Date: 03/30/16 06:38 am Title: Guilty
I read this chapter yesterday, but I finished the reading pretty late and honestly I had no idea, what I should write in the comment, co I decided to sleep on it and read it again, when it's daytime.
Ten points for Tom, that he went to apologize to Bill. That was a really smart move, but then he kinda scared me, how he talk about Bill with the G's. It sounded like he was obsessed with Bill. I hope that he will let all the the wise words into his head and think about the good sides he could show to Bill, like bringing him something sweet, invite him somwhere and stuff but without any ulterior motives.
Bill and Axel, well, I can definitely feel, that it's not what it used to be, but I'm still kind of disappointed that Bill is still living in this mess and doing stuff with Axel, but the good thing is, that Axel finally realized that it would be better to let Bill go and when Bill decides, that he's ready to let go a find the love somewhere else, Axel isn't going to try and make it harder for Bill by convincing him, that he loves him and that this could work, if they both wanted it.
I hope that this chapter was really important for the next chapters, because it made me feel a little bit miserable.
But still, thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: It's sometimes good to sleep on it and think it in the morning! :D Yes well. I don't know if Tom is actually obsessed with Bill (perhaps a little), but it isn't the first time that someone wants to keep someone to themselves even if that person wasn't theirs. :D People want to own other people no matter how good we are or how well we know that we can't. :D Yes you are right! He could invite him somewhere perhaps just as friends and show him that he's there for him in a way that Axel isn't. Yes I think it was long overdue for Axel to realize that Bill won't be happy with him in the long run. Yes well this chapter does have some meaning. In the next one you probably realize what. You're very welcome for the update and thank you for your awesome review! :D
Date: 03/30/16 12:54 am Title: Guilty
Omg, I'm dying here! I don't want to stop reading...
Author's Response: Aww, don't die! :D You'll get more next week! :D
Date: 03/29/16 06:09 pm Title: Guilty
I don't feel like writing a long review this time, I don't feel very well :$ But you writing style was great again, and like always, I can't wait for Bill to leave Axel.
Author's Response: Aww... That sucks :( I hope you'll feel better soon! Thank you very much! You'll see what happens ;) And thank you for leaving a review even though you're not feeling well!
Date: 03/29/16 04:41 pm Title: Prologue
What bothers me (as I'm sure you already know) is Axels attitude to his new thoughts. Like, if he already knows that Bill is hurting being the side hoe and that he is ready to let him (Bill) go, then why not let him? Why that whole "I will let him go when he says he wants to go", like dude, if you aren't gonna let him go when/if he tells you it over, then it's kidnapping! What bothers me greatly is that he sees himself as bloody righteous because he's giving Bill a basic right like letting him fucking go if he wants to! Why not just break it off? Why?
Still love your shit, but damn your characters work me up sometimes, like fucking damn :)
Author's Response: Yes he knows he should let Bill go, but it doesn't mean he wants to. He wants to keep the last moments to himself, he wants to remember Bill and when Bill decides to leave him, he won't chase after him. It's not like he would've kidnapped Bill before if Bill had decided to leave, he probably would've talked him into staying. He's a very smooth talker when he wants to be and the difference between the old Axel and this new Axel is that the new one won't make Bill stay with his words even if he knows he could do it. :D And it's easier to let someone go when they want it, than to chase them away when you'd want to do nothing more than keep them next to you. :D Haha. I love it that you get so worked up by my story! It's super awesome! :D Just wait 'till you read the next chapter ;)
Date: 03/29/16 03:13 pm Title: Guilty
Okay, so Axel, maaaaybe, got some good points in my eyes. But only a little. We will see if he was serious when Bill really decide to leave him...
