Date: 01/19/16 06:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow! How did Bill end up as a criminal?
Date: 01/19/16 05:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I wonder what exactly happened to Bill, why he's doing what he's doing now. Did they kidnap him to make this out of him? I'm very curious for more. Great chapter :)
Date: 01/19/16 01:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
I like it so far d84;
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like! I'll try to update soon!
Date: 01/14/16 02:43 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Excellent story! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I'm So glad you liked it! This made my day so much better thank you!
Date: 01/07/16 06:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Just FYI, I think you meant involve, not invalve, in your summary. They're different words with different meanings.
Author's Response: Yes you are right! My bad CX i'm not so good with spelling i will try and fix that! Thanks for letting me know!rn
Date: 01/07/16 05:26 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Wow, 8 years is a long time :( This story sounds very interesting, I already like it :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it! I will be updating soon so please let me know what you think about it!
Date: 01/07/16 05:04 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
Super interesting. I really really wanna know what happened to Bill in all these years where are him and if he is still alive:(
Author's Response: Looks like your gonna have to read the next chapter to find out cx! Thanks for the review I hope you like the next chapter!
Date: 01/07/16 04:21 pm Title: Chapter 1: The Beginning
This is an interesting plot! And the story flows smoother than your previous one so there is noticeable improvement. You have great potential and I'm excited to see where you go with it :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much!