Date: 06/21/24 06:29 am Title: 01
Can you please update this story?
Date: 10/29/23 10:48 pm Title: 25
I think you wrote the smut very fine ;) but I would’ve like more of Tom worshipping Bills body fully like you haven’t even written about him tending to Bills D I think ^^ also more details about what they feel when they’re kissing and such, but you write very good and great detailed sexy scenes otherwise ;) more of that and update soon pls
Date: 10/29/23 10:48 pm Title: 25
I think you wrote the smut very fine ;) but I would’ve like more of Tom worshipping Bills body fully like you haven’t even written about him tending to Bills D I think ^^ also more details about what they feel when they’re kissing and such, but you write very good and great detailed sexy scenes otherwise ;) more of that and update soon pls
Date: 08/27/23 11:26 pm Title: 01
I knew this wasn’t finished but I still just had to read anyways after reading the description… and HOLY SHIT! I LOVE this! Everything about it drew me in I was biting my nails the whole time. I’m so sad there probably won’t be any more to this, but I know life happens and I hope you’re doing well author
Date: 01/11/23 04:38 am Title: 01
Please finish this story!
Date: 04/20/21 08:07 am Title: 01
please please update this story!!
Date: 11/14/20 08:27 pm Title: 25
please update this story!
Date: 10/12/20 08:26 am Title: 23
OK, so I have a few things to share:
I'm torn between if Tom is actually a good guy, or if he's just that good at lying and manipulating.
I felt rage when they were cutting out Bill from his friends. And the fact that Tom was behind the decision: is he behind it because he actually wants Bill isolated from everyone so he can manipulate him more, or because he actually knows Ani from before …
Which brings me to my next point: is he actually a plumber? Or is that another lie and he's more in the line of work like Ani, and that's why they know each other?
Sorry, but I grew up in a Novela focus country, so I'm always guessing plots... For everything, books, movies, series and so on. Haha
Date: 10/11/20 06:09 pm Title: 12
I have a question that I've had for a while: did Tom approached Bill's mum, because he KNEW about Bill and used her to get to him; or it was just a coincidence?
Date: 09/20/20 03:27 pm Title: 25
this was a really good chapther!!
I can not wait for the next chapther!
Date: 06/04/20 07:29 am Title: 25
Hot scenes are not my thing .... I generally skip over to keep my state of mind ... ups ..... I hope your new pc is fine and you can continue writing and having enough time to do it, thanks !!!
Date: 06/04/20 12:26 am Title: 25
Me quedé como Bill. Wow. Jajajaj So good having this great chapter. I wonder how much emotional hurt Is gonna be Bill After Tom using him. Sorry my english. Long ago dont write it.
Date: 06/03/20 10:59 pm Title: 25
Yeah just Wow is all i can say. 👀
Date: 06/03/20 02:35 pm Title: 25
Holy moly. This was wonderful and hot. You are definitely very very capable of writing smut!
Date: 06/03/20 06:03 am Title: 25
Jesus, you'd never know that you're not comfortable writing smut. Aside from the obvious... whoa... I really like how in character they remained through this whole thing! I love strong, commanding Tom, like, you have no idea. I need ten, please. Well done, and I'm so glad you managed to sort out the issues you were having. Can't wait to see where you take this next
Date: 05/25/20 01:21 am Title: 24
Oh no Bill is a mouse with lion :(. This is Great!
Author's Response: Oh, I like that metaphor, I think it's pretty accurate! Thank you lovely and the next chapter is up! < 3
Date: 05/21/20 05:05 pm Title: 24
great chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is up! < 3