Also, Gīs had a great idea! Tom should show Bill his good sides and also reasons, why he should choose him. I canīt wait for his efforts! :)
Author's Response: Yes we will see. :D Yes the G's are good friends and they were totally right. Tom shouldn't just tell him that he's better, he should show it, since action speak louder than words. :D
Date: 03/23/16 11:01 am Title: Your face is haunting me
There were so many things revealed in this chapter that I don't even know, where to start. But first of all, shout out to Tom for snooping around and finding all the massages in Axel's phone, because otherwise Bill would be still trying to swim in this, although he's rather drowning that swimming. This way things might change.
I was very surprised of the way they've met. I was thinking about big things and it was that simple. I hope Bill's gonna come to his senses ASAP. I'm not saing he should jump right into Tom's arms, but he should end this mess.
Thanks for the update :)
Author's Response: Yeah it was good that Tom snooped around a bit :D yes well it wasn't a major thing for Bill or anyone else but to Tom it was a turningpoint in his life :D sometimes simple is all you need. Thank you for leaving a comment and I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters as well! :D
Date: 03/23/16 04:03 am Title: Your face is haunting me
Is Axel really so dense, or he truly believes what he says? Tomīs words were right and he should listen to him.
And 15 years old Tom is so cute! I didnīt realize until now that he is so much younger than Bill...
Canīt wait for the next tuesday, then... :D
Author's Response: You'll find out later if Axel is that dense XD yeah Tom is a few years younger than Bill :D thanks for reviewing!:D
Date: 03/23/16 02:45 am Title: Your face is haunting me
O.O
WOW!
Author's Response: I hope that's a good 'wow'! :D thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03/22/16 10:54 pm Title: Your face is haunting me
Ugh im starting to hate Axel .. Looove this chapter can't wait till Tom meet up again with Bill
Author's Response: Aww. Perhaps you won't hate him for long ;) we'll see. Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters too! :D
Date: 03/22/16 06:11 pm Title: Your face is haunting me
Tom used the right words to Axel, it just is the truth, if Axel would only listen, but no, he wants to stay this selfish, if he looks at Bill he should see that Bill is unhappy, but no, he rather seems to think about himself and not about Bill.
And about the way Tom and Bill met, just wow. I'm sure that Bill still remembers that moment, he just never knew how the person was called, so Tom introducing himself didn't help, and while Tom was so you back then, only fifteen, his face must've become more manly now, so it just might be heart for Bill to reconize him.
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Yes it might be the truth, but there's always two sides to a coin. Yes, I think that way too! Bill just can't place Tom 'cause it was such a long time ago. Thank you! I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters as well! :D
Date: 03/19/16 02:33 am Title: We're not broken just bent
More more more!
Author's Response: You'll get more in a few days! :DD
Date: 03/17/16 04:43 pm Title: We're not broken just bent
Ugh. stupid thing cut my review.
What I meant to say. It's probably because of everything that's happened and he's not just into it.
I can't say that I hate Axel. I just don't like him, I think he's a selfish coward. But for now I think I'll just settle for disliking him.
Also, can't wait to find out more about Tom and Axel's relationship and see how that will go. I bet Axel is going to confront him now that he knows he's been talking to Bill.
And no, Bill, you're not a whore. You just fell in love with the wrong man, that's all. It'll all work out once you get together with Tom *grins*
Loving this story!
Author's Response: Oh that's so annoying!! It has happened to me so many times! It's frustrating!!! :D Yes, you're right. I think Bill's head was filled up with too many thoughts and he couldn't be there mentally. Haha! Yeah, I take dislike over hate any day! XD Well, you'll find out what happens between Tom and Axel in the next chapter! Haha, awww yeah! That was so good XD "It'll all work out once you get together with Tom" XDD Thank you soooo much! I'm happy to hear that! :D
Date: 03/17/16 04:41 pm Title: We're not broken just bent
I agree with Tom that he kinda rushed things with Bill. But hopefully, they can work it out :D I ship those two!
