Date: 02/10/16 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 5
I canīt figure out what happened to them, but Iīm very curious to find out!!!
Author's Response: Haha I am glad you can't I wanted to keep it interesting. Evil me *hrm*
Date: 02/09/16 02:30 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh wow. It's perfect !
A lot of answers but a lot of new questions too. I like Tom's psychologist, er character is... Soothing. You described it very well, even the reader can feel it.
For Tom's memories, well yes it's strange... Possible, like a kind of amnesia, but then why the hell bill too ? I mean, twins share a lot of things, but not THAT much XD
I can't wait to see more. GG and good luck for your new work !
Author's Response: Hello dear and thank you for your lovely and sweet review! I am so happy you liked the turn of events. Yes I worked quiet a lot on the psychologists character because I tried to imagine what kind of person she would have to be for Tom to trust her and open up given the guarded lifestyle and all the secrets. I can give you one spoiler and say the psychologist is right: the source of the twins problems lies in the lost memories. But the rest you have to find out by reading. New chapter will hopefully be up tonight or tomorrow. rnXO
Date: 02/08/16 06:02 pm Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Good morning and thank you!
Date: 02/08/16 02:23 pm Title: Chapter 4
Beautiful turn out...
Author's Response: Thank you my dear. I really hoped the readers like the original plot because so many ppl guessed it was the little boys who influenced Tom, which is really a cute idea.
Date: 02/03/16 03:04 pm Title: Chapter 3
yes, you should keep writing this! I am reading and I like it very much...
Author's Response: I am happy to hear that and I will keep on writing, honestly I always have a hard time abandoning a story. I always feel like the characters and the readers deserve closure :-)
Date: 02/02/16 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 3
Keep going! It's so interesting that I'm hooked
Author's Response: thank you! New chapter will be up tonight and sorry for the long wait
Date: 01/28/16 12:57 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, not obsessive, possessive 😉
Date: 01/28/16 12:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please continue! I read your story again to find out who's the mysterious person and I think it's the little fan boy 😉 I hope Tom won't hurt Bill and Bill won't fuck it up by being obsessive!
You are a very talented writer!
Author's Response: Haha thats a good guess :-) but it runs a little deeper than that actually. But I like it, that could have worked as well. thanks for reading and reviewing, that makes writing this so worth it. And you make me blush- thanks so much for the compliment. <3
Date: 01/28/16 07:30 am Title: Chapter 3
This is an awesome story. Keep writing because I want to know how this turns out.
I'm guessing it was the small twin boys that gave Tom advice that spurred this change in attitude?
Author's Response: Hellooo its actually funny because you are not the only one guessing that. Maybe I should consider it haha. I am glad you like this story and thanks for leaving a review, that means a lot
Date: 01/28/16 07:16 am Title: Chapter 1
What happened to chapter 3? It's missing. Did it not upload right?
Author's Response: thanks for bringing my attention to the faulty chapter, it seems chapter two uploaded itself twice what caused the following chapter to be named chapter 4. Now everything is corrected- as for now there are 3 chapters so don't worry you didn't miss anything.
Date: 01/27/16 10:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is great, I'm really enjoying this story. I hope Tom doesn't change his mind and I hope we find out who gave him the advice.
Author's Response: Hello there, I promise that you all find out what happend to Tom in the next couple of chapters. Bill is a little nosy so he will find out eventually :-)
Date: 01/27/16 06:08 pm Title: Chapter 3
Yes, you really need to keep this going, because I'm reading :) I'm so happy that Tom and Bill get along again. I just hope that Tom will not change his behaviour back to what it was, because that will break Bill's heart for sure :( Great chapter :)
Author's Response: Hello, thanks for keeping on reading, then I gadly continue this story. Yes Bill has put himself at risk for heaetbreak he is so trusting even though he has no reason to. But Tom isnt a bad guy, he is just an angry teenager.
Date: 01/27/16 04:10 pm Title: Chapter 3
These are too pleasant and nice changes and I wonder what or who is behind all of it. I hope Tom is serious and isn't going to hurt Bill again...
Author's Response: Hello dear, thanks for being such a loyal reader of my stories. Makes me so happy to read your reviews. Yes there is someone behind this, you'll learn more about that person in the upcoming chapters.
Date: 01/27/16 02:12 pm Title: Chapter 3
Gosh, I started reading your fiction tonight and I read it all in a row XD
It's very well written and managed ! I don't remember I'v already seen a fiction like this one... Sure, fictions were the twins doesn't like each other, but like this in their actual environnment, I don't know, I don't think so. It could actually be real...
I liked it a lot, can't wait to read some more !
Author's Response: Hello dear reader, thanks a lot for a wonderful and sweet review. rnWhen I came up with the idea I checked if there are similar fics out there but couldnt find any (I always do that because I dont want to copy anyone not even by accident) but ofc the possibility exists that someone has already witten somethibg like this. I am so glad that you enjoyed my fic and read it all at once (what a huge compliment- this makes me so happy.) rnrnAnd I totally agree- the more I write it becomes unsetteling because like you say it could be real. Honestly I dont like to entertain that thought because its heartbreaking (and hopefully untrue) . I really wanted to set this fic in their environment because it makes it more interesting. rnrnThanks for reading and reviewing
Date: 01/20/16 03:46 pm Title: Chapter 2
This is all still so terribly sad! The whole time I wanted just to cry and cry ... I feel so sorry for Bill ... But Tom surprised me. It seems that he vas seriously entangled in all those lies and now, the real Tom is slowly appearing!
Author's Response: Yes it is a sad story (dont ask me why I come with these). But I dont think that being lonely and isolated in that business isnt far fetched the twins just have the luxury to have their strong love for each other and their bond to the Gs irl. As for the Tom of this story yes he is mysterious but that is mainly because the story is told from Bills perspective and he doesnt know what Tom thinks or why he acts the way he does
Date: 01/16/16 01:27 pm Title: Chapter 1
poor bill :( i just want to hug him and take all of his pain away. pls update soon?
Author's Response: I hope you liked the update. Your review made me write a little faster knowing someone was waiting for this. Yes even writing it makes me sad, poor Bill he is so alone and scared.
Date: 01/13/16 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Poor Bill :( It must hurt when your brother doesn't seem to care about you. I wonder why Tom acts the way he does, I mean in the end he's nice, and people can't really see them at that moment, right? Great first chapter :)
Author's Response: Good morning, yes poor Bill (the poor man he always is in trouble of some kind in my stories). He must be the loneliest person in the world, everyone thinks he has everything when irl he hasnt even got someone who cares for him. Very observant of you, yes at the final moment nobody can see them. Unfortunately Bill is asleep so he doesnt notice Tom being nice to him. To not spoil to much but they have built such a house of cards that it is really not easy to distinguish what is a lie and what is the truth for both of them.
Date: 01/13/16 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great start, but also so, so sad... :(
Author's Response: Hello dear, oh yes it totally is. The idea just popped up in my head and well it makes for a decent story but it would be heartbreaking if it was true. I want to emphasis that I dont think anything about them is fake irl, thank God. Thanks for reading despite the sadness. Have a wonderful day!