Date: 01/30/16 06:24 pm Title: Fix You
Bushido is so annoying, the only good thing about him liking Bill is that his friend didn't beat Bill up for protecting Tom :$ It's a shame that Tom's not writing those letters :$ But poor Tom, he seems to have a hard time in school. :( Great chapter :)
Date: 01/27/16 05:44 pm Title: Be Your Everything
Bill's right, it is easier to talk to a stranger :) And I still love Tom, I don't know why, because we didn't see much about him yet, but I do already love him xD And poor Bill, only thinking about his ex already brings him to tears :( I'm almost sure that she isn't worth his tears though. Great chapter :)
Date: 01/24/16 05:28 pm Title: The Light Behind Your Eyes
I wouldn't date Bushido either, I mean, come on, all those things he's giving Bill, it's just too much, no, to me that's not the way to win my heart xD And Tom, oh God, he's such a cute and shy guy, and even though we haven't really heard much of him because of his shyness I already love him :) And I wonder who browneyes is. Great chapter :)
Date: 01/23/16 06:02 pm Title: Save You
Great first chapter :) I'm very curious what the rest of this story will bring :)
Date: 01/23/16 10:56 am Title: Save You
I like the idea of the story. It's cute and not an 'Youseeallday-Idea. I also like your writingstyle.
But to be honest, I wont continue with reading, till the story is finished. I looked into your profil and could see, that you have storys with great ideas, but non of them is finished. It dont makes sense to read a story that will not be finished. I don't mean that you wont finish it, but the risk is big, and I dont want to love a story, that will be abandoned :(