I kinda felt like... super annoyed with Bill when he was all "I cheated on Axel"... So Axel can cheat on you with his wife and on his wife with you but you can't kiss someone else? I know being faithful is important in a relationship but what Axel and Bill have is NOT a relationship.... Not when they can't be together all the time, and not when they only meet whenever it works for Axel.
So Bill didn't enjoy the sex... Well maybe because of everything that happened, you know, he's not really there?
Author's Response: Yes Tom did kinda rush things a bit too much. We'll there will be Tom/Bill stuff later (obviously, 'cause it's the main pairing). Yes it is kinda weird situation, since like Tom said that Axel cheats on Bill with his wife and his wife with Bill, so technically Bill didn't do anything wrong. But it's in persons head what's cheating and what isn't and in Bill's head he did wrong. There's no place for logic when it's something he feels. :D Yes well, you're totally right! Bill wasn't really there so it's not that surprising. :D Thanks for your review! :DD
Date: 03/16/16 08:22 am Title: We're not broken just bent
I must admit that Tom disappointed me a little bit with his big selfconfidence... He is a little different than I've thought he will be... Yes, he said that he regrets his forwardness and that is good, but he has to do more if he wants I forgive him! :D
And about Axel...I have no more words for him...
Author's Response: Yes! I'm so glad you see that! Tom is a great guy but he has flaws too! :D And thinking before acting is one of his flaws :D Haha, well. Axel has his flaws too, but he has good sides as well. :D Thanks for your review!
Date: 03/16/16 07:57 am Title: We're not broken just bent
First of all I'm happy for such an early uptade. Thank you very much! :)
Okay. Good thing is, that Tom knows he messed up big time and that there's big chance that he will never ever get so close to Bill as he did. I wonder how he knows Bill anyway, when he said that he's been crushing on him for so many years. So many questions and no answers yet.
Axel, on the other hand, was a nightmare. He totally ruined everything even when he probably ment it well. But after having rough, weird, emotionless sex, he gave him money for the cab and so he can pay for the minibar or whatever. It made ME feel like a cheap whore and I was just reading it. I felt so bad for Bill. I nearly started crying, reading, how Bill cries. This mess has to end right here and now and I hope that after this unsatisfying sex experience, Bill knows it, too, so God help him, if he meets Axel next week in that motel again and does stuff with him! :D
Looking forward to next chapter! :)
Author's Response: Oh you're very welcome! I kinda owed it to you guys, since it took such a long while for me to add the previous chapter :D Yes Tom did mess up, but it is a good thing that he realizes it! :D And you'll finally get the answer to the question where Tom knows Bill in the next chapter! :D Haha yes Axel didn't mean it that way, but perhaps it wasn't such a good idea to give Bill money after sex. He probably just thought he was doing the responsible thing by paying Bill so he wouldn't have to get home in a buss or something like that while drunk, but it did kinda backfire on his face. Or Bill's face? O.o Anywhoo. You'll find out what happeeeeens in the next chapter! :D Thanks for your review!! :D
Date: 03/16/16 06:49 am Title: We're not broken just bent
I hope this was the last written sex scene, I mean between Axel and Bill, I really am graving for the future sex scenes between Tom and Bill :$ And about Axel, he should just be faithful to his wife or should choose Bill, but he will never do, so he should just go for his wife, I know he loves Bill, but the days they meet it's all sex or they flight, that's not a relationship. Bill really needs to grow some balls because he's not happy with all of this, that he feels like a whore is even worse, he really should realize that Tom is way better than this. And if he doesn't I will kill Axel in his sleep, because when he's dead Bill wouldn't be stuck in this unhappy relationship, because that's what this is. So, Tom already knows Bill when he was 15? That means that he has all the right to have Bill, because he knew Bill before Axel did XD But Why does Bill not know Tom from back then? Did he just not notice Tom, or is there something else, something bigger? I'm so curious. I can't wait for the next chapter. Great chapter :) And I'm already very excited for the chapter in which Bill will be in a happy relationship with Tom, he deserves that.
