author's Response: Thank you so much for dropping by to leave a review, I really appreciate it. I'm so glad you're able to feel Bill's emotions and also feel for him as a character, it means I'm doing something right. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/06/20 05:15 pm Title: 22
Poor Bill. He clearly was not ready to have sex with Tom. I wish Tom was more thoughtful to postpone it:
Now it’s Tom’s time both to feel guilty and chase Bill.
Great chapter! Cannot wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I don't think it's really Tom's fault, as to speak. I think Bill thought he may have been ready and felt ready in that moment, but wasn't particularly ready for the aftermath and how his feelings took over. But you're completely right, Tom's gotta pull something out of the bag to bring Bill back around. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/06/20 11:59 am Title: 22
You have seriously made me get excited again with a story, I am living my teenage years again, when my favorite authors updated and I danced and got so excited, now I do the same and Im 27 years hahaha. Like old times!
Each chapter is better than the other! You outdo yourself !!
It was time for guilt to show up, poor Bill…. he is in a very difficult situation right now. I like that Nat showed up, I think she's a great friend and could help Bill with this situation, she certainly knows Tom isn't clean wheat.
So excited for the next episode !! Can’t wait for Friday, I know it will be very special and it’s my birthday too, it will be a great birthday gift. 😊
See you Friday! Love this as always!
Author's Response: HAPPY BIRTHDAY, MY LOVELY!!!! Your reviews are just the sweetest, I'm grinning like a Cheshire cat right now, no joke! That's some serious praise, I outdo myself?? Wow. You're making ME get butterflies. Thank you! I have to agree, I adore writing Nat and her character in this. She keeps Bill grounded and brings so much normality to his chaotic life, but she is so set in her ways, too, which I love. I hope I can bring her into more scenes in the coming chapters. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/06/20 09:10 am Title: 22
mom dumps Tom?????
Author's Response: I can't reveal TOO much, but mom's going to play an instrumental part in the upcoming chapters. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/06/20 03:22 am Title: 22
Well, avoid Tom for two weeks is definitely reacting well to what happened... I think he was totally not ready for this.
Tom for is part seems not to try so hard to understand what’s going on for Bill? Don’t know...
Also, Bill’s mother going to the aunt is no good. If I am not wrong she got B&T being sneaky... ahhh
Love this as always
Author's Response: I agree with you wholeheartedly. Bill thought he was ready, he really wanted to impress Tom and it kinda backfired. He hadn't anticipated the aftermath of what happened affecting him quite like this. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/06/20 03:16 am Title: 21
This first time felt to real. How many times have we read about an amazing first... but not all of them are like this. Bill’s one of them definitely, he allowed himself to be taken by tom without second thoughts. Was it how I think he always dreamt of? Definitely not, maybe he was not ready or maybe he was. The fact that makes me laugh is that Tom apparently did not even try to pleasure him.. and that’s (sadly?) what I expected from a guy like him!
I just have the impression that from now on Bill will feel a bit rubbish. Poor baby :(
Author's Response: Hi lovely
That's exactly what I didn't want, a perfect first time. My first time was pretty much like Bill's, it was happening before I even realised it was happening and it was over just as I was starting to actually enjoy it. Not bad, but not great either, except I didn't have the pain Bill obviously would've had to feel. I do think some men believe they're Gods gift during sex, 'they don't need additional stimulation, my cock is more than enough' and 8/10 times that ain't the case. Tom doesn't really know Bill's body at this stage, so he may have just assumed wrong? I do like to think that part of the reason he didn't pleasure Bill properly was because he simply didn't think to do it in that moment, especially when he's been waiting and wanting it for that long. He just kinda got caught up in it and it was over before he could even think about Bill before himself. Selfish Tom!
Thank you so much for this review, I adore how much thought you've put into it < 3
Date: 05/06/20 01:06 am Title: 22
Poor Bill. Yeah. He really doesn’t was ready for that. But 🤷🏼r05;a92;a039; What done is done. Lo hecho, hecho está... o algo así ;) Omg. Im so emocionada for the next chapter if you say its your favorite Its gonna be great!!!! :)
Dont worry with presion for write fast. Is what we want ^.^ but children and family go first. :)
Author's Response: I DON'T EVEN KNOW WHY IT'S MY FAVOURITE, I JUST FEEL THE ENTIRE STORY SHIFTS WITH IT, IF THAT MAKES SENSE? IT'S A TURNING POINT AND SO INSTRUMENTAL. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3 and thank you for your patience as well, I'll get there!
Date: 05/05/20 06:05 pm Title: 22
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/05/20 02:49 pm Title: 22
Good chapter
Author's Response: Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/05/20 01:58 pm Title: 22
this was a really good chapter!
I can not wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/05/20 12:39 pm Title: 22
I love the reality of this story??? I mean, it's not super sprinkled with happiness and topped with a cherry on top, if anything this is realistic fiction- the way Bill feels guilty when Tom took his virginity, feeling guilty for his mother- avoiding Tom- instead of Bill falling head over heels while Tom and him skip happily along a field of flowers, this is very realistic to how Bill feels about this situation and I LOVE what you are doing with this story.
Author's Response: Oh this definitely isn't sprinkled with happiness and topped with a cherry. I'm so glad you're liking the realistic edge to this story, I know it can be angsty at parts and sometimes a little dull, but I do feel that's imperative. Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/05/20 12:24 pm Title: 22
Gah I love this. Poor Bill, I can really feel how conflicted he is by everything. Very interested to see how it goes when Tom finally gets to speak to Bill.
Author's Response: Next chapter is up, thank you < 3
Date: 05/05/20 08:53 am Title: 22
Ughhhhhhh I LOVE this story! Like, I can't even tell you. I don't even know what to write in reviews because I'm just so excited and at the end of every chapter I'm wondering what's gonna happen next. I just... love it. So thank you. Also, this chapter seemed important. There was a lot of information in it that is important to the story so... More pleaaaase!
Author's Response: I LOVE YOU THANK YOU SO SO MUCH! Next chapter is up < 3