Author's Response: I can't say if it is or isn't. :D You'll find out. You're absolutely right! It isn't about love anymore. It's about sex, and that isn't a relationship. But sometimes it's hard to see the truth. Haha :D Don't go killing my characters! XD You'll find out how Tom met Bill in the next chapter so just be patient! Ah, there's so much you said in this review, but I just can't answer everything, 'cause I don't wanna give any spoilers :P So I'm just gonna thank you for your comment, it was awesome and I'm really sorry, but you gotta wait a bit to get answers to all of your questions! Thanks so much! I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters too! :D
Date: 03/15/16 08:17 pm Title: We're not broken just bent
Oh come on Bill Wake up! Leave Axel! He is no good for you. He is the worst! :( :(
Author's Response: Awww. Though I don't think Axel is the worst, I understand why you think that. I hope you enjoyed this chapter! :D
Date: 03/14/16 06:52 pm Title: Just give me a reason to keep my heart beating
Axel was so mean, Bill shouldn't want to be with him anymore, I think to me a boyfriend who could give me all is way better than a married one. And I'm very glad Tom called Bill, and yeah, Tom's right, he the better option :D Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Axel was super mean, you're right about that. Of course to anyone a boyfriend who can give them all his time is better than a married man, but sometimes the heart wants what it wants and unfortunately reason doesn't work with it. Tom is a better option, but Bill is hung up on Axel. Thank you! I'm about to add the next chapter like I promised so go check it out! ;)
Date: 03/14/16 08:10 am Title: Just give me a reason to keep my heart beating
I feel like everything in this chapter went horribly wrong. :( Firstly, I didn't exactly hate Axel until now. He went really low by saing such things to Bill. That was just terrible. He turned out to be a real asshole, or maybe he was all the time, but managed to become really good actor to fool not only Bill, but some of us as well.
And Tom. In my opinion he just ruined everything. He shouldn't have been so forward with Bill. He shouldn't have said that he's better than someone else, he shouldn't have tried to convince Bill that he's the better option and definitelly shouldn't have kissed him in the first place. That was just the worst timing ever! He should have waited until Bill sorts everything out with Axel, until he's capable to start new relationship with someone else and than maybe try to win him. I'm sure, that if Tom came to the bar, where Bill works, couple times, asked, how he's doing, if he needed help with something, Bill would fall for him sooner, that he would think, but with things like this, I feel like Bill is gonna want to be as far from the whole family of Axel's as possible including Tom.
The only thing I'm glad happend is that Bill was able to build up the courage and confronted Axel about everything, but other than that, I'm very disappointed with both brother's behaviour.
Thanks for the update. :)
Author's Response: Well. Axel did act badly, but I don't think it should define his entire personality. Yes he said really cruel stuff he shouldn't have and to a person who's always been there for him, so it does make him really mean. But sometimes people say mean shit when they're upset and not thinking. Yes Tom shouldn't have been so forward with Bill! Yes you're so right! But our Tom isn't that smart XDD Yes well, they are brothers (Tom and Axel) so obviously they both have the same problem; they don't think before they act :D But yeah. Thanks for your awesome comment and you're very welcome for the update! :DD I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters too! :D
Date: 03/14/16 12:37 am Title: Just give me a reason to keep my heart beating
think, that Tom gave him very good answers and reasonable words, bud at the end he royally messed it up :D Maybe he should wait a little bit before start hitting on him...
But I'm soo happy of Axel nervous breakdown! Finally he showed his true himself!
Poor Bill, though.
Again, I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Yes, he did kinda mess it up didn't he? :D Tom definitely should've waited a while before hitting on Bill :DD I don't think that's his true self, I just think it's a part of his personality he doesn't really care much about, but it's not his true self. We all have our dark sides and Axel's dark side is really mean. But yes, poor Bill indeed :P Thanks! I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters as well